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Natural killa vs Technical
Battle Rules:
ALL EXPLAINED VOTES WILL BE RETURNED BY ME AND TECHNICAL :thumbup: ^^so you know you not wasting your time 8-12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting NO Hate NO d/r NO Bullshit 3-0 KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-14-05 at 01:07 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 01:08 AM.
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Technical has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 01:51 AM.
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he's taste'n the sweep,n base'n on heat,it's like he surrounds the winter
n his location is "the ring" because he's wrapped around my finger so call this abuse,cuz wat took u a voyage to move,I did in it one 'trip-pull'(triple) but least ur name's correct,cause ya 'techs'(text) ain't worth one 'nical'(nikel) he's dying for ranking,n call him a blanket,cuz he's in this for heating and he don't get pussy,naw, n he knows it too,his interest is beating I'm tired of all these fans,he's callin me fam,his brain's messed up,like I spinned it cuz,Technical's seeing 'real-asian'(relation) to me,like I had my eyes squinted tech's feelin fan's bridge,cuz his flows been stopped by a sealed bandage n he thought veyetal would no-show,so he spit in his real language open mic's acting,his tactic's to lie,i got his bitch strapped to be mine his 1st post in a month,why?,well take out the techs,'n flip it back,to realize** **technical...take out tech...nical...flip it backwards...lacin... lacing means to get sprayed. understand both verses or don't vote...good luck technical :thumbup: |
where you at homie?.....don't forget you gotta post tonight man......
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This guy'll find his limbs distorted, cuz this God spittin dat fire that'll cost ya sins
joust n corpse this bitch, fact is, u get 'less feed' than 'disobediant foster kids'!!! I'll let this dick die n vanish, shut down ya port yo(puerto), I'll maim hispanics this kid's lame and average, truth is, you have no NATURAL skill or talent!! droppin you like wood from a pinecone, gunz to ur dome'll get ur mind blown believe I time hoes, you bitch about ur feats(feet) more than a female wif 9 toes!! my punchlines'll get this newbie scared, bomb ur words n then defuse dese queers not to worry u shouldnt stare, but Quote:
^you're support is more useless than wooden chairs! It's obvious that this dude's whack, lay ya head on ya pillow, where you snooze at you already know u gon lose cat....... would make u look like an ass but it seems Ridicule's hands are tied tryna do that!!* *- Ridicule and him are tied(battle votes), look up Ridicule, the meaning, haha |
Voted For: Natural killa
Structure-Natural killa, i got him becuz....his structure was more intact than tech's tech u were all over da place, try cleanin that up a bit....some say structure wins battles Personals-Natural killa go more personals links are prooof so they are good at that...tech, ur personals were played and didnt were basic rhyme scheme, make them more creative Punches-Both had ok punches but NK was more fresh and hard hitting......tech had some good punches too but not all of them were hard hitting. up on that yo. Multis-NK had better multis in fact tech bairly had multis at all so it was hands down nk.....nice job man Originality-Both Pretty original so cant really give it to anyone.....so this catergorie is a tie yo....... V/NATURAL KILLA please rtf on my sig link |
wtf..why'd you put it at 20 posts?..shoulda put it at 200, these newbies are gonna raid thsi thread..
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^^yea....yo...get that vote removed...even I have to admit that vote was conspicously a d/r....I shoulda put 200...sorry man..
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Voted For: Natural killa
he's taste'n the sweep,n base'n on heat,it's like he surrounds the winter n his location is "the ring" because he's wrapped around my finger ^^^kinda decent, with the wittiness and shit, but not too hard of a punch so call this abuse,cuz wat took u a voyage to move,I did in it one 'trip-pull'(triple) but least ur name's correct,cause ya 'techs'(text) ain't worth one 'nical'(nikel) ^^^really forced, didn't hit hard. I'm tired of all these fans,he's callin me fam,his brain's messed up,like I spinned it cuz,Technical's seeing 'real-asian'(relation) to me,like I had my eyes squinted ^^ not a punch, its a personal or whatever, but its not dissin him at all. ^^ all and all i think u had quite a bit forced wordplay... u need to read more good battles and learn how to word your punches better. tech- you're support is more useless than wooden chairs! ^^ real played concept guy'll find his limbs distorted, cuz this God spittin dat fire that'll cost ya sins joust n corpse this bitch, fact is, u get 'less feed' than 'disobediant foster kids'!!! I'll let this dick die n vanish, shut down ya port yo(puerto), I'll maim hispanics this kid's lame and average, truth is, you have no NATURAL skill or talent!! ^^ not worded good for a good witty punch. .. also u had some forced lines both- aint really get how to word punches to hit real hard, but i think natural had wittier lines that if worded better woulda hit well. votes goin to him cuz his verse had potential .. return the vote link in my sig!!!! |
yay.....*runs to return favor*....................
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Voted For: Natural killa
yo this woz a really (and i mean really) close battle but imma give this to NK becuz of his flow, as Technical had a really nice verse but i found myself rushing wen reading it, to fit in the lines, so quite a few of the lines seemed abit too stretched, especially ur closer. thats the only reason that im givin this to NK though cuz you both had amazin verses wit gud punchlines. just work on ur flow a bit T, and try and make the lines that bit shorter. im gonna go wit NK on this one. no hate |
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