Blac-Out vs Atticus
 

Aiight, Hopefully I End Up Setting This Right...
Lol I Struggle With This Shit...
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No Hate/Dick/Crew/Ect. Votes...

Uum No Recycling, Biting, Blah...
Common Shit, Im Gonna Bank On You Not Being An Idiot Haha...

8-12 Lines, Good Luck Man...
.One.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-07-05 at 10:11 AM

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Atticus has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 10:17 AM.

Blac-Out has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 10:24 AM.

c'mon Atticus, wen it cums to Rappin, Wigger, ya wack at this
so fuck it, ill jus put the heat in ya mouth, so u can give the mac a kiss
this cats a bitch, fall back fore' i pull out my shank knife
and split ya wig down the middle, so next time u think about battlin me, you'll "Think twice"
this wiggers homo, likes to take pipes, dont even begin lien
fuck wastin a bullet, ill just my pistol swing like wind chimes
im sick, my flow siphillis, this bitch can get hit wit the hammers
and wen it do, ill make ya fuckin wig split like bananas
act slick, ill send a slug through ya lip and ya tooth
and U ugly as shit , i kno Dikes that can get more bitches than you
i kno it aint fair dude, battle agin? bitch i dare you
Act like a G, then ill putta Stitch through ya hair do

E-Z

yea u had sum dope shit too, mine is well b a text battler, good shit,

Voted For: Atticus

win, better punches i liked it a lot blac-out's punches were kinda basic no hate though so my vote is for atticus

no hate,....................................uppin.

Voted For: Atticus

Now... Hows That Kid Plan To Stand Up To His Last Out...
...I Practise Dark Arts,
Your A Dark Artist Tryna Shine At This When Its Blac-Out...
errrr meh..this an aigght personal n wordlat
Dope? Yes, Uum No... I Dont Think So, Ya Signature's Lien'...
...Ya Titles False,
Ya'll, He Blac'd-Out Last Time He Had Dope Signature Lines...
this was nice...creative hit hard
Kid, Are You Retarded? Look At Your Name... Rap How?
...Plain And Simple, Initial It,
This Bitch's "B.O. Is Garenteed To Make Ya'll Cats Blac-Out"...
meh...gave me a chuckle...average
Even Your Crews Weak, Please... You Are Beyond Late...
...Hmm, Sorry B,
But If Raw Is War Your Not Surviving Beyon-Ce(Cena). (Beyonce
wow this closer was wack

c'mon Atticus, wen it cums to Rappin, Wigger, ya wack at this
so fuck it, ill jus put the heat in ya mouth, so u can give the mac a kiss
lyrocs on that gangsta tip...average
this cats a bitch, fall back fore' i pull out my shank knife
and split ya wig down the middle, so next time u think about battlin me, you'll "Think twice"
played more than a figure of speech
this wiggers homo, likes to take pipes, dont even begin lien
fuck wastin a bullet, ill just my pistol swing like wind chimes
wjers tha diss?
im sick, my flow siphillis, this bitch can get hit wit the hammers
and wen it do, ill make ya fuckin wig split like bananas
damn dude...wtf this is poor even 4 a key
act slick, ill send a slug through ya lip and ya tooth
and U ugly as shit , i kno Dikes that can get more bitches than you
decent personal..best bar of drop
i kno it aint fair dude, battle agin? bitch i dare you
Act like a G, then ill putta Stitch through ya hair do
weak ass closer


blac-Out ur drop was weak...cos all ya lines n concepts were played like mothafuckas....Atticus...came wid a more focused creative drop...both of yall came wack...but atticus took it

Dissin Blac.......?...........iightt.................Uppi n................

Voted For: Blac-Out

ighht...

Flow & Structure - Blac...his verse was easier to understand but some barz were still stretched...atticus was all over the place...u was forcin it wayyyy 2 much...idk how u sayin that verse in ur head but it aint clickin in mine !

Punches - Blac...he came alot harder....they was still kinda wack but that "Think Twice" punch was harder then anythin atticus had to spit...atticus that last bar was garbage...u forced it on that n it didnt hit at all !

Metaphors - tie...both of yall had some "OK"? metas...Blac wudda won this catagory but he used that Wig Split shyt twice n played it out UGLYY...dont repeat almost the same punch next time

Multis - NoNe...period !...yall need to add some of them into ur rhymes !

Vote - Blac-Out



yall can return the favor on the battle in my sig...good look

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keep ya head up Atticus, ya shit good..............................

GOod lookin, Uppin...................................

this vote shudnt count...tell strobe cuz
he aint explain a godam thing !!!!!!!!!!!!

Pffft Haha Ok Mayn...
What A Fucking Idiot, I Had 3 Syllable Rhyme Scheme In Almost All My Bars...
Atleast A 2 In Every Single One...
And I Didnt Have A Single Forced Rhyme...

