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Tha Q. 08-09-05 11:35 AM

Natural killa vs Tha Q.
 
Battle Rules:

16 line MAX
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

**ANY, and I mean ANY hate votes will be DQ.PERIOD.


check in hoe.

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-12-05 at 11:35 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Closed - Expired / old battle tie

System 08-09-05 11:35 AM

Tha Q. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 11:35 AM.

System 08-09-05 05:52 PM

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 05:52 PM.

noname 08-09-05 11:56 PM

I ain't tryna knock,I'm stating facts,and i don't like battlin a fag dreamin bout bein on top a other cats
he lame,it's why nobody askin for a 'Q-Tip' cause he already drop a lotta 'wax'(whacks)
he denied the battle yesterday,accept 2day,c'mon Tha,grow some balls
cause,i mean, we all know how he 'pre-rights',like a four year old know it all
it should be a sin for you to bring the spit,& ya wanna put me under your wingjust to have something to stick
Bitch please,u only switched to gay,cause str8ness ain;t give ya anything to lick
damn model,checkin ya nose,askin bout our workout in LL,then stoppin to beg for a second to pose
and i hear U A VET?,well ya must owning only CD's cause you got no record to show
i'm mad dat da first queer dat i saw got his temper unlocked,happened to be pussy in the center alot
and it's clear the change to homo ain't work,he still beatin his meat to member mugshots
only shots Q wants to do is ballin my mouth,talking about me ducking,but here he's stallin me now
cuz,i mean,look,he even gave ME props,makin a whole thread in LL about calling me out
but it's sa'll good Q,take the losing as a quid-pro-pro,shoulda saved ya corpse with a no show
cause it figures you'd be whack,reppin benzino,with your aim as SOURCE CEO
to me,this ain't beef,i think it's fun,bombarding a queer,wit his raps that stinks beyond some
but knowing you,sensitivity wieghts a ton,&you a 'dick-writer',like u substituting ink for cum

Tha Q. 08-10-05 05:29 AM

uh


1st off,

pick a mothafucka mic up
fuggin herb
**dusts off keyboard**
itz been a minute
aiyo
check it
uh!



Aiyo,
I peeped ya shit..still ain't figured out which part was ya writtens
U gotta be kiddin, how da fuck u got more footnotes than actual disses
In good faith, I set this battle up hopin' for a small challenge
Ya rhymes wack fuel economy, stretchin' em out to get dat extra mileage
Addin' dashes and quotations don't make what you wrote dope or blazin
It just mean u a joke, so face it..ya whole M.O. is to hate, kid
I'm an organic farmer harvestin' u herbs for this beef dish
I gave you all the ammo needed, u still couldn't defeat this
Instead you posted a thread thought you was revealin' a secret
But discovered you sonn'ed yaself when er'body called u a geek, bitch
Spittin' weak shit..what da fuck ur wack wit your anemic..
Flow-style broke-down schemes bitch..I'm rippin u into pieces
Knee jerk ya ass until you achieve this..level I'm at cuz u squeamish
Scared to step up or dream shit..ya self esteem is dead, it seems it
Logical to think it..dat I'm reachin' farther than you can ever achieive prick
Believe it..local rule say I'm K.O.'n this fool, don't starve..just EAT SHIT!

and die
BITCH

uh!

noname 08-10-05 06:03 PM

bump.............................................. ...

Tha Q. 08-10-05 06:07 PM

uh


1st off,

pick a mothafucka mic up
fuggin herb
**dusts off keyboard**
itz been a minute
aiyo
check it
uh!



Aiyo,
I peeped ya shit..still ain't figured out which part was ya writtens
U gotta be kiddin, how da fuck u got more footnotes than actual disses
In good faith, I set this battle up hopin' for a small challenge
Ya rhymes wack fuel economy, stretchin' em out to get dat extra mileage
Addin' dashes and quotations don't make what you wrote dope or blazin
It just mean u a joke, so face it..ya whole M.O. is to hate, kid
I'm an organic farmer harvestin' u herbs for this beef dish
I gave you all the ammo needed, u still couldn't defeat this
Instead you posted a thread thought you was revealin' a secret
But discovered you sonn'ed yaself when er'body called u a geek, bitch
Spittin' weak shit..what da fuck ur wack wit your anemic..
Flow-style broke-down schemes bitch..I'm rippin u into pieces
Knee jerk ya ass until you achieve this..level I'm at cuz u squeamish
Scared to step up or dream shit..ya self esteem is dead, it seems it
Logical to think it..dat I'm reachin' farther than you can ever achieive prick
Believe it..local rule say I'm K.O.'n this fool, don't starve..just EAT SHIT!

