Natural killa vs taz
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 KO
4-1 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-05 at 12:12 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-05 06:39 PM.

put nothing in ya prof.,scared,surrounded by death,and confounded by sweat
Cause Taz's is E-motion-all,like everyone's moving around on the net
I'm pissing on your spit,nobody feelin it...why you ask?,cause ya tryna glisten on shit
and your verse and tazmania talking's the same...cause nobody listening to it
squashed u like a salamander,your spits are gay,like your color ya mouth up with valendar
and after this you gon be lost in dazzed(days),like vagrants without a calendar


Well...I didn't care about structure this time.....

taz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-05 08:44 PM.

Thought he was born blessed to stand out from da rest, truth is ur born depressed with two female breasts on ur chest/battle me homie u need a bullet proof vest, admit it Killa, u impressed at how quick ur girl undressed at my request/Natural deffinitaly not ya rhymes, Killa deffinitaly kill your own rhymes... aint hard ta beat em wit a sick nasty mind/Natural Killa got bitched out in his own thread, Drakel bitched this cat out now he actin dead time ta unwind/You aint no homicide killa wanted for a murder...this cat lifted his gat then bowed down cuz he saw c. murder/He bow down to pussy niggas that cant rap, so he bow down to himslef.......thats a rap...


^^^^WEAK AS Hell Wrote this in 2 minutes tops......already uppin for votes

Bump!.....Wut u guys think?

ya structure man..................anyways...uppin.

Voted For: taz

Flow - Both had whack structure, but i was catchin more of a flow wit taz, natural killa i seen some of ur other battles i know u can do better...but it hur you..so taz gets this one

Punches -Both had some good punches...hard to tell the winner in this spot.....tie

Personals - Pesonals, hmmm...taz got the personals hand down no doubt about it...natural killa didnt come close to his personals .......no hate natural.......

Multies - Natural killa took the multis...taz may have had some multis but not as proficient as killa...

Vocab - UMM natural killa....cuz its plain to see he used better vocab.....

Originality - Taz was more original by far, had fresh stuff ready to go....killa...didnt match up to originality man sry...

v/taz

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thanks for the vote man...^^^appreciate it...bumpin for votes

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Voted For: Natural killa

Check the polls on dis battle
and Natural worry bout Structure

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damnmit i keep do'in da shit
Remove it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: taz

ok taz...

ya structure was fucked but it still flowed nicely and i felt the disses.. had some good personals in there and overall most of the lines had some sort of punch.. 5/10

killa...

structure was nice.. had some wordplay but i didnt see any of it aimed at taz.. and didnt see any good disses or even solid disses at all they were kinda half there.. needed to focus more on dissin taz and not jus freestylin.. 4/10

my vote - Taz

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Much appreciated^^^ thanks man........still uppin.......hey natural killa kid i was gunna vote for you on ur battle for detrimental dawg.......

Voted For: Natural killa

put nothing in ya prof.,scared,surrounded by death,and confounded by sweat
Cause Taz's is E-motion-all,like everyone's moving around on the net
I'm pissing on your spit,nobody feelin it...why you ask?,cause ya tryna glisten on shit
and your verse and tazmania talking's the same...cause nobody listening to it
squashed u like a salamander,your spits are gay,like your color ya mouth up with valendar
and after this you gon be lost in dazzed(days),like vagrants without a calendar

A real nice verse homie...some good punches and personals in there and u shud always work on ya structure homie!!!!

7/10

vs

Thought he was born blessed to stand out from da rest, truth is ur born depressed with two female breasts on ur chest/battle me homie u need a bullet proof vest, admit it Killa, u impressed at how quick ur girl undressed at my request/Natural deffinitaly not ya rhymes, Killa deffinitaly kill your own rhymes... aint hard ta beat em wit a sick nasty mind/Natural Killa got bitched out in his own thread, Drakel bitched this cat out now he actin dead time ta unwind/You aint no homicide killa wanted for a murder...this cat lifted his gat then bowed down cuz he saw c. murder/He bow down to pussy niggas that cant rap, so he bow down to himslef.......thats a rap...

