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Kid Chaos 08-04-05 04:21 AM

Reflekt vs Kid Chaos
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-07-05 at 04:21 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 08-04-05 04:40 AM

Kid Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 04:40 AM.

Kid Chaos 08-04-05 04:59 AM

the big gun goes BOOM i say that so your small mind understands your own death//
evident doom, i sympisize fo yo gloom its a hard time winning when yours skillz are as good as yo low rep//
my rhymes are frantic, im makin sure you die slow//
the petty theatrics you call rhyming is the reason you gettin owned hoe//
you supposed to be hardcore? do your "job" whore im waiting//
my punches leave you bloody like a violence-and-gore game rating//
you not really a rapper your just roll playing//
im done saying that won to avoid the hating, but ill still play my game of MC slaying//
if your the voice of god then im satan's diciple in a mask//
unless your a fraud the bibles writings should be recycled and da jesus plays re-cast//

System 08-04-05 05:00 AM

Reflekt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 05:00 AM.

Reflekt 08-04-05 06:43 AM

son you about as much of a gangster as a movie star actor
cant stand this bastard..i'll shove his first name down his throat backwards
the only 'chaos' that we see is the lyrical content of ya verse
somebody better hold me back before i put this 'kid' in a hearst
i sit on faggots like kid chaos..so we'll call him a couch
and since your from georgia you should be used to going down
you could talk all you want..but i swear i never heard nothing
atlanta falcons?..thats ok cause im used to going bird hunting

all lines are played off his name or his hometown

Kid Chaos 08-04-05 06:47 AM

uppin for votes people lets get the winna ov dis battle declared

Static 08-04-05 06:50 AM

Voted For: Reflekt

okay ma vote goes to reflekt cuz mostly all of kid chaos lines were weak and if you read chaos stuff you can see dat his stuff dont rhyme his punches was weak to me and not dat good of a flow,

but on the other hand reflekt gets ma vote because his verse was jus overall better den kid chaos's verse

Reflekt 08-04-05 06:58 AM

yeah yeah.............................................

Kid Chaos 08-04-05 07:01 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyrical Point
Voted For: Reflekt

if you read chaos stuff you can see dat his stuff dont rhyme



what tha fuck....wonda if dis cat can define....ah nvm ima leave it alone

uppin for votes

KempoMRK 08-04-05 08:07 AM

Voted For: Kid Chaos

Reflekt had some weak personals which didn't hit very hard, where as Kid Chaos had decent multi's and a couple of creative punches. So vote for Kid Chaos as he brought some creativity and decent rhyming.

Static 08-04-05 09:01 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Kid Chaos
what tha fuck....wonda if dis cat can define....ah nvm ima leave it alone

uppin for votes


no hate manye but yo last 2 bars dey didnt rhyme

Static 08-04-05 09:03 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyrical Point
no hate manye but yo last 2 bars dey didnt rhyme


shit ma bad manye dey do i jus read yo stuff wrong fix yo structure manye
itz maken it seem like you tryna rhyme two different things

Rile1 08-04-05 11:29 AM

Voted For: Reflekt

Kid Chaos man ur structure is horrible dude. Ur punches iddnt flow well which is really bad too. Once u read a couple battles and practice ya punches u will be alright though. Reflekt couch an down dont rhyme lol, but some of ur punhes were pretty good like ur closer was sorta nice. Kepp at it u guys, but Reflekt took this with better punches and structure......please vote on my battles in my sig

taz 08-04-05 11:37 AM

Voted For: Kid Chaos

this was a pretty whack battle on both parts, only reason why i vote for you is becuz ur punches and vocab were better......but ur structure was hella bad.....work on it other than that you won by far

Reflekt 08-04-05 01:04 PM

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Kid Chaos 08-04-05 01:23 PM

right...lmao
uppin for more votes to end this

Reflekt 08-04-05 08:40 PM

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UNF 08-04-05 08:46 PM

Voted For: Reflekt


Refleckt
Nice Shit Man Had Some Good Punches Here multi's Was Cool Too Dawg, Rhyme Scheme Was Meh Not To Good But It's All Good Personals Nice Man Kileld Em In This Battle You Wordplay Nice Meta's Meh Some Okay Man. Over All You Killed It Here