and die
BITCH

uh!

noname 08-10-05 06:09 PM

^^^wtf you doin?........the verses done dropped....wait for votes now,.....

noname 08-10-05 07:35 PM

bump...................don't tell me this gonna get slept on....I blame you Q!LOL..j/p..

Dirty Nigga 08-10-05 07:39 PM

This was feedback posted for Tha Q.
 
Polls...........good drop both, Q got it tho....uppin for y'all two...

TeamOne 08-10-05 07:48 PM

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 
NK ripped u Q........ but i still :love: u.......... Q had the real nice flow and structure......... but its text, Q prolly woulda murdered u if that was over a beat while NK struggled to spit like twista with the stretched ass verse

noname 08-10-05 07:50 PM

^^OMG.....my shit was not stretched partner....something called multis....

and once I get my mic and audio shit....I will call-out Q since I know this isn't his primary feild....so don't you worry Q...don't you worry :thumbup:

13th. 08-10-05 07:54 PM

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 
checkin pollz i didnt know u did text Tha Q:huh: but w/e

noname 08-10-05 09:29 PM

bump.................hey Q........ya gotta up this too.......

noname 08-11-05 12:34 AM

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Ridicule 08-11-05 07:50 AM

This was feedback posted for Tha Q.
 
just checkin the polls....................................

noname 08-11-05 12:06 PM

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Willa 08-11-05 01:53 PM

Voted For: Natural killa



I ain't tryna knock,I'm stating facts,and i don't like battlin a fag dreamin bout bein on top a other cats
he lame,it's why nobody askin for a 'Q-Tip' cause he already drop a lotta 'wax'(whacks)
great opener 10/10 best line in the whole battle but it was kinda stretched
he denied the battle yesterday,accept 2day,c'mon Tha,grow some balls
cause,i mean, we all know how he 'pre-rights',like a four year old know it all
funny ok line 7/10
it should be a sin for you to bring the spit,& ya wanna put me under your wingjust to have something to stick
Bitch please,u only switched to gay,cause str8ness ain;t give ya anything to lick
lol funny and its a pesonal 8/10
damn model,checkin ya nose,askin bout our workout in LL,then stoppin to beg for a second to pose
and i hear U A VET?,well ya must owning only CD's cause you got no record to show
funny personal 9/10
i'm mad dat da first queer dat i saw got his temper unlocked,happened to be pussy in the center alot
and it's clear the change to homo ain't work,he still beatin his meat to member mugshots
lol personal again ur killin him with em kid 9/10
only shots Q wants to do is ballin my mouth,talking about me ducking,but here he's stallin me now
cuz,i mean,look,he even gave ME props,makin a whole thread in LL about calling me out personal again and it was funny 9/10
but it's sa'll good Q,take the losing as a quid-pro-pro,shoulda saved ya corpse with a no show
cause it figures you'd be whack,reppin benzino,with your aim as SOURCE CEO
personal but i wasnt feeling it 7/10
to me,this ain't beef,i think it's fun,bombarding a queer,wit his raps that stinks beyond some
but knowing you,sensitivity wieghts a ton,&you a 'dick-writer',like u substituting ink for cum hilarious 10/10

U DID GOOD UR FLOW ISNT ALL THAT THOUGH BECAUSE U HAVE SOME STRETCHED LINES JUST LOSE SOME OF THE FILLERS
BUT ON THE REAL UR PERSONALS KILLED IT Q DIDNT HAVE ANY I READ UR OPENER AND KNEW IT WOULD BE A GOOD BATTLE THE LINE ABOUT Q TIPS AND WAX WAS A GOOD PERSONAL



