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Mel Tingpoint vs taz
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10-18 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-10-05 at 03:07 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
taz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-05 02:51 PM.
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Mel Tingpoint has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-05 02:52 PM.
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Mel cant peep my sh*t dont swear he has virgin eyes*
After my 10 lines this cats L column will be devirginized His personals are swarmed wit lies he dont know me Wit guys he gets cozy sO wit girls he gets lonely Im battelin a true newbie who the fuck you be? He talkin bout guns but he dont have ballz ta shoot me He from rb now he rv tryna get the sites conjoined Well this cat met his match, im his melting point Cant mess wit a dude like him cuz him being gay is likely He standing on the corner fuckin dudes on the nightly |
g/l mel kid........let the best emcee win ya heard me
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If you don't get the wordplay don't vote
I'll put it like this u never had it, so put away the gimmicks taz elevating.......... nah! the sky's past your limit This text shit ain't for you, but I'ma still get down to biz yo Punches will cause this faggot to subside................ .......................................... he'll prolly go to Quiznos Mel is past average and better than you, taz eluding the clues Man you gotta dress to kill................. I guess text ain' suited for you I'm abusive so true, calamities hurting this herb U ain't a straight forward MC................ to win, I think your purpose is curved These irritating heads, I'ma kill these fleas, while your skill is seized Beat the skin of ya bitch as.................... ..................................taz still would'nt appeal to me |
yo uppin for votes people.....lets get to the final decisions/....
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Uppin ya'll................
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Voted For: taz
I think that Mel Tingpoint had a few good wordplays . . . concentrated well on dissing his oponent: fav. line :Man you gotta dress to kill................. I guess text ain' suited for you: like that line..Taz also had a few wordplays in there his flow was alot easier to follow .... did like Mel Tingpoint structure.......so it was tough to decide... but the thing that cause taz to get my vote was this line:He from rb now he rv tryna get the sites conjoined Well this cat met his match, im his melting point:wasn't hard hitting as it could be but it was the only personal in the entire battle ... both guys had a good drop doog luck to both.. keep writing |
yep uppin......
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Voted For: Mel Tingpoint
This text shit ain't for you, but I'ma still get down to biz yo Punches will cause this faggot to subside................ .......................................... he'll prolly go to Quiznos Mel is past average and better than you, taz eluding the clues Man you gotta dress to kill................. I guess text ain' suited for you vs. nothing Mel came with an okay verse. His concepts have all been used before but he flipped them decently. Nothing amazing in my eyes. He just came witty and harder. taz came played with homo punches and shit ive seen back in 04. flows for both were good. just the punches were the difference and thats was matters. so mel took this. hit up my battle vs docontinue at the top of FL. Thanks Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
sure thing uppin......
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uppin! let the votes run in yall wanna see who wins
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uppin for votes,, dont sleep on this yo...gutta get this over wit
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uppin yo......dont sleep on this please let the winner be revealed
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uppin... L.I's feedback was good enough, how long do u gotta type just for your vote to adequate, damn
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Voted For: taz
Mel cant peep my sh*t dont swear he has virgin eyes* After my 10 lines this cats L column will be devirginized ^^not much a punch here....2/10 His personals are swarmed wit lies he dont know me Wit guys he gets cozy sO wit girls he gets lonely ^^WITH girls he gets lonely?..make no sense..2/10 Im battelin a true newbie who the fuck you be? He talkin bout guns but he dont have ballz ta shoot me ^^man...this was weak...3/10 He from rb now he rv tryna get the sites conjoined Well this cat met his match, im his melting point ^^not much of a punch....2/10 Cant mess wit a dude like him cuz him being gay is likely He standing on the corner fuckin dudes on the nightly ^^basic...gay jokes gotta be creative as it's likely been done before...4/10 Ok...your verse didn't have enough str8 punches.It was more of self glorifing.Some,like the 2nd bar,didn't make much sense...as you said..he gets lonely around girls?If you said angry it woulda made sense.But lonely? I'll put it like this u never had it, so put away the gimmicks taz elevating.......... nah! the sky's past your limit ^^hmm....Ok i guess....5/10 This text shit ain't for you, but I'ma still get down to biz yo Punches will cause this faggot to subside................ .......................................... he'll prolly go to Quiznos ^^NO....2/10 Mel is past average and better than you, taz eluding the clues Man you gotta dress to kill................. I guess text ain' suited for you ^^NO....basic rhyming here too...2/10 I'm abusive so true, calamities hurting this herb U ain't a straight forward MC................ to win, I think your purpose is curved ^^zzzzzzzzz.....2/10 These irritating heads, I'ma kill these fleas, while your skill is seized Beat the skin of ya bitch as.................... ..................................taz still would'nt appeal to me ^^^not much of a punch...1/10 Man..aside from the 1st bar...there wasn't much in that verse I was feeling.I suggest some better wordplay and metas and such.I think you need to ease up on the dots.That only works if done correctly...which you didn't. WEAK BATTLE HERE!! Vote-Taz |
This was feedback posted for Mel Tingpoint
yo that shit wuz fire son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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natural see what ur saying, shoulda took 1 more minute to relize that...........uppin fo more votes ya'll
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This was feedback posted for taz
c'mon nigga............................................. ...
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uppin... natural killa is dumb as hell
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uppin like crazy people dont sleep on me damn, cant a cat get some votes?
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Voted For: taz
one sided haha Mel - ya structure was FUCKED disses just werent there.. thats that but like for real.. there was no flow cuz ive never seen a structure that bad even if you had wrote a dope verse (wich you didnt) id vote against you just for actually posting your verse with a structure that bad.. overall - 4/10 Taz - decent structure.. had some flow disses were pretty good too, nothin amazing you actually came wut some personals thats a good look, no doubt. overall - 6/10 WINNER - TAZ |
^^much appreciated yo......uppin for more votes...holla
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This was feedback posted for taz
should win.............................................
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This was feedback posted for Mel Tingpoint
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Voted For: Mel Tingpoint
Checking this Out what's good Mel I didnt know you where here. |
Yo I'm sorry abou that.........I'll get that Removed
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boy don't even try it...I'd merk yo ass to peices :nono: |
Voted For: Mel Tingpoint
I'll put it like this u never had it, so put away the gimmicks taz elevating.......... nah! the sky's past your limit This text shit ain't for you, but I'ma still get down to biz yo Punches will cause this faggot to subside................ .......................................... he'll prolly go to Quiznos Mel is past average and better than you, taz eluding the clues Man you gotta dress to kill................. I guess text ain' suited for you These irritating heads, I'ma kill these fleas, while your skill is seized Beat the skin of ya bitch as.................... ..................................taz still would'nt appeal to me ^word, solid wordplay, nothing too special, but funny.....last line, conecpt has been done before, but it was nicely flipped, you took this for sure vs Mel cant peep my sh*t dont swear he has virgin eyes* After my 10 lines this cats L column will be devirginized ^and even that was weak/played, need stronger concepts man, think of wittier more creative punches, that verse was too basic......and IMO, you should not be winning v/mel tingpot |
yo, mel, pm strobe about this shit, he can get d/r fuckin newb votes removed, this is grabage.........and plus this dude was banned for cheating, so he probly cheated here...word.
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thanks man... uppin
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