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Pressence vs Sixth Sense
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3-0....K.O. 4-1....K.O. 6 - 10 Lines No D/R or Hate Votes No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 08-06-05 at 03:41 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
Sixth Sense has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-05 03:42 PM.
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Pressence has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-05 03:44 PM.
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calls 6th sense just to look in mirror when i make him bleed cerebral
I'll leave him frozen down below,then maybe he'd say "ICY dead people" actually says in his profile that his tellin his occupation is prohibited*** well spitten his rhymes should be ill-eagle,like birds being exhibited he 20 years old,with nothing but some false hopes,it's undestandable sixth carreer will neva dead-on-ate(detonate)like some nurished canibals crew named undestructable emcees,but made to be broken like war-sheilds but all em gainst me,get diss-truck(destruct) like I was battlin four-wheels reps YAYO and 50 in sig,& wit 5000 posts,he still trynin to spawn-a-vet fits him well too,cause all he do is so sit-duck(seduct) emcees on the net *** on his profile...where it says occupation....he puts...it's illegal. |
This guy acting like he any good, but he needs to learn a lesson
Cuz this guy swear he can rap but all he does is wrap his presents(pressence) And really P actually wanted to battle, but left the site in a hurry Got some lines, but they played out quicker then those damn furby’s Keep on thinking that u are going to win but ull never get The Merk Cuz the only TM u see is when u put a ™ on top of ur weak ass verse -------------------------------------- EXPLANATIONS 1st- he thinks he any good at rap but all he wraps is his pressence <{his name} presents...... 2nd-furbys were played out in a hurry just like the punches he gon bring.....lol.....and he left the RV....fast Quote:
3rd- TM is the merk and the only way he'll see that if he puts TM that stands for trademark on his verse...... |
there ya go.,.......just cause I'm new don't mean I suck....hopefull this teach you to watch ya mouth....
now.....efecx........ |
man stfu u act like that was good some aight punches but shit aint funny or nuthin man....but wuteva......i forgot that the limit was ten lines ohhhhh well......lol....i guess ill get u next time bitch......uppin for votes.......
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^^dawg...off cource they not gonna be funny to you....and are you admitting you lost?
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This was feedback posted for Sixth Sense
Awful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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nah im just sayin i shulda gone more lines though.......but really it aint funny |
^^^w/e....let the voters decide who's funnier...it looks bright for me based on that CataclyzM-i-C s feedback.
and you made the rules yourself...so don't make that lame excuse of not enough lines. |
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im not u fucker.....im just saying i 4got that i put 6-10 lines cuz i coulda done more and who the hell is CataclyzM-i-C plz he a fucking newb and d/r for u man...plz....just stfu |
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how is he my d/r when I'm new.Face it....be a man...if it was the other way...I wouldn't complain... but w/e....let the votes come in.... |
whooaaa whoaaaa whoaa...
I MEANT THE BATTLE IN GENERAL WAS AWFUL... myyyyy faultttttt....i shudnt have put that in sixth's feedback MYYYYY FAULTTTTT |
^^^^want me to merk you?Then we'd see who's awful.....faggot.
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Voted For: Sixth Sense
Nothing vs This guy acting like he any good, but he needs to learn a lesson Cuz this guy swear he can rap but all he does is wrap his presents(pressence) this battle was weak ya pressence dont use so much vocab duke this aint no open mic .... throw punches...and dont explain every got damn thang..i started 2 vote 4 u until u did a fuckin tutorial on every got damn Closer....Fuck Go look at some of my battles...learn a punch i'll mentor u if u need it....damn Sixth..u had 1 punch....it sucked.. but...u got the win cuz ya comp didnt say shit Um Ya... *Nuff Said* Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Sixth Sense
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Voted For: Sixth Sense
Sixth Sense nice work better than your last battle really felt this dunno y but jus thought it alll came together had some good punchs lol opener good work u hadf good ideas n concepts ...overall better flow an better structure Pressence good verse but work on your personals and punches u had ok ideas on punches but they didnt connect elevate an u will be better |
aight uppin this for more votes 1 more and its a k.o. cmon now.........
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Voted For: Pressence
Im Gonna Have To Give It To Pressance... I Didnt Really Like Either Verse All That Much Though... Pres Would Get Boring But Then Cetch Up With Something That Was Kinda Just Like "Ooh Wow"... Sixth, You Shit Just Kinda Bored Me... And You Had The Punches But They Were Weak... So Ya, Im Gonna Give It To Pres... Punches/Wordplay: Pres Flow: Sixth Opener: Pres Closer: Pres *Please Return The Favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...229#post2342229 .One. |
This was feedback posted for Pressence
if i had enough posts id vote for u.....such high standards to vote when u have a whack verse from six sence...u merked him in my eyes
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA u let me kno when u wanna get embarrassed ! |
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bump.....c'mon why everyone sleeping?
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Voted For: Pressence
aight this was one sided man pressense won this one easily he had some killer punches. his structure was good. he used personals that would make sixth sene leave the fucking site. he had so killer wordplay. his verse was very creative because of the wordplay hes used shit his overall flow was better. sixth sense u could have came much harder u dropped 6 wack ass lines and called this a battle this was an ass beating to me dawg. thought u was much better than that and i have seen much better but next time dont come with that bull shit vote:pressense |
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This was feedback posted for Pressence
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This was feedback posted for Sixth Sense
man u merked this cat this guy pressence sucks.......lol..........
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^^fukin hispanic..
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Voted For: Pressence
Sixth Sense - Hard to understand bro... I didn't get alot of shit you said, no punches no personals like no nothing really..... I didn't like it at all. I bet you could do alot better next time. Pressence - Nice personals punches i understood everything pretty good wordplay, Did decent i liked it , flow was alright nothin to tight though enough to beat the other guy good job. v/Pressence RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=207681 |
This was feedback posted for Pressence
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