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pEACE bACK vs taz
Battle Rules:
10-16 LINES No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO 4-1 KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-11-05 at 03:04 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
taz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 02:35 PM.
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Peace Back has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 02:36 PM.
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This dude lost his peace no he is forever whack
Nigga comes up to me askin for his peaceback* I aint got shit fo ya except a L in ya column Ill teach ya how to rap make sure u buy all my volumes You a newbie but aint new to me ill rip ya boy Cats like you act a fool my bombs deployed Your a lyrical disaster nigga im ya master bow down You a bow wow look a like beat me sike laugh out loud Cant beat me unless you cheat you a biting addict Rapped for a month beat a couple a chumps now u back at it Well i caught onto your cheating now slow ya role Take ya ass back to ya house of crack says stone cold** *-His name is peace back just some word play i guess **-stone cold's phrase "Cuz Stone Cold Said So" |
^^^^Cant beat me unless you cheat you a biting addict
Rapped for a month beat a couple a chumps now u back at it to clarify that.......now hes back at biting rhymes again |
Yo, you're just another victim by the name of Taz
I'm sending you to lyrical Alcatraz You spin around pretenging to be a tornado I'll stomp you on the ground like a ripe tomato Squeeze your guts out make you bloody and Juicy You're like Ricky ReTardo from I Love Lucy You're reduced to a storm but I'm the hurricane while your boyfriends take turns on you running the train This battle will be unlike your last bout Cuz this time YOU'RE gonna get technically knocked out Call your aunty and your uncle, nephews and nieces Cuz I'l rip you a new ass and tear you to "peaces" When I'm done, you'll be on a stretcher wishin That I didn't just put you in the rap-Tazmission YOu're biggest mistake is my wrath you unleashed Join the other losers cuz you've just been peaced Explanations: Alcatraz is a high security prison where the worst of the worst are kept. Taz, the cartoon character, spins in a tornado Taz(z) the (ex)pro-wrestler does the Tazmission, which is a choke out, finisher move I said Retardo (like retarded) instead of Ricardo |
For those that don't know, when you get the train run on you (usually to a girl), that's when you suck a dick while you're getting fucked from behind
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Voted For: taz
This dude lost his peace no he is forever whack Nigga comes up to me askin for his peaceback* ^^comes up asking you?...give proof..or it's a fake personal...2/10 I aint got shit fo ya except a L in ya column Ill teach ya how to rap make sure u buy all my volumes ^^didn't rhyme...self glorifing..no punch...2/10 You a newbie but aint new to me ill rip ya boy Cats like you act a fool my bombs deployed ^^not much of a punch again...2/10 Your a lyrical disaster nigga im ya master bow down You a bow wow look a like beat me sike laugh out loud ^^finnaly a punch...but weak...4/10 Cant beat me unless you cheat you a biting addict Rapped for a month beat a couple a chumps now u back at it ^^he beat chumps?...post his battle records to prove it..4/10 Well i caught onto your cheating now slow ya role Take ya ass back to ya house of crack says stone cold** ^^meh...ur best bar....5/10 Weak verse here Taz.I thought you were not dissing enough.That 1st bar...did he ask you that?If so...post a link...if he didn't...fake personal.2nd and 3rd bars were not punches...they were self glorifing.Focus on dissing.The other bars after were punches..but they were weak.But at least ya flow was ight. Yo, you're just another victim by the name of Taz I'm sending you to lyrical Alcatraz ^^flowed bad....weak and basic...1/10 You spin around pretenging to be a tornado I'll stomp you on the ground like a ripe tomato ^^Not a punch...0/10 Squeeze your guts out make you bloody and Juicy You're like Ricky ReTardo from I Love Lucy ^^basic....why is he like ricky?..say y...2/10 You're reduced to a storm but I'm the hurricane while your boyfriends take turns on you running the train ^^c'mon...weak....2/10 This battle will be unlike your last bout Cuz this time YOU'RE gonna get technically knocked out ^^not a punch....1/10 Call your aunty and your uncle, nephews and nieces Cuz I'l rip you a new ass and