One Love
 

ayo man wat up.......i been off for only like a week but im here in hawaii for my babies surgery on her lungs.....it got infected but yea...my girlfriend told me how she remembers me writing aalot before i started on my studio here in my own hometown...and she said i should start writing more so thats wat i did and came wit this piece yo so yea......hope ya'll like it..........

INTRO: yea,...baby i love you


verse 1:

you know i love you alot wit ya funky ass style
i love you more than ever since we had are forst child
my love for you is deep...like the blood in my veins
i love you alway's and will alway's stay the same
and my love remains..even if your away..never gon change
never losin faith,never let a passin day come between get away
oh darlin darlin i just wanna let you both know
that'll do anything and that i love you both so...
feel the power when our hearts choose to combine
the power is strong...the power is yours the power is mine
when our hearts part you know the sky must cry
keep on on lovein ya both,writing letters til my pen runs dry
if you stay, good love will remain to fix me up right
if you go, rise and fall...rain pour my pain...watch the skies cry
you who i miss when im not holdin ya real tight
i love you both in this world til the day that i die

Chorus...Repeat x2
you are the ones that i love so much
waitin everyday for your every touch
hold ya both close and never letting ya both go
baby when i miss you both im never shy to come home

some one stole my heart, 911 this an emergency
please help me find my loved ones...thanks for your courtesy
people all around world, have never heard of me
oh god come upon and bless my family with authority
i got the love in my heart...git the vibe in my soul
my love for both my babies no one aelse can control
my loves like a star for you ima shine so bright
i love you both to death want ya balways by my side
dont know where i'd be if u weren't here
me losin you both.....is the most that i fear
no one else in the world can hold ya both down like me
i madethis song for us cus....i really felt the urgency
to alway's put you first along with makaela marie
i love you both and i know you both love me...baby...

Chorus...Repeat x2
you are the ones that i love so much
waitin everyday for your every touch
hold ya both close and never letting ya both go
baby when i miss you both im never shy to come home

***makaela marie is my daughters name
***my girlfriend ive been with since 8th grade now im a junior
***we had a first child but we had a miscarriage it was gon be a boy so we had a nme for him...MAKAE.....so in honr of him when we had a girl we added a lil more so it would be more of a girl name but also have her brothers name..MAKAELA

this drop is my most personal cuz my girlfriend has stuck wit me through the good and the very bad and my baby girl is in the hospital for a lung surgery so im really scared cuz there's a chance she can die so .......the part of the chorus where i say im not shy to come home....is not only me when im on a road trip for our album but also when its like a prayer to makaela sayin come on home...we know you can make it baby and also for god sayin if its her time then its her time for her to go home up above....so drop a honest feed and dont fuckin hate cuz im not in the mood for any hatin...bad feed i can accept but if ya post shit like yea ill beat ya ass right now or some shit man that aint cool....so drop feed

i ment to say i was off for one weekend i mean not one week but heres the link for bone collecter


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203428

damn homie i felt this good emotion i think you should expand your vocab a bit but it woz on point id say 9/10 homie

man the emotion on this was very good, very deep, liked the flow and vocab, keep it up man and good luck with everything

aight man thanks yo pass the word around yo....man no one likes to feed on my shit man......but hey man uppin this shit....

yo dis waz a dope emotional peice, vocab was strong and da imagination wuz good in ur rhymes 2, nice drop hommie!

enjoyed this kinda long but nice so let me drop this as an addition (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=20358) leave feed on my link

Look dun I pray above just to have one love but right
Now fixed in shock confused like the six o’clock news at night
On my shoulder toted the whole world devoted to ole girl
Had a thick ass kisses stick fast to my lips and hurl
Thoughts through my mind caught in a true bind just a whirl
Wind of love, girlfriend use to hug me tight all night
Hold me closely she’s bold mostly, she was soul and toasty with height
Player not suppose to get involve but I had a nose job I couldn’t shake
Coo-chee just pudding and cake at first she just wouldn’t date

Yo man good emotion wit this no doubt u showed how u can be emotional and still write dope pieces up on ur vocab and ull be straight....nothing to really complain about....g/l wit everything man

rtf on my links in my sig......1

maddrapper why dont u just speak english lol i cant understand wut u are saying.....

ayo FAMs thanks for ya'll support so holla and i will RTF aight?!?!?!ayo taz holla at us at RAW homie....peace

^^^No doubt shodown ill holla right now

ayo fam wat up!!!!!!feed on this track man its hot i know come on this shit is personal and it means alot to me man real.................so come on people

Damn Man This Is Real Deep Here Man Really Good Alot Of Good Feeling In Here Vocabulary Was Nice Here Man I Like The Use Of Words It Made The Concept Look Good Is This Real Man?? Holla At Me For A Collab
PS RTF On This I'm About To Put It Up

aight man.........yea its real yo my daughter came out of surgery 4 day's ago man real..............ight ill hoolla at ya wit a collab and i will RTF......

Last Words

There's The Link Man

ight man i posted man real........ill pm you for the collab foe holla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hahaha man when i get my mic homie ill let ya know whats really up wit my audio skillz

This was another decent drop, again it was packed with emotion and had decent imagery, lyrically it was decent, structure is messy but its strate cause it looks like the text for an audio version.

You should do it audio, good piece.

man all i need is a mic man and i am poor like a muthafucka so i have to wait for a hile man real.........but man thanks for the feed again man and i RTF on ur battle wit PI and shit man i will drop and audio soon as i get a damn mic..............i demostrate my verbal skillz

diz piece here was hot i liked it alot u put it down wit lots of emotion, creativity was definately there structure was on point also, continue 2 drop ya pieces cuz u got alot of potential

man payn man thanks especially to hear from trigga....man RAW and TRIGGA aint on the same terms but man i aint into that beefin shit so i really appriciate you droppin feed man cuz my crew cant even drop feed for me so thanks man peace...............

Good shit yo, hope she b aiightt......flow was on point, i felt it fa real.........stay up

ayo foe thanks and can ya spread the werd homie i would really appriciate it man real

oh yeah can u do me a favor also & drop sum feed in my piece

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204043

aight man..............ayo i did drop i think but yea i will

Damn thats hott...i like ya OM sho...maybe u shud do a OM for Easing The Pain

well this wasnt too good

i see the topic and i feel for u but this lyrically wasnt too great..kinda basic..nothing spectacular that stood out..ya flow was alright but at times kinda went off..overall i would give this a 7.

thanks peeps for yall feed man really appriciate it and comin soon in OM is my new one called are u feelin me?! its gon be hot man and one ccalled marijuana so ill post it later peace

DAYYUUMM great peice...strong emotion...good way you structured this peice..this was really good...up ure vocab a lil and this would be an eazee OM of the month, rlly dope peice...

RTF to my desperation....

aight homie sure think homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ayo peeps can i get more feed on this piece...........................