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13th. 08-10-05 02:47 PM

Mad Knight vs Sin`cere
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-10-05 at 03:17 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

System 08-10-05 02:50 PM

Sin`cere has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-05 02:50 PM.

System 08-10-05 02:53 PM

Mad Knight has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-05 02:53 PM.

AssasSINation 08-10-05 03:44 PM

Mad Knight?... WTF u aint even mad or bad, but really who cares
Cuz the only way ull win too~knight* is if I got DQued in a nightmare
MK actually thinks he good but that was just the daily joke today
Cuz he aint a serial** killer in text, and ur M aint a W cuz u aint Special K
Got this done like if I finished my test early… but wait u cant even teach
Like if u askin for brakes ull just break a leg and that aint a figure of speech
So jus face it u horribly suck like a bad magician that just wont leave
Cuz u must have a ghost writer by the way he has New Tricks up a sleeve

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1st- *tonight* rest is undastandable
2nd- **cereal** it ties up with the cereal Special K and also it is sayin that he aint special ok, K meanin OK.....
3rd- undastandable
4th- U kno how bad magicians have tricks up his sleeves well his alias well his A.K.A. name is New Tricks....up a sleeve....

If u dont undastand then plz...dont vote....

.....All votes here would be returned honestly if wanted.....

13th. 08-10-05 06:20 PM

O fuck it i cant be assed waiting AGES to post so here goes.....

Ya small time like ya old crew, I'll take one bite to swallow ya frame…
Mmmmmmm…shit is tasty to, like extenstions to ya old crews name…
666,will leave even the Devil crying, after reads and suffers the wack curse…
And U already had wack punches in PLL..why waste more in this verse...
Wi my power I turn this bitch into a steak,…..after 3 bars this bitch is fryin…
Sinners Truth......that’s guess like people wit broken legs………..your lyin…
With your bars n you in the dark now, can u still see who u against???…
When you get that tingling in ur toes n fingers,thats ur losin 6th Sense
My so Godly verse are makin u look like the devil,im send ya back to hell..
I dont know whats more embarrasin, your verse or your rejection from LL

Explanations:
1st bar: His old crew which he left was called MMM(Malicious Military Mentality)
2nd bar: His name was Triple Sixes(666) which is the number of the Devil
Also I beat him something like 10-0 in PLL!!!
3rd bar:Sinners Truth is in his Title
4th Bar:Just a Play on is old name!!!
Last Bar:He begged to get back into LL but Daubs said NO!!!

13th. 08-10-05 06:22 PM

rite i didnt even knew u dropped dawg but g'luck......
UPPIN..............

AssasSINation 08-10-05 08:01 PM

yea man i did....lol......up................................ .....

Mel Tingpoint 08-10-05 08:52 PM

Voted For: Sin`cere

Sin'cere:
Mad Knight?... WTF u aint even mad or bad, but really who cares
Cuz the only way ull win too~knight* is if I got DQued in a nightmare
MK actually thinks he good but that was just the daily joke today
Cuz he aint a serial** killer in text, and ur M aint a W cuz u aint Special K
Got this done like if I finished my test early… but wait u cant even teach
Like if u askin for brakes ull just break a leg and that aint a figure of speech
So jus face it u horribly suck like a bad magician that just wont leave
Cuz u must have a ghost writer by the way he has New Tricks up a sleeve
6.5/10

Mad Knight:
Ya small time like ya old crew, I'll take one bite to swallow ya frame…
Mmmmmmm…shit is tasty to, like extenstions to ya old crews name…
666,will leave even the Devil crying, after reads and suffers the wack curse…
And U already had wack punches in PLL..why waste more in this verse...
Wi my power I turn this bitch into a steak,…..after 3 bars this bitch is fryin…
Sinners Truth......that’s guess like people wit broken legs………..your lyin…
With your bars n you in the dark now, can u still see who u against???…
When you get that tingling in ur toes n fingers,thats ur losin 6th Sense…
My so Godly verse are makin u look like the devil,im send ya back to hell..
I dont know whats more embarrasin, your verse or your rejection from LL…
6/10

v/Sin'cere... he had a better verse not really a good battle, u should'nt have to explain your punches we'll understand

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

E.C 08-11-05 05:15 AM

This was feedback posted for Mad Knight
 
LMAO mk u owned him lol nice verse mate...........