KC
Meh Not To Good Man You Suck Lols No Hate Yo Punches Was Basic Yo No Personals Just Phony Shits Vocabulary Was Garbage Here Nothing Special Here Man Try And Elevate Multi's Meh None Also No Meta's Which Is Sad You Rhyme Scheme Was Shitty To Man

Vote-Refleckt

AITZ 08-04-05 10:50 PM

Voted For: Kid Chaos

Reflext
the only 'chaos' that we see is the lyrical content of ya verse
^^givin him props man^^
reflext u didnt come anywhere near as hard as chaos
Kid Chaos
my rhymes are frantic, im makin sure you die slow//
the petty theatrics you call rhyming is the reason you gettin owned hoe//
you supposed to be hardcore? do your "job" whore im waiting//
my punches leave you bloody like a violence-and-gore game rating//
^^ nice punches dude^^ keep it up

Reflekt 08-04-05 10:53 PM

AITZ u suck...u a ho...u got no clue what battling is about..thats why your record is 3-10.....

Ysdat 08-04-05 10:58 PM

Voted For: Reflekt

reflekt

damn, nice punches... the shove his dik down throat punch is good play on hisname.

punches hit hard every bar.
closure was solid enough

kid caos- punches arent effective, bars are strectched in places. from opener to closure you didnt really have an effect on it.

vote reflekt

%%%% 08-04-05 10:59 PM

This was feedback posted for Reflekt
 
polz..............................................

Kid Chaos 08-04-05 11:03 PM

uppin for more votes people

oh and it was weak but da last bar was a play off his intro dat said Job-Core

Reflekt 08-05-05 06:09 PM

still waiting on this for more votes...............

noname 08-05-05 06:37 PM

Voted For: Kid Chaos

the big gun goes BOOM i say that so your small mind understands your own death//
evident doom, i sympisize fo yo gloom its a hard time winning when yours skillz are as good as yo low rep//
^^^Weak punch......2/10
my rhymes are frantic, im makin sure you die slow//
the petty theatrics you call rhyming is the reason you gettin owned hoe//
^^^WEAK........2/10
you supposed to be hardcore? do your "job" whore im waiting//
my punches leave you bloody like a violence-and-gore game rating//
^^Not a punch,talking bout yourself whole bar..0/10
you not really a rapper your just roll playing//
im done saying that won to avoid the hating, but ill still play my game of MC slaying//
^^not much of a punch.....1/10
if your the voice of god then im satan's diciple in a mask//
unless your a fraud the bibles writings should be recycled and da jesus plays re-cast//
^^WEak......2/10

Not one dope line.First off....fix your structure up....it was ugly.Ur flow was choppy throughout the whole thing.As for punches...they were even worse.A lot of bars were just talking about yourself.

son you about as much of a gangster as a movie star actor
cant stand this bastard..i'll shove his first name down his throat backwards
^^Not a punch....set-up was uncreative/...0/10
the only 'chaos' that we see is the lyrical content of ya verse
somebody better hold me back before i put this 'kid' in a hearst
^^NOT A PUNCH...0/10
i sit on faggots like kid chaos..so we'll call him a couch
and since your from georgia you should be used to going down
^^A punch...but a weak one..1/10
you could talk all you want..but i swear i never heard nothing
atlanta falcons?..thats ok cause im used to going bird hunting
^^SO wat...go bird hunt...but here at least trwo a punch...0/10

Man....where to begin.OK...you had a better structure than Kid chaos.FLow was also choppy.Wat you really lacked was wordplay and metas.You were stating some shit a lot.Yeah...you had a personal in every bar...but just cause you called him kid in that 4th line doesn;t make it a personal.

Vote-KId Chaos
RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203195

Castro... 08-05-05 11:38 PM

Voted For: Reflekt

ok by seeing the strutcure of you're verse i knew you won y cuz the otehr guy wasnt that good either red both of them and i didnt like them much but you had a good two punches and a few name lines i like the closer and you're openor they was good for chaos learn how to rite text cuz that mad me not wanting to read it but i read it and didnt like it you had no muich of a good verse well overall i think you lost kid chaos it was

i sit on faggots like kid chaos..so we'll call him a couch
and since your from georgia you should be used to going down
you could talk all you want..but i swear i never heard nothing
atlanta falcons?..thats ok cause im used to going bird hunting
vs
nada


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