For a start you need alot of work on ya structure cuz that shit is just hard to read....some aight ryhmes but no real hard hittin punches sori homie but keep elevating!!!

5.5/10

v/NK

lol, iight still uppin for votes.......let em role in please

el dios, look at his verse did he actually diss me? didnt think so

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Voted For: Natural killa

Aight...here it is....

Flow:Natural Killa(well,had more)
Punches:Natural Killa
Personals:None....
Metas:Natural Killa(I would have ta say....)
Multies:Natural Killa
Vocab:Natural Killa(confounded was prolly da biggest word in da battle lol)
Creativity:Natural Killa
Enjoyment:I enjoyed Nat's more....

My Vote: Natural Killa

Explanation:Taz's 1st line came out...but I guess he lost interest as he went on......Natural Killa...wouldnt say da 1st punch you had hit hard...but I see whatcha sayin by it....but da rest was pretty good....it had better structure(not dat I care bout structure)....but dats my break down...

..!!..pEaCe..!!..

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uppin yo......dont sleep on this battle man

Voted For: taz

Structure-NEither, no one had good structure at all.cant even comment on the structure.......

Vocab-Natural killa, not much vocab in either but natural killa took this wit the word vagrants...lol both up on that and elevate

Personals-once again none ddidnt feel that either verse had a personal that effected anything......both up on that

Punches-both wer not that great but i think taz's hit harder

Originality-Both had fresh verses but taz was fresher and was more appealing wit his first line and the way he closed it ...was feelin it...made me think of tha dave chappelle thing..so i thought it was funny

Multis-Both had good multis, especially taz's first lines y natural killa had some multis but they werent appealing......
v/taz

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Voted For: taz

Natural killas punches were all weak as fuck, he even admitted 2 his structure bein fucked up wtf? he basically was sayin dont vote 4 me, it loks like that was the first verse he ever spit

Taz had so raw ass punches i especially liked the 1 where he sed his female undressed at his request, over all structure wasnt perfect but it was aight this vote goez 2 taz

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^^Thanks man appreciate it still uppin yo

Voted For: taz

v/taz

STRUCTURE:both had bad structure not feelin either had good flow....so i got niether on this one!both up on structure make each line end at the same point.

Personals:TAz, had better personals in his verse....Natural killa ur verse was iight but didnt get as much personals as taz in there

PUnches:Taz had better punches in his verse, had great opener and great closer and punches were really solid, natural when u through a punch make sure it lands man......up on ur punches

VOcab-Not much vocab at all....so i cant really say much, both up on vocab to enhance ya verses yo.

Originality:Both really original fresh disses and shit....both had good verses but not great.....

Multis:Natural killa obviuosly had the better multis in this to make his verse ok......didnt help him get the win....taz make sure u have more than 2 lines wit multis next time dont make it look like u dont care..........V/TAZ

thanks man much apprreciated^^still uppin for votes people

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and taz....if ya win this...wat ya say about a 12 line rematch?...I underestimated you here and though you sucked...so i freestyled a verse instead..

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haha.....same thing happened to phreenapdizzle and i took him 5-0 lol.......ill think about the rematch iight.......but ill most likely be down fa sho........UPPIN FOR VOTES YA'LL

Voted For: Natural killa

so doesnt Taz already lose because he went over the line limit? anyway

Taz - first thing i noticed was horrible structure. i couldnt really find the flow cause it was hard to read. you didnt have any real punches or personals. i was disappointed in this verse. no personals no nothing. i would give you a 4/10


Natural killa - much better verse than taz. u had a good personal. well it wasnt that good. but compared to taz's verse it was great. u had a punch in every bar. overall yo basically won with the first bar. i would give you a 7/10

uppin!!!..........let the votes role in yo.........

Voted For: taz

Vote Taz.. u got some good flow and rhymes in.. your structure looks solid especially for writing it so fast.. only thing i didnt like is how ur used same words twice a couple times.. like rhymes.. murder.. and rap.. but overall the flow was better than killas..
killas verse lost me and it looked like he found a rhyming word and wrote anything about it..

vote taz