Journal!st 08-11-05 05:30 AM

Voted For: Mad Knight

ayo hands down man mad u got this homie ur punchs stuck and hit harder and ur metaz killed man...............sixth you good and i think you couold have done way better homie but ya couldnt get it to me man.........mad u got me man i liked the flow and vocab man real....RTF on my battles with spoken word, b-mac, rile1, and black frostbite they all need to close man........

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Daubs 08-11-05 05:34 AM

This was feedback posted for Sin`cere
 
polls .

AssasSINation 08-11-05 02:30 PM

uppin this...........................................

13th. 08-11-05 07:13 PM

uppin this shit........................................

Signore El Eye 08-11-05 08:10 PM

This was feedback posted for Mad Knight
 
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

13th. 08-12-05 07:53 AM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

AssasSINation 08-12-05 02:27 PM

wow....it was 1-1 now 0-0.......up................

AssasSINation 08-12-05 07:57 PM

up......................up...............up.......

13th. 08-13-05 02:40 PM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn n

AssasSINation 08-13-05 07:16 PM

up..............up................................

leady 08-15-05 10:46 AM

This was feedback posted for Mad Knight
 
lookin at polls....................................

AssasSINation 08-16-05 08:34 AM

up................................up..............

AssasSINation 08-18-05 07:58 PM

up.....up.........up...........up................. .

AssasSINation 08-19-05 04:18 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppp......................

AssasSINation 08-19-05 07:23 PM

heeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyy upppppppppppp sssssssshhhiiiiiiiitttttttt........

AssasSINation 08-20-05 12:38 AM

vooooooooootttttttttteeeeeeeee.........nooooooooww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

AssasSINation 08-20-05 10:36 PM

upppppppp....................up...................

AssasSINation 08-21-05 12:57 PM

....................can u say up...................

AssasSINation 08-21-05 05:23 PM

..............can u say up again??????????????????

AssasSINation 08-22-05 05:28 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppp................... .....

AssasSINation 08-23-05 04:16 PM

Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppp>..............

AssasSINation 08-24-05 04:12 PM

that thing that says above my post right now i tink it says up........

Ryan Hughes 08-24-05 04:41 PM

Voted For: Mad Knight

Mad Knight?... WTF u aint even mad or bad, but really who cares
Cuz the only way ull win too~knight* is if I got DQued in a nightmare
^^^Good Opener...mixed wit the personal
MK actually thinks he good but that was just the daily joke today
Cuz he aint a serial** killer in text, and ur M aint a W cuz u aint Special K
^^^Ight Punch Heard Special K line Alot Little Played
Got this done like if I finished my test early… but wait u cant even teach
Like if u askin for brakes ull just break a leg and that aint a figure of speech
^^^Not that hard hittin weak
So jus face it u horribly suck like a bad magician that just wont leave
Cuz u must have a ghost writer by the way he has New Tricks up a sleeve
^^^Good personal CLoser

Ya small time like ya old crew, I'll take one bite to swallow ya frame…
Mmmmmmm…shit is tasty to, like extenstions to ya old crews name…
^^^Good Personal
666,will leave even the Devil crying, after reads and suffers the wack curse…
And U already had wack punches in PLL..why waste more in this verse...
^^^Good PERsonal Again nice punch
Wi my power I turn this bitch into a steak,…..after 3 bars this bitch is fryin…
Sinners Truth......that’s guess like people wit broken legs………..your lyin…
^^^Good punch
With your bars n you in the dark now, can u still see who u against???…
When you get that tingling in ur toes n fingers,thats ur losin 6th Sense…
^^^Good personal i like this one
My so Godly verse are makin u look like the devil,im send ya back to hell..
I dont know whats more embarrasin, your verse or your rejection from LL…
^^^Nice Closer Wit the personal

V/Mad Knight.....this was a good battle both came wit it in there verse's.....but ima ggive it to mk he came wit lots of personals an original punchs that were hard hittin wit good structure....Sin u had a good verse also but u feel in some areas in ur punchs an some were little played No hate...Work on those things......
RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED
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AssasSINation 08-26-05 05:23 PM

.............up................up................. ...

