NaRc-UzI vs Stanza
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 ko
4-1 ko


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-05 at 11:30 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

NaRc-UzI has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 10:35 PM.

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 10:35 PM.

yo

You Couldnt Take Me Down Even If You Controlled The Elevator
They Say Im Fabolous They Way I Stop Yo Breathe Like a Resperator
I Think That You Sorry The Way You Talkin All That Babble
And No Action Taken So next Time Dont PM Me for a Battle
Time To Stop Only 6 Lines Was Required For Me To Take The Cake
And Like Fat Bitchez Ya Strutures Comes In So Many Sloppy Shapes
-quiikie- :thumbup:

U'll be in Debt if you Bet against Narc in this Thread cuz Stanza ill "DIP thru ur SET"*
How you gonna hurt me when your Bitch Ass struggles to fucking "Break a Sweat"
Dog you outta place why even try dont you know this aint good for your "Health"
I'll hold Onions to ur Face wit a Gun in ur Eye so you'll Cry at the "Sight of Death"
Hold your Breath Stanza cause im bringing heat like the weather of the 'Tampa"
Going south like Atlanta and your rhymes are old so ill just call ur verse "Grandpa"

*King~dipset is his alias*

just made it lol.......................................

uppin for some votes.............................................

This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI
 

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

weak battle....

Flow - stanza...easy to read and the barz wasnt all over the place...Narc ur barz was madd stretched like u was forcin it alil !..work on dat

Punches - Narc...they were harder hittin BY FAR...stanza didnt have 1 good punch in his whole verse !!!!!...
"Think That You Sorry The Way You Talkin All That Babble
And No Action Taken So next Time Dont PM Me for a Battle"
EW !...nuff sed

Metaphors - Narc...first of all...
"You Couldnt Take Me Down Even If You Controlled The Elevator
They Say Im Fabolous They Way I Stop Yo Breathe Like a Resperator"...A RESPERATOR KEEPS YOU BREATHIN NOT STOP YOU FROM BREATHIN...wow !

Personals - Narc...not really any serious hard hittin punches wit the personals but at least he thru in that king dipset ish !...stanza had nuttin but random punches THAT MADE NO SENSE !

Originality - Narc...I'll hold Onions to ur Face wit a Gun in ur Eye so you'll Cry at the "Sight of Death"...beter then anything stanza had to say simple as that !!!!!

this battle was one sided E Z...narc u had a decent verse but u need to still come alot harder feel me...stanza...hmmm...well...ummm...how can i say this lightly...that was HORRIBLE...no hate but u said absolutely nuttin in that verse...work on that fam

Vote - Narc Uzi

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yall can return the favor on the battle in my sig iight...good look...no hate stanza...

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That Vote was mad UNexplained,............Ill get it removed

Still upin

That vote seemed explained to me fams still uppin.........................................

Voted For: Stanza

ummm this was a prettty weak battle.


narc: there was reakky no punhes in your verse. well none that stuck out. you need to use better vocab and better concepts/ your structure was pretty mest up ad your flow was all over the place.

stanza weak verse but you did what you needed to do. punches vocab flolw and structure were asll better thats why im giving it to you.


v/ stanza

for having better vocab punches flow and structure pz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

U'll be in Debt if you Bet against Narc in this Thread cuz Stanza ill "DIP thru ur SET"*
How you gonna hurt me when your Bitch Ass struggles to fucking "Break a Sweat"
6...ok play on his alias, although the 2nd line wasn't all that hot.
Dog you outta place why even try dont you know this aint good for your "Health"
I'll hold Onions to ur Face wit a Gun in ur Eye so you'll Cry at the "Sight of Death"
5...concept was ok, but you delivered it pretty weak.
Hold your Breath Stanza cause im bringing heat like the weather of the 'Tampa"
Going south like Atlanta and your rhymes are old so ill just call ur verse "Grandpa"
5...again, not the best here, you need to try rewording your shit.