I peeped ya shit..still ain't figured out which part was ya writtens
U gotta be kiddin, how da fuck u got more footnotes than actual disses
not that great of an opener but it was straight 8/10
In good faith, I set this battle up hopin' for a small challenge
Ya rhymes wack fuel economy, stretchin' em out to get dat extra mileage
no personal but decent line 8/10
Addin' dashes and quotations don't make what you wrote dope or blazin
It just mean u a joke, so face it..ya whole M.O. is to hate, kid
not very good but it is true 8/10
I'm an organic farmer harvestin' u herbs for this beef dish
I gave you all the ammo needed, u still couldn't defeat this
wack played no personal 6/10
Instead you posted a thread thought you was revealin' a secret
But discovered you sonn'ed yaself when er'body called u a geek, bitch
lol ur best line 10/10
Spittin' weak shit..what da fuck ur wack wit your anemic..
Flow-style broke-down schemes bitch..I'm rippin u into pieces
one of ur better lines 8/10
Knee jerk ya ass until you achieve this..level I'm at cuz u squeamish
Scared to step up or dream shit..ya self esteem is dead, it seems it not a good punch in my opinion u gl;orified urself in first line 7/10 no personal :(
Logical to think it..dat I'm reachin' farther than you can ever achieive prick
Believe it..local rule say I'm K.O.'n this fool, don't starve..just EAT SHIT!blah no personal but it had good flow 7/10

OK U SEEMED PREWRITTEN TO ME AND U HAD A FEW PLAYED COONCEPTS IF THIS WAS AUDIO U WOULD HAVE WON BECAUSE OF UR FLOW
BUT U DIDNT HAVE NEARLY AS MANY PERSONALS AND THAT WHAT I THINK WINS BATTLES ID TAKE PERSONALS OVER WORD PLAY ANY DAY UR FARMER LINE WAS UR WORSE LINE
BUT PROPS TO BOTH ONE OF THE BETTER BATTLES IVE SEEN

Tha Q. 08-11-05 02:01 PM

^^^Such a ugly bitch


1-0 NKs way


uppin

Kordozar 08-11-05 02:28 PM

Voted For: Tha Q.


I peeped ya shit..still ain't figured out which part was ya writtens
U gotta be kiddin, how da fuck u got more footnotes than actual disses
In good faith, I set this battle up hopin' for a small challenge
Ya rhymes wack fuel economy, stretchin' em out to get dat extra mileage
Addin' dashes and quotations don't make what you wrote dope or blazin
It just mean u a joke, so face it..ya whole M.O. is to hate, kid
I'm an organic farmer harvestin' u herbs for this beef dish
I gave you all the ammo needed, u still couldn't defeat this

Vs

but it's sa'll good Q,take the losing as a quid-pro-pro,shoulda saved ya corpse with a no show
cause it figures you'd be whack,reppin benzino,with your aim as SOURCE CEO
to me,this ain't beef,i think it's fun,bombarding a queer,wit his raps that stinks beyond some
but knowing you,sensitivity wieghts a ton,&you a 'dick-writer',like u substituting ink for cum


He Had Nothin Really The Q Spit Some Audio Type Shit On Him Lol He Had Some Good Punches Nice Rhyming Words His Structure Was A Lil Off Nice Vocab Words Also The Q Took This Because He Came Harder And He Better Disses And Personals.........

Vote-The Q


Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

noname 08-11-05 04:12 PM

1-1.............uppin.............................

taz 08-11-05 04:17 PM

Voted For: Natural killa

I peeped ya shit..still ain't figured out which part was ya writtens
U gotta be kiddin, how da fuck u got more footnotes than actual disses
^If he has more footnotes post the link....or else its a fake personal^
In good faith, I set this battle up hopin' for a small challenge
Ya rhymes wack fuel economy, stretchin' em out to get dat extra mileage
^Didnt even rhyme man.....weak diss 2/10^
Addin' dashes and quotations don't make what you wrote dope or blazin
It just mean u a joke, so face it..ya whole M.O. is to hate, kid
^Not hard diss at all 4/10^
I'm an organic farmer harvestin' u herbs for this beef dish
I gave you all the ammo needed, u still couldn't defeat this
^Nice Punch, 6/10^
Instead you posted a thread thought you was revealin' a secret
But discovered you sonn'ed yaself when er'body called u a geek, bitch
^send proof link or else its fake personal 2/10^
Spittin' weak shit..what da fuck ur wack wit your anemic..
Flow-style broke-down schemes bitch..I'm rippin u into pieces
^not a strong punch dont know what u were doin1/10^
Knee jerk ya ass until you achieve this..level I'm at cuz u squeamish
Scared to step up or dream shit..ya self esteem is dead, it seems it
^weak....didnt really diss him 0/10^
Logical to think it..dat I'm reachin' farther than you can ever achieive prick
Believe it..local rule say I'm K.O.'n this fool, don't starve..just EAT SHIT!
^very weak closer...wasnt feelin it 3/10^

over all i think this was not very.....powerfull ur punches did not hit as hard...ur structure was good ur flow was on point but ur punches lacked hard hitting and rawness.!4/10