AssasSINation 08-26-05 09:57 PM

...........................up..................... ..

AssasSINation 08-27-05 10:18 AM

.............up..............up...................

AssasSINation 08-27-05 05:52 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppp.............

AssasSINation 08-27-05 11:28 PM

..................up.............................. .

.Mystique. 08-28-05 01:24 PM

Voted For: Mad Knight

Sin

Mad Knight?... WTF u aint even mad or bad, but really who cares
Cuz the only way ull win too~knight* is if I got DQued in a nightmare
No bad opener
MK actually thinks he good but that was just the daily joke today
Cuz he aint a serial** killer in text, and ur M aint a W cuz u aint Special K
ok i guess
Got this done like if I finished my test early… but wait u cant even teach
Like if u askin for brakes ull just break a leg and that aint a figure of speech
no
So jus face it u horribly suck like a bad magician that just wont leave
Cuz u must have a ghost writer by the way he has New Tricks up a sleeve
ummm okay i guess

Punches weren there nor was personals. No multis or metaphors.. Your verse had nothing. Elevate all around 2/10

Mad Knight

Ya small time like ya old crew, I'll take one bite to swallow ya frame…
Mmmmmmm…shit is tasty to, like extenstions to ya old crews name…
okay
666,will leave even the Devil crying, after reads and suffers the wack curse…
And U already had wack punches in PLL..why waste more in this verse...
Good punch
Wi my power I turn this bitch into a steak,…..after 3 bars this bitch is fryin…
Sinners Truth......that’s guess like people wit broken legs………..your lyin…
Okay
With your bars n you in the dark now, can u still see who u against???…
When you get that tingling in ur toes n fingers,thats ur losin 6th Sense…
okay
My so Godly verse are makin u look like the devil,im send ya back to hell..
I dont know whats more embarrasin, your verse or your rejection from LL…
Good closure haha

Good verse. Punches an personals. could use multis. othern then that you won this battle hands down..

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13th. 08-28-05 02:08 PM

thanx uppin........................................

Pro. 08-28-05 02:40 PM

Voted For: Mad Knight

Sin's break down!

Mad Knight?... WTF u aint even mad or bad, but really who cares
Cuz the only way ull win too~knight* is if I got DQued in a nightmare
This was a aiight opener...it was sorta stretched but it was O.K...nice play on tha name tho'....6/10

MK actually thinks he good but that was just the daily joke today
Cuz he aint a serial** killer in text, and ur M aint a W cuz u aint Special K
That really didnt make sense..I know what u where tryin ta say,but itdidnt have any effect..4/10

Got this done like if I finished my test early… but wait u cant even teach
Like if u askin for brakes ull just break a leg and that aint a figure of speech
WTF!?!....Wack punch period....and it was stretched like Whoa!..1/10

So jus face it u horribly suck like a bad magician that just wont leave
Cuz u must have a ghost writer by the way he has New Tricks up a sleeve
I like tha name play on this maybe ur best punch..but tha begining line was played...7/10

overall your verse needed more impact an better personals...
MadKnight
breakdown!

Ya small time like ya old crew, I'll take one bite to swallow ya frame…
Mmmmmmm…shit is tasty to, like extenstions to ya old crews name…
I like tha play on tha crew name...aiight punch,an a okay opener! 7/10

666,will leave even the Devil crying, after reads and suffers the wack curse…
And U already had wack punches in PLL..why waste more in this verse...
personal play on tha name...an personal from PLL...aiight too..7/10

Wi my power I turn this bitch into a steak,…..after 3 bars this bitch is fryin…
Sinners Truth......that’s guess like people wit broken legs………..your lyin…
Another play on tha name..but tha punch is played...5/10

With your bars n you in the dark now, can u still see who u against???…
When you get that tingling in ur toes n fingers,thats ur losin 6th Sense…
Really played as fuck....Im sorry,But it is!...personal was nuffin!0/10

My so Godly verse are makin u look like the devil,im send ya back to hell..
I dont know whats more embarrasin, your verse or your rejection from LL…
Hah!...Own'd. 9/10...cuz its true.

overall tha structure was nice,but sorta hard ta catch...no multi's(Who Cares!),an alot of personals on tha names an alias's...

Madknight gets Tha VOTE!!


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