OVERALL: 16/30


You Couldnt Take Me Down Even If You Controlled The Elevator
They Say Im Fabolous They Way I Stop Yo Breathe Like a Resperator
4...weak, played concept and you self-glorified a little with the faboulous concept.
I Think That You Sorry The Way You Talkin All That Babble
And No Action Taken So next Time Dont PM Me for a Battle
4...again, weak. not really a personal especially the 2nd line, that was just pointless.
Time To Stop Only 6 Lines Was Required For Me To Take The Cake
And Like Fat Bitchez Ya Strutures Comes In So Many Sloppy Shapes
5...better but still not worded for good affect, thats your problem you rush shit too much.

OVERALL: 13/30


weak drops from both, stanza you rushed yours and came with played concepts and weak shit, you need to take more time and try rewording shit better. also narc, you dropped better against me, so you need to get more creative and try wording shit better alos, but in this battle you came more consistent than stanza did.

V/ - NARC-UZI

plz RTF!! on my battle with marv....links in my siggy.

Yeah Thatt Vote Was Explained man I forgot you could vote like that lol

Still uppin

Uppin............................................. ..

This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: Stanza

stanza came with a betta flow in the six lines, narc your death line thru it off, the wordplay narc you had was weak, stanza came with simple wordplay but betta used it wasn't forced, outta twelve lines red i give this battle to stanza

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Aye Narc

Lets Have The CRew Vote On This man Bcuz its gettin slept on so what do you say if you agree to it in here than it can be passed so the votes will not get DQ'ed

This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

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Voted For: Stanza

was ok even though u only had 30 min. a lot harder to vote than i thought; you're pretty evenly matched.
Stanza:good flow and punches, last one was sorta weaker than the others.
Narc:health and death don't rhyme unless u got a accent. but i can't tell cuz this iz text. bout the same as Stanza with the flow and punches, but i think Stanza's punches were a little harder.

Voted For: Stanza

U'll be in Debt if you Bet against Narc in this Thread cuz Stanza ill "DIP thru ur SET"*
How you gonna hurt me when your Bitch Ass struggles to fucking "Break a Sweat"
decent, cool personal.....

Dog you outta place why even try dont you know this aint good for your "Health"
I'll hold Onions to ur Face wit a Gun in ur Eye so you'll Cry at the "Sight of Death"
preety good, decent...

Hold your Breath Stanza cause im bringing heat like the weather of the 'Tampa"
Going south like Atlanta and your rhymes are old so ill just call ur verse "Grandpa"
ok ending, could of been better but not bad......

i thought u started good 2bar was preety good then u feel off but all around good drop....

7.5/10


You Couldnt Take Me Down Even If You Controlled The Elevator
They Say Im Fabolous They Way I Stop Yo Breathe Like a Resperator
decent start...

I Think That You Sorry The Way You Talkin All That Babble
And No Action Taken So next Time Dont PM Me for a Battle
no punch, weak...

Time To Stop Only 6 Lines Was Required For Me To Take The Cake
And Like Fat Bitchez Ya Strutures Comes In So Many Sloppy Shapes
ha decent ending....


imma brake this down....

flow: tied * ya both flowed ya punches and each bar well*

punches: stanza took this with the last bar i thought it was the best punch in this battle

creativeness: stanza bearly took this one but he did by a hair...

all around close battle but stanza bearly took this one but he did have slightly better punches and was slightly more creative with them....


BUT GUESS WHAT.....

IT DONT MATTER WHO WIN ITS STILL TRIGGER TOWN INC NIGGA'S!!!!! YA BOTH HELLA GOOD......

but either is better then me LMFAO J/P

Voted For: Stanza

This was a tight battle and I don't want the dollars for voting but yo I think Stanza took this one he came more original and his punches was hittin harder fav line was....

You Couldnt Take Me Down Even If You Controlled The Elevator
They Say Im Fabolous They Way I Stop Yo Breathe Like a Resperator

NaRc you cam hard too I just thought Stanza came more original but my fav line from you was.........

IP:


U'll be in Debt if you Bet against Narc in this Thread cuz Stanza ill "DIP thru ur SET"*
How you gonna hurt me when your Bitch Ass struggles to fucking "Break a Sweat"

tight battle and I love you both but Stanza took this

ya do now that a respirater helps you breath not sops you from breathing LOL come oon think guys LOL

Voted For: Stanza

good drop u get tha vote nice flow and vocab no hate~peace~