I ain't tryna knock,I'm stating facts,and i don't like battlin a fag dreamin bout bein on top a other cats
he lame,it's why nobody askin for a 'Q-Tip' cause he already drop a lotta 'wax'(whacks)
^good diss...nice multis 5/10
he denied the battle yesterday,accept 2day,c'mon Tha,grow some balls
cause,i mean, we all know how he 'pre-rights',like a four year old know it all
^haha nice diss, funny one too cuz i got 4 year old sister....6/10....nice comparison^
it should be a sin for you to bring the spit,& ya wanna put me under your wingjust to have something to stick
Bitch please,u only switched to gay,cause str8ness ain;t give ya anything to lick
^very weak....diddnt get it, ur structure was bad 0/10
damn model,checkin ya nose,askin bout our workout in LL,then stoppin to beg for a second to pose
and i hear U A VET?,well ya must owning only CD's cause you got no record to show
^not hard hitting just a basic punch 3/10^
i'm mad dat da first queer dat i saw got his temper unlocked,happened to be pussy in the center alot
and it's clear the change to homo ain't work,he still beatin his meat to member mugshots
^haha thats tight, nice punch 7/10^
only shots Q wants to do is ballin my mouth,talking about me ducking,but here he's stallin me now
cuz,i mean,look,he even gave ME props,makin a whole thread in LL about calling me out
^didn tlike it......show proof of him callen u out 3/10^
but it's sa'll good Q,take the losing as a quid-pro-pro,shoulda saved ya corpse with a no show
cause it figures you'd be whack,reppin benzino,with your aim as SOURCE CEO
^not really hard hitting, but kinda hard 5/10^
to me,this ain't beef,i think it's fun,bombarding a queer,wit his raps that stinks beyond some
but knowing you,sensitivity wieghts a ton,&you a 'dick-writer',like u substituting ink for cum
^hahha nice closer this right here won u the battle nice job 8/10

overall ur structure was fucked like crazy.........not good att all....couldnt get a good flow...but u had better punches and better personals that hit hard and were fresh and original nothing played at all...overall 6/10!...keep it up

noname 08-11-05 07:51 PM

uppin this shit.......................................

Signore El Eye 08-11-05 08:08 PM

This was feedback posted for Tha Q.
 
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cruise Montana 08-11-05 08:22 PM

This was feedback posted for Tha Q.
 
y'all both suck ass completely, but I agree wit El eye

noname 08-11-05 10:52 PM

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Tha Q. 08-12-05 08:56 AM

see...fuck dis bullshit

If u wanna DQ my votes Natural...ur a bitch

Point blank

cuz I let Willa's vote stand and she's a Q hata

I cud give a damn if she explained it...that just makes her an Elaborate hater


fuck this man

exactly why I don't battle

bullshit

N.Tavarez 08-12-05 09:02 AM

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 
checking polls to peep Q's text skills..good battle yah

Tha Q. 08-12-05 09:05 AM

^^PSSF...I'm not a Textcee nor a Text battler

so w/e

I jus hate this bullshit...bunch of pathetic herbs desperate for a fuckin record


Pick up a fuckin Mic and drop a track


OH...and I HOPE to GOD NK complains dat IM freepostin in here...fuckin asshole

Cruise Montana 08-12-05 11:19 AM

^I'll complain for you............................................... ....................... :)

noname 08-12-05 11:25 AM

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noname 08-13-05 05:12 PM

bump..............................................

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noname 08-13-05 11:51 PM

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.Barz Of Steel. 08-15-05 07:06 PM

This was feedback posted for Tha Q.
 
Wow at Tha Q doing text...

Checking them polls


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