tear you to "peaces" ^^*sigh*....not a punch...1/10 When I'm done, you'll be on a stretcher wishin That I didn't just put you in the rap-Tazmission ^^weak...1/10 YOu're biggest mistake is my wrath you unleashed Join the other losers cuz you've just been peaced ^^stop ...just diss....0/10 Ok...you had even more self glorifing that Taz did.About 90% of your verse consisted of it.And the punches you had...had no effect..they were weak.And some just came outta now where.LIke...why is he like that Ricky guy?Say why..don't just say he's like the ricky guy and end it.The Taz from wrestling was a good concept...but executed horribly. Vote-Taz RTF BELOW OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203538 |
Voted For: Peace Back
I liked both verses.. didnt see much weaknesses.. structure of both was gold.. flow was easily visible.. im gonna give this vote to peace back cuz hes got more punches and better personals.. taz, u had better multis but I couldnt give u the vote just for that.. so this time.. v/peace back Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Not good feedback phreenapdizzle^ BUT STILL UPPING FOR GOOD WELL EXPLAINED VOTES>>>>>k
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Voted For: Peace Back
peace back: Yo, you're just another victim by the name of Taz I'm sending you to lyrical Alcatraz ^^^^VERY WEAK OPENER...U DIDN'T MAKE ANY SENSE WITH DIS SHIT You spin around pretenging to be a tornado I'll stomp you on the ground like a ripe tomato ^^^NO Squeeze your guts out make you bloody and Juicy You're like Ricky ReTardo from I Love Lucy ^^^LMAOOOO....WOW SUPER WACK You're reduced to a storm but I'm the hurricane while your boyfriends take turns on you running the train ^^^LOL FUNNY SHIT This battle will be unlike your last bout Cuz this time YOU'RE gonna get technically knocked out ^^^NO...WHERE'S YA CREATIVITY DUDE Call your aunty and your uncle, nephews and nieces Cuz I'l rip you a new ass and tear you to "peaces" ^^^ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ When I'm done, you'll be on a stretcher wishin That I didn't just put you in the rap-Tazmission ^^^UR BEST LINE SO FAR FAM...GOOD NAME PLAY YOu're biggest mistake is my wrath you unleashed Join the other losers cuz you've just been peaced ^^WEAK CLOSER... taz: This dude lost his peace no he is forever whack Nigga comes up to me askin for his peaceback* ^^^DIS IS NOT WORDPLAY FAM..PLUS U MADE NO SENSE...CAME 2 U ASKIN 4 HIS PEACE BACK?? I aint got shit fo ya except a L in ya column Ill teach ya how to rap make sure u buy all my volumes ^^NO You a newbie but aint new to me ill rip ya boy Cats like you act a fool my bombs deployed ^^^LOL...WHUT DA FUCK Your a lyrical disaster nigga im ya master bow down You a bow wow look a like beat me sike laugh out loud ^^^BOW WOW LINES R PLAYED N WACK Cant beat me unless you cheat you a biting addict Rapped for a month beat a couple a chumps now u back at it ^^^DIS IS NOT A DISS FAM Well i caught onto your cheating now slow ya role Take ya ass back to ya house of crack says stone cold** ^^^^^LMAOOOOOOOOO YO HOW OLD R U FAM.. DIS WAS A WACK ASS BATTLE NO PUNCHLINES...PEACE HAD DA ONLY PERSONAL...SO HE GETS MY VOTE BOTH OF U NEED DA WORK ON YA SHIT 4REAL |
hey dude, try not voting if u dont understand...^^
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This was feedback posted for taz
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin for some votes, come on people dont sleep on this shit
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Voted For: taz
Blah I'll break this down punch by punch and then show some categories. This dude lost his peace no he is forever whack Nigga comes up to me askin for his peaceback* Ok nameplay, not a great punch or personal I aint got shit fo ya except a L in ya column Ill teach ya how to rap make sure u buy all my volumes No/ self glor and filler. You a newbie but aint new to me ill rip ya boy Cats like you act a fool my bombs deployed No creativity in wordplay sims or metas, no punch, self glor Your a lyrical disaster nigga im ya master bow down You a bow wow look a like beat me sike laugh out loud Huh? Lol this is just confusing but ok punch i guess Cant beat me unless you cheat you a biting addict Rapped for a month beat a couple a chumps now u back at it Would be a dece personal if u had proof Well i caught onto your cheating now slow ya role Take ya ass back to ya house of crack says stone cold** I dont get it... stone cold? Need to work on losing the self glor and adding more simlies and punching with every