Moral vs Flow Verse
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-12-05 at 05:55 AM

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flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 09:42 PM.

Rhymes are preschool like children stories behind them is always moral
This battle is for fun and games with you I am just going to toil

I would call you an: ass: but that we already know
Simple because of the fact when u spit only: shit flows:

Even if you were a: cingular: rapper u still couldn’t: raise a bar:
Though you just been: murder: I still don’t consider you: raw:

And like the: alphabet: it will take 22 tries before you get a: W:
Take: Common’s: advise and: Go: get off RV cause no one like you

Moral has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 10:03 PM.

Record's 4-7 Your Win Percentage Is Less Then The Systems
It's Proven Flow Verse Is Destined To Fall, You Infested Victim
Your Elevation Aint Changing, It's Sort Of Like Your IP Number
You Couldn't Put Me In Check If, My Feet You Put Nike's Under
6-10 Lines Why Waiste My Verse When I Don't Need A Word
Your Resemblence Presence Strong Obssesions, A Weed Herb
For Vote's Your Catching Range Checks, Verse Don't Got Flows
Out Of A Scale 1 To 10 Your At It's Worse A -10 You Compose
Don't Need 10 Line's, Cause I Didn't Lose You Don't Convince Me
All I Know Is Your On Your Verse Sucks More Then Monica Lewenski

upping for votes . . . lets try to get this over quick

Voted For: Moral

Record's 4-7 Your Win Percentage Is Less Then The Systems
It's Proven Flow Verse Is Destined To Fall, You Infested Victim
iight goo
Your Elevation Aint Changing, It's Sort Of Like Your IP Number
You Couldn't Put Me In Check If, My Feet You Put Nike's Under
nice
6-10 Lines Why Waiste My Verse When I Don't Need A Word
Your Resemblence Presence Strong Obssesions, A Weed Herb
good
For Vote's Your Catching Range Checks, Verse Don't Got Flows
Out Of A Scale 1 To 10 Your At It's Worse A -10 You Compose
good
Don't Need 10 Line's, Cause I Didn't Lose You Don't Convince Me
All I Know Is Your On Your Verse Sucks More Then Monica Lewenski
good closer

vs

Rhymes are preschool like children stories behind them is always moral
This battle is for fun and games with you I am just going to toil
no
I would call you an: ass: but that we already know
Simple because of the fact when u spit only: shit flows:
eh
Even if you were a: cingular: rapper u still couldn’t: raise a bar:
Though you just been: murder: I still don’t consider you: raw:
no
And like the: alphabet: it will take 22 tries before you get a: W:
Take: Common’s: advise and: Go: get off RV cause no one like you
bad closer

v/ moral cuz his was just better and the other guy was like WTF it was a weak battle from flow and a good verse from moral but you know this is a land slide so yea v/moral

upping for more explain votes comon ppl . . .. .........

Voted For: Moral

Flaw verse
ok well your stucture and flow is good, but shit you are not creative at all, you came weak with punchlines, some lines just wasn't really gettin either, you need to get creative man you need to lay down soem personals as well to make it seem more like your actually dissing him, but anyway keep elevatin 1

Moral: hmm not bad a lot of your lines i wasn't gettin, a lot of your lines was mixed like lines that shoulda been metas were similes, some that were suppose to be similes metas just not really workin there, but anyway you had more creativity then your openant and thats why i choose to vote for you.

Voted For: Moral

Rhymes are preschool like children stories behind them is always moral
This battle is for fun and games with you I am just going to toil
^^didn't rhyme and punch was shit...2/10
I would call you an: ass: but that we already know
Simple because of the fact when u spit only: shit flows:
^^basic and whack....2/10
Even if you were a: cingular: rapper u still couldn’t: raise a bar:
Though you just been: murder: I still don’t consider you: raw:
^^didn't rhyme and punch sucked..c'mon..2/10
And like the: alphabet: it will take 22 tries before you get a: W:
Take: Common’s: advise and: Go: get off RV cause no one like you
^^Common