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KillaMike vs Law_Jr
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-14-05 at 03:56 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Law_Jr has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 03:57 PM.
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KiLLaMiKe has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 04:01 PM.
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Dude wanna battle i'll give ima give it 2 ya right
cuz my rap flows iz like a hippie outta sight you failed to realize your fukiin ass at battlin especially that gay ass line "leave ya head rattlin" musta been high when he battled me i kno it ima end this with weak rhymes cuz i kno u aint shit |
This Newb Accepted tha battle what the fuck was he thinkin
He Probably PMSin Cuz hiz Pussy Always Stinkin Dudes so fukin poor couldnt afford computer see So when he wants to battle he goes to the library This is just practice, cmon its business man you will always find this nigga wit a dick in his hand |
the second one is what it shoulda been...................................
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This dude gets no pussy he has NO Fukin Game
When girls turn lesbian he always takes the blame He's no competion jus a chip of the 'ol block this battle will be stuffed away like old gym socks Im'ing me askin 2 battle, dudes pretty desperate Dont ask him about pussy cuz dicks his favorite |
how tha hell dude gon post 2 verses, that second one dont count yo
uppin............................................. |
Voted For: Law_Jr
wow this was a weak battle killamike - u had no punches, personals no nothing in your verse. your flow was ok and thats it. work on coming up with some kinda punches. theres tutorials and everything man take your time to read those Law_Jr - your verse was almost as bad except tha fact that u had the gym socks line. thats the only reason you won. other than that you need to read those tutorials too. and desperate and favorite dont rhyme very weak battle but Lw_Jr wins cause he had the only semi decent punch. |
i wasnt tryna really come wit it cuz he i knew he was weak
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i wasnt tryna really come wit it cuz he i knew he was weak
des-per-ate fav-o-rite if you say it right they do rhyme |
des-per-ate
fav-o-rite if you say it right they do rhyme |
Voted For: Law_Jr
This dude gets no pussy he has NO Fukin Game When girls turn lesbian he always takes the blame ^Nice opener....5/10^ He's no competion jus a chip of the 'ol block this battle will be stuffed away like old gym socks ^Nice comparison good diss fa sho 6/10^ Im'ing me askin 2 battle, dudes pretty desperate Dont ask him about pussy cuz dicks his favorite ^extremely weak closer didnt even rhyme lol 0/10^ overall 5/10 ur rhymes need work, ur disses was iight fo the hole 6 lines u had....multis vocab was weak rhyme scheme wasnt that great...but better dan ur opponent This Newb Accepted tha battle what the fuck was he thinkin He Probably PMSin Cuz hiz Pussy Always Stinkin ^I dont think pussy's stink when u have pms...thats like yeast infection pal.....bad opener 3/10^ Dudes so fukin poor couldnt afford computer see So when he wants to battle he goes to the library ^Ok diss not that hott....but iight 4/10^ This is just practice, cmon its business man you will always find this nigga wit a dick in his hand ^better closer than ur opponent but not good enough 4/10^ over all 4/10 structure was not that great, make sure ur lines end up at the same point.....make sure ur disses actually dis sur opponent man..... V/law_jr please rtf since i took the time to analyze ur battle :thumbup: |
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^^good example of pre-written...how come u have 2 verses...saving them for the right time my friend?.........."lowers respect for killamike" :nono: |
This was feedback posted for Law_Jr
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: Law_Jr
This Newb Accepted tha battle what the fuck was he thinkin He Probably PMSin Cuz hiz Pussy Always Stinkin ^^Weak.... Dudes so fukin poor couldnt afford computer see So when he wants to battle he goes to the library ^^No......basic This is just practice, cmon its business man you will always find this nigga wit a dick in his hand ^^NO played concept....an weak closer.... This dude gets no pussy he has NO Fukin Game When girls turn lesbian he always takes the blame ^^Ight Good Opener He's no competion jus a chip of the 'ol block this battle will be stuffed away like old gym socks ^^Ight... Im'ing me askin 2 battle, dudes pretty desperate Dont ask him about pussy cuz dicks his favorite ^^Naw weak closer V/Law_jr.....this was a ight battle.....Killa came wit some weak punchs an played concepts no wordplay or personals....No Hate work on those things...Law u came wit a verse that had good structure...but some ur punchs were a little weak....Jus Work on them but u get this wit a solid verse........ RETURN THE FAVOR OR I""LL REMOVE THIS VOTE AN NEVER GIVE U ANOTHER HONEST VOTE AGIAN>>>>. |
Voted For: Law_Jr
Vote: Law Im not explaining anything :) |
Voted For: Law_Jr
wack battle...both had played lines no punches as for me...flows were off...and most lines didnt make much sense...but this nigga got this cos at least he threw out some sense..and he hit a lil harder..besides the structure less verse his own was better...mike when u battlin try not to pour somuch enphasis on pussy and shit same goes to u too nigga.. vote on mine...honest votes plz thanx...and keep workin to elevate:thumbup: |
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