Someone Is Oviously After Some Battle Credits And Posts...
Lol What A Fucking Idiot...
.One.

hahaha why u madd cuz ur shyt wasnt better
please dont make me clown u !

step ur game up b4 u get at me nigga cuz i'll son u

ya i smell it 2...u fuckin pussy...now all of a sudden u dont do text
hahaha what kinda shyt is a topical battle...str8 homo shyt
idk who u think u are but u needa blow it out ya ass bitch n go
think of some topics somewhere muthafucka...like i said...ILL SON U
so stop talkin unless u settin up a battle...bitch

Voted For: Atticus

Blac-Out:

c'mon Atticus, wen it cums to Rappin, Wigger, ya wack at this
so fuck it, ill jus put the heat in ya mouth, so u can give the mac a kiss
^^decent opener 5/10
this cats a bitch, fall back fore' i pull out my shank knife
and split ya wig down the middle, so next time u think about battlin me, you'll "Think twice"
^^stretched as hell you lose points for that 4/10
this wiggers homo, likes to take pipes, dont even begin lien
fuck wastin a bullet, ill just my pistol swing like wind chimes
^^ehh 3/10
im sick, my flow siphillis, this bitch can get hit wit the hammers
and wen it do, ill make ya fuckin wig split like bananas
^^2nd time you said wig split. 4/10
act slick, ill send a slug through ya lip and ya tooth
and U ugly as shit , i kno Dikes that can get more bitches than you
^^little stretched ok bar 4/10
i kno it aint fair dude, battle agin? bitch i dare you
Act like a G, then ill putta Stitch through ya hair do
^^ok 5/10

Overall: 25/60 (42%)


Atticus:

Now... Hows That Kid Plan To Stand Up To His Last Out...
...I Practise Dark Arts,
Your A Dark Artist Tryna Shine At This When Its Blac-Out...
^^decent nameplay ok opener 6/10
Dope? Yes, Uum No... I Dont Think So, Ya Signature's Lien'...
...Ya Titles False,
Ya'll, He Blac'd-Out Last Time He Had Dope Signature Lines...
^^no 3/10
Kid, Are You Retarded? Look At Your Name... Rap How?
...Plain And Simple, Initial It,
This Bitch's "B.O. Is Garenteed To Make Ya'll Cats Blac-Out"...
^^good bar 6/10
Even Your Crews Weak, Please... You Are Beyond Late...
...Hmm, Sorry B,
But If Raw Is War Your Not Surviving Beyon-Ce(Cena). (Beyonce)
^^ok meta decent closer 5/10

Overall: 20/40 (50%)


Vote: Atticus

Voted For: Atticus

Blac-Out

c'mon Atticus, wen it cums to Rappin, Wigger, ya wack at this
so fuck it, ill jus put the heat in ya mouth, so u can give the mac a kiss
^ :nono: at the wigger lolz, decent wordplay, no real punch though 4/10

this cats a bitch, fall back fore' i pull out my shank knife
and split ya wig down the middle, so next time u think about battlin me, you'll "Think twice"
^diggin the last line, nice wordplay formed into a punch 6/10

this wiggers homo, likes to take pipes, dont even begin lien
fuck wastin a bullet, ill just my pistol swing like wind chimes
^ didn't see a punch in this one actually but it was decent bar 4/10

im sick, my flow siphillis, this bitch can get hit wit the hammers
and wen it do, ill make ya fuckin wig split like bananas
^again the wig splitting? don't use shit twice man, self-glorifyin in first line 2/10

act slick, ill send a slug through ya lip and ya tooth
and U ugly as shit , i kno Dikes that can get more bitches than you
^last line was decent personal, first line i didn't like 6/10

i kno it aint fair dude, battle agin? bitch i dare you
Act like a G, then ill putta Stitch through ya hair do
^nah, weak closer 2/10

24/60 - 40%

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Atticus

Now... Hows That Kid Plan To Stand Up To His Last Out...
...I Practise Dark Arts,
Your A Dark Artist Tryna Shine At This When Its Blac-Out...
^coo playing off his name, might have been worded bit differently to hit harder though 6/10

Dope? Yes, Uum No... I Dont Think So, Ya Signature's Lien'...
...Ya Titles False,
Ya'll, He Blac'd-Out Last Time He Had Dope Signature Lines...
^again the blac-out thing, more hardhitting personal than the previous one though 7/10

Kid, Are You Retarded? Look At Your Name... Rap How?
...Plain And Simple, Initial It,
This Bitch's "B.O. Is Garenteed To Make Ya'll Cats Blac-Out"...
^haha, must be my favorite bar, made me laugh, bold personal 8/10

Even Your Crews Weak, Please... You Are Beyond Late...
...Hmm, Sorry B,
But If Raw Is War Your Not Surviving Beyon-Ce(Cena). (Beyonce)
^good wordplay, closed the deal with this one 7/10

28/40 - 70%

Voted For: Atticus

I didn't really like either, but for one, Atticus had personals and not gay jokes about the other's picture. This goes to Atticus, because for one he didn't self-glorify and had some punches. He had some okay personals, nothing really stood out, but he was just better then Blac-out.

Self-glorifying never wins battles, dude.

v/ Atticus