Defined vs Kid Chaos
 

Battle Rules:

2-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

blind spit

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-05 at 02:26 AM

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Kid Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 01:58 AM.

Defined has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 02:00 AM.

welcome to the system were kids like u i 'pist-em'
.......flipped like a rollercoaster mind in a twirl wishin i 'fist-em'*
distracted by lyrical bindings rapped around ur 'vocal-cords'
.......kid chaos is rite the chaos he has started leaves him in the 'local-morgs'
post ur verse quick then flee to another 'country'
.......iraq? maybe? cuz ur better to survive those bombs then this battle 'lyrically'
u feel the shivers run ur spine the hair on ur neck 'stands-up'
.......this kids worse then skateboarders at the 'toddler vans-cup'**
u feel the sleepyness i start the sneekyness to ur 'death'
.......ud have a better chance for another breath if u were addicted to 'meth'
release the disease threw the venom thats being 'spit'
.......u no the dumb white girls that die first in scary movies?....well this kids got there 'wit'


*wishin i would just knock him out so the pain would stop
**the toddler vans-cup is skateboarding for the very young wen they suck really bad

im lauchin grenades-in-text and killin this lame defect//
im sendin miniture punches in effect and they could destroy his best//
anhilating you with my deadly verses//
mutilating you without threats or curses//
"RV he's hurt! quick call the nurses!"//
my lines kill this prick and block his hits//
its time to shrink his shit and end the career of this mis-fit//
punches hit you like bricks to your brain//
you wont get by just playin sorry tricks in this game//
my rhymes are poison and they take you out slow//
if this wasn't blind you woul scream "i dont wanna go!"//
i feed on fear and i hear your heart beatin fast//
your end is near, im not just repeating a cliche from the past//
battlin this fool should be considered a crime//
i dont want to brag the fool was done at line nine//

Voted For: Defined

v/Defined

Kid chaos- you had ok lyrics but they didn't make sense and there wasn't really any major punches that hit hard. But you still had some good punches but you were out rapped in the end.

Defined- Good wordplay and punches. They were quite funny aswell.

'release the disease threw the venom thats being 'spit'
.......u no the dumb white girls that die first in scary movies?....well this kids got there'

Best line by far, it was quite funny and had good lyrics.

So my vote is Defined.

And also please vote in one of my battles in my signiture.

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Voted For: Kid Chaos



im lauchin grenades-in-text and killin this lame defect//
im sendin miniture punches in effect and they could destroy his best//
anhilating you with my deadly verses//
mutilating you without threats or curses//
"RV he's hurt! quick call the nurses!"//
my lines kill this prick and block his hits//

is probally the best part outta this verse from chaos.
kids structure is good, n i was able to flow straight on it with the "patiently waitin" instrumental im listining to,
defined, u had some good punch's in there, but i didnt pick up on much flow,
my vote goes to k/c

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Voted For: Kid Chaos

ma vote Kid Chaos way better structure to kid chaos
KC had alil bit betta flow den defined,both had nice punches
wordplay really dont c much from either,not seein da muti's,

but in ma opion i think dis one goes to Kid Chaos

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Voted For: Kid Chaos

i voted for kid chaos cuz he had better punches and his structure was easier to read.....and had a better flow......v/kid chaos

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uppin for more votez everyone
com on lets finish this battle already

please can yall vote on disshit lets get it closed wit some Explained votes thanks

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Voted For: Kid Chaos

hell yeah..kid had more vocabs mayne...his punches were tighter and his verse had a better flow ....in a way...the only thinis you gatta make ur lines more of the same length and quit puttin those slashes....kid's rhymin scheme was quite decent...i didnt see any personals cos this was a blind spit but he sure had this battle at hand...as for the other dude..he had u on structure bruh...but he just didnt manipulate so well with mets and punches...yeah he had some gd stuff but just didnt package the gift well...so with this i said chaos gets this..keep it u both