taz vs nirt
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 KO
4-1 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-05-05 at 03:16 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO Removed - Unexplained votes

taz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-05 12:28 AM.

nirt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-05 12:28 AM.

like R.Kelly,you seem-weak,and i know you into seeing a teen-leak
and i'm sure your moms stay be-neat you,like she was a neat freak
in ya veins there should be fear-passing,as i'm on a mission to go queer-blastin
and how strange it is,indeed, that it's only men i see you tear-ass-ing
your shit bores-man,and rhymning words?,well you sure-can't
cause the only twist i see in your lines comes inside your-pants
i shot-borders,while you run around the place playing with hot-forgers
even this thread saw shit coming with your name on it,like bum to mortger


Meh...wateva...keyed....

This cat aint a rapper...he a fat dude on tha couch
You keep my mom out ya lines ill keep my dick out ya moms mouth
He knew to the rv, why this bitch think he can beat me
He had a studder in his brain or lost it completley
When it comes to guys this cat is a real flirt
This is a T.K.O Yall just give the L to nirt
Comen to this battle this cat is paranoid
Cuz he scared to get caught biten like palmerio and steroids

upin for votes ya'll

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uppin yo want to see who wins, suspense is killan me

Goodluck nirt, goodbattle :thumbsup:

^^yeah...gl to you too.........hopefully we'll get some votes tonight..

WELL ima have to see tomma cuz im out like the blackness in micheal jackson peace

This was feedback posted for nirt
 

nirt spanked that ass....ain't gonna vote though....

uppin............................................. ............

Voted For: taz

This cat aint a rapper...he a fat dude on tha couch
You keep my mom out ya lines ill keep my dick out ya moms mouth
- That was a decent punch.. maybe a word to many in the flow of it but its good.


He knew to the rv, why this bitch think he can beat me
He had a studder in his brain or lost it completley
- Pretty choice words.. flows good.. nothing wrong


When it comes to guys this cat is a real flirt
This is a T.K.O Yall just give the L to nirt
- i like the roll of this.. but one thing doesnt have anything to do with the other..


Comen to this battle this cat is paranoid
Cuz he scared to get caught biten like palmerio and steroids
- i cant see past the "eminem" - 8 mile Similarity at this.. "this guy keeps screaming, hes paranoid.. quick some 1 get his ass another steroid" I gotta look down from here

All in All - I liked the word choice.. flow was good, couldve been better but im reading text.. punches.. good enough for a Vote.

OK.....1-0 Taz....................................

This was feedback posted for taz
 

good luck man.. nice verse.. id say you took this one

Voted For: taz

im gunna have to give the win to taz, only cuz his punches hit harder and he threw in some comedy......no hate to you nirt but your lines didnt catch my eye enough.....
v/taz

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thanks peeps, I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR

uppin for feed people, dont sleep on this battle....

Voted For: taz

My vote is for Taz, becuz his verse was more creative his punches were different but still hit hard....little 8 mile theme but good refernece too real life, Nirt your verse was iight better structured i guess...but i dont feel ur punches hit as hard.....

so is that tko my win????? holla yo...............

This was feedback posted for nirt
 

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bumpin for votes ya'll wut ya got?............

.....mORE votes please let me get 3-0...and take the win peace

uppin for vottes ya'll .................................

Voted For: nirt

nirt took this one...

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Voted For: nirt

ok Nirt jsut had wittier punches, plus Taz u really didnt have harsh ones and ur structure was real bad yo, V/Nirt for better punches and structure

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^^^bumpin for votes, dont sleep on me people.......

Uppin for votes, 1 more to close this thing out.......lets go

Voted For: taz

nice closer that is what won the battle over for u man both of yall coulda came harder man but hey u won this one. nirt had better wordplay but u had punches man all he did was talk about your moma

thanks man thats a tko my win

This was feedback posted for taz
 

Just Checkin polls................................

Voted For: taz

very weak battle...wow umm...

Flow - Taz...the lines were short so the flow sounded better not neccessarily makin it a better verse...nirt was all over the place...sounded alil outa control...work on that

Metaphors - umm... Taz...simply because of his last bar...it was still weak but it was a metaphor...nirt really didnt have any metas at all in his verse...pretty simple...work on that

Punches - wow...tie...all the punches in this battle was weak as hell...that made this battle borin as hell...yall gotta attack the other mc n come hard wit it....dont throw random punches that belong in a open mic verse feel me

Personals - i saw obsolutely NONE !...nuff said

Wordplay - NONE...nirt jus because u put dashes at the end of every punch doesnt make it complex...its still pretty weak n u need come harder wit it...so i wud kill that if i was u but im not so u can do whatever u want

Originality - once again...tie...both nirt and tas had SIMPLEEE verses...no serious vocab no complexity...that killed this battle !

overall - blahh...gotta go wit Taz simple because it flowed better and was an all around SLIGHTLYYYYYY better then nirt's..."your shit bores-man,and rhymning words?,well you sure-can't
cause the only twist i see in your lines comes inside your-pants" ????...that sounded pretty gay 2 me !!!!!!!!

Vote - Taz

weak battle tho...yall can improve alot...no hateon either of yall iight...1

thanks, uppin on this yo........................

uppin yooooooooo

Voted For: taz

V/taz
Taz won it wit his firs and last bars......nirt didnt have really any disses that were appealling.........nirt up on ya disses vocab and such

taz up on ur structure really try and get each word to end at the same spot make it flow better....up on ur multis tooo

but u win this battle no question so u got lucky