bar. Flow was decent. Yo, you're just another victim by the name of Taz I'm sending you to lyrical Alcatraz ^No, alcatraz is a prison. for criminals. You spin around pretenging to be a tornado I'll stomp you on the ground like a ripe tomato No creativity. You're just stating facts that arent even personal Squeeze your guts out make you bloody and Juicy You're like Ricky ReTardo from I Love Lucy .....Dope wordplay? You're reduced to a storm but I'm the hurricane while your boyfriends take turns on you running the train what? This battle will be unlike your last bout Cuz this time YOU'RE gonna get technically knocked out no... you're complimenting his last battle Call your aunty and your uncle, nephews and nieces Cuz I'l rip you a new ass and tear you to "peaces" "doesnt mean its wordplay cause its in your name" When I'm done, you'll be on a stretcher wishin That I didn't just put you in the rap-Tazmission nobody watches wrestling... YOu're biggest mistake is my wrath you unleashed Join the other losers cuz you've just been peaced Hell no. Prewritten verse end, no punch at all. You need extensive work on being creative with wordplay. You have a basic rap foundation with some ok vocab and good flow, work on your punchlines, they need to be witty and not just stating things. pz v/ taz |
BAm!
Yo kid, i respect ya for votin' and feedback, but yo, you need to take your head outta your ass and get back to reality bro. I think you would've understood alot more, and that's your problem. yeah, ok, my shit was cheesy, no doubt, but i need to clue you in: I know Alcatraz is for criminals, which is why i said "lyrical Alcatraz" - a prison for lyrical criminals who suck at their lyrics (not saying you suck outside of the battle, Taz)... not to corrupt your innocent mind, but getting the train run on you is suckin a dick and getting fucked from behind (in 2 places, if you're a girl); don' tyou watch porn? plus, runnin the train w/ his bf is saying he's a fag. ... i wasn't complimenting his past match, just turning it against him. ... and yeah, plenty of people watch wrestling, but that is completely irrelevent - that is me putting taz in his own choke-out move (which is pretty insulting). Yo, battle me. set it up, then pm me |
Yo bam.. i think uve just been peaced back.. im not saying taz doesnt deserve a vote its not like that.. but bam didnt say one good thing about either verse.. and he just picked a person to vote for.. notice he talked shit on every part of both ur verses.. funk that
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ok dont freepost in my battlethread looking for explained votes.............
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Voted For: taz
Structure-Taz, both had whack structure but taz was close to being good structure his had better flow......Peace back had ok flow but it was just not good enough my man Personals-Taz got peace back on a couple of personals peace back ur verse was all about self glorification...nothing but prazing ur name....... Punches-Taz had better punches had more creative verse....peace back u gutta loosin up a bit take this loss as an example and bounce back hard u got potential man.... Originality-Taz had more fresh verse.....and was harder hitting, peace back i saw ur verse coming it was all played out but dont get down on urself...just bounce back and keep battelin :thumbup: V/Taz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: taz
Structure-Both had pretty bad structure but taz had better structure his flow was far better, peace back p/m me ill battle you Personals-Taz had hott personals, was fealin that peace back ur shit was all about ur name......gutta actually hit at ur opponent Punches-Taz once again had better punches.....peace back was all about his name wasnt feelin it......gutta up on those tings man...... Originality-Both pretty original but taz had fresher disses that hit hard and was appealin......peace back kinda played wasnt fealin it...... vocab-both didnt have vocab......so i cant vote on this topic.......so both up on that............. V/TAZ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yea, fealin the love.....still uppin.......but thats 4-1....me isnt that tko? iight coo coo
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This was feedback posted for Peace Back
both of yall were madd good but imma have to go wit peace back on this one...his flow was crazy and so was the whole ryme...i cant actually vote yet but if i could...v0te=peace back
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