My brain contain the gospel, I’m an apostle with script
 

My brain contain the gospel, I’m an apostle with script
Can’t influence me my endurance be Christian on holy trips
So dawg pass the bible it’ll help my task as disciple
Hatred igniting but by sacred writing I preach try rifle
The words and stifle herds of sinners got stats
In the hood solid like slats of wood it’ll tilt hats
I’ve have kilt with gatts well I guess I feel guilt for that
This stuff is sweet food for a street dude dang thug is played out
Cause fun and delight to pause with gun sight strayed about
In a combat zone in your habitat and home rolling in chrome
Now on a mission of devastation with a Christian revelation
It take vision and elevation lot of precision with celebration
Need rigorous security for my religious purity Satan’s soldiers
Be weighting my shoulders, sick politics throws boulders
At god and church stuff be odd too much gas prices too high
Need a little peace in the Middle East tired of being bad guy
Try to find a house and a fine spouse to kiss and reminisce
With, designs verse from the confines of the earth dim and brisk
yell can hear a lion roar in my iron ore just a jungle twist
a surprise to my eyes soon realize a boom in the skies
oh fuck is a bird or plane naw just my words in flame that fries
Brains

liked this, u had emotion but still kept it gangsta nice job, nice structure which made it flow sick, vocab was there on point, good concept...u know what ya doin.........rtf on my o/m please

this is poetry.....................................this decent....but you juss wrote what you're against

this was an alright piece. u had a good idea. the only thing i would tell you is to stick to the topic cause it kinda seemed like you drifted away. but other than that good flow and good use of multis.

thi was ight....good mutlts.....good kinda bored though...make it a little more interesting next time...content was bland.
Try and word your lines better too.

not poetry rap came out with multies first no such thing in poetry as multies if a poet use it then he or she is biting a rap style

thanks for the responses for real yall

Lmao. Dude, poetry is older then rap, you little twat. like, a lot fucking older. Centuries older. Millenia older. In poetry, there is such things as multis, and there can be as many as you want. Just because people rhyme a lot in a poem doesn't mean they're 'biting a style', if it's possible to bite a style.

maddrapper, you're biting the style of having hair and wearing clothes. You're biting the style of having two legs and two arms and fingers and opposable thumbs and eyes, because those existed before you were born. Tool.

I didn't bother to read it, because it's going to be the same shit, but keep trying.

Finally gettin betta, u gettin there keep it up.

thanks for the props on this one straight up rap with real multies

Daemon get a personality check you just wrote some straight up garbage if you didn't read the post how can you comment get that whack head of yours out the trash can


Lmao. Dude, poetry is older then rap, you little twat. like, a lot fucking older. Centuries older. Millenia older. In poetry, there is such things as multis, and there can be as many as you want. Just because people rhyme a lot in a poem doesn't mean they're 'biting a style', if it's possible to bite a style.

maddrapper, you're biting the style of having hair and wearing clothes. You're biting the style of having two legs and two arms and fingers and opposable thumbs and eyes, because those existed before you were born. Tool.

I didn't bother to read it, because it's going to be the same shit, but keep trying.

Is there anyone on this site that likes maddrapper? lol

nope ...... lol

I can comment on when you said poetry bites from rap styles, because that's one of the gayest things you've ever said. I'm going to sig that.

in poetry there a rule known as 'poetic freedom' it gives the writer the ability to create his/her own words, own rhyme schemes, or totally kill puncuations and all proper english, so there is no rule that says poetry cant contain multiple rhymes...

but there were no multies until that black ghetto rap came about i can vouch for that hey fuck poetry, or say (that rap is quick rhyming poetry with attitude) my personal definition and priase the ghetto lords for making it livlier and not so boring like it use to be

...Maddrapper, you're stupid, you know that? There were multis before that 'black ghetto rap'. What makes you really assume that rap started the whole use of 'attitude'(basically talking about shooting people in the hood when the writers live in mansions, and we all know you can easily portray 'attitude' in text) and multis. And not all rap is quick, and you just said rap is poetry with what you call 'attitude'. So, rap is biting off poetry. You're so goddamned dumb madd, really.

naw homey i gave you a definition which may please your quest for trying to make rap poetry so damn what they're talking about its displays attitude and not some boring bedtime story like poetry use to be l

Man, maddrapper, I wish I had an unlimited amount of sig space so I could put in all the stupid shit you say. You said it was YOUR DEFINITION. Meaning the wrong one.

You're so fucking stupid.

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Poetry: writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm

You want to stereotype poetry as bedtime stories that're boring, but all rap is is people talking about shit that they've never experienced and never will because they're sipping Pinna Coladas and having caviar while shopping on the internet for their two million dollar sports car. Rap is people just speaking a story then adding a beat behind it, big deal.

which one would people rather hear the answer is rap because the dollars speak for themselves end of story right here definitely start rhyming with attitude and succeed

You need to stop speaking for everyone else. You're acting like everyone prefers rap over poetry --- wrong. A shit load of people hate rap because the shit is hypocritical. End of story, I've dismissed all your points and you can address none of mine, you only base off what you like and think that everyone else agrees.

1. poetry has lasted way longer then rap
2. there is a lot more poets then rappers
3. rap is based off poetry in a way.

Like you said, it's 'rhyming' with an attitude. And things that rhyme are basically a poem. The real 'attitude' of rap comes with people talking about a hood life they've never lived by making them seem like they're so strong and hardcore with their nasally little shit voices made better by voice masks and beats that are produced.

Seriously, madd, you need to stop talking. Like they say: Light must travel faster then sound, because I thought you were bright before you started talking.

use big words bu tsay nothing so to me you're not smart eighter thanks to the ghetto lords we can now enjoy multi-rhymes in reality look i give credit where credit is due I don't beat around the bush rap is making money matter-of-fact rap right now rules the world every country has a Hip Hop culture right now, poetry been around for ages and could never affect the world like rap has making it more powerful

Lmao, you're so stupid. Poetry has affected the world a lot more then people listening to the type of music while a sixteen year old rolls up a blunt. You need to shut up, no one fucking likes you here at all, and no one agrees with the stupid bullshit you say. You suck, you use multis like they actually make a good verse, and they're okay but your content is fucking confusing as hell.

maddrapper shut up u annoy me seriously

if I annoy yall not able to rap ass then get out of my thread or stay and learn to rap the choice is yours I made my point Hip Hop is in, not poetry it will never make the money Hip hop or rap does poetry has no attitude even poetry nowdays is beginning to sound like rap dang rap is everywhere attitude is the ingredience and hey fuck that shit about nobody like me so what i tell the truth AND THE TRUTH HURTS WEAK MIND LIKE YOURS YOU WON'T CONVINCE ME BECAUSE I SEE RAP ON TOP NOT POETRY TAKE A HIKE

taz HOW CAN YOU BE GANGSTA AND YOUR BELOW AVERAGE ASS HAS NO IDEA OF WHAT WE'RE TALKING ABOUT DAMN FUCK HEAD GANGSTAS AIN'T STUPID HA! HA! HA! HA!

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203345)

You's a dumb ass fuck, wait,wait, let me try that again... YOU'S A DUMB ASS FUCK!!! If you was thinkin' straight you would realise that hip hop/rap is tha same thing as poetry. Rappin' is just anotha form of it. And Hip Hop isn't a form of art, it's a culture fucka.

knaledg1 lets face it yall jack offs keep calling me dumb I'm telling you illiterate fucks that rap is rhyme with attitude

..DUMN FUCK man this sucked learn to make sense be4 i go into details

Lmao at maddrapper calling other people illiterate when I can hardly understand him.

but you below average fucks are illiterate to rap feel me DAEMON?

this was ok, topic jumped way off course, if you really want to flow for Christ you need to put Him first and yourself last, but this was a lil better than what i usually read from you, keep workin on it and take a lil more time when writing

Christianite naw man where did that come from long as christ is my lord and savior it don't matter what position I put him at don'ty let man tell you the way he think it should be use what god gave you reasoning and common sense

man i am using what God gave me, and i'm not listening to what man says, if you believe in Christ then you believe in His sayings, and He said we should humble and He also said we should not put anything before Him, and it is good that Christ is your Lord and Savior, but you send off the wrong message when you only talk about yourself, basically saying that you're more important than He is and i hope thats not your attitude, cause if it is you really need to do some soul searching......thats all i am and was trying to say, no disrespect or nothing

Yeah But If H Emy Lord And Savior He Understands Me Even When I Rhymeso Its Really Not Neccessary He Knows He's First Without Him I Wouldn't Be Able To Do What I Do Long As You Know He Is Christ And Died For Our Sins Nothing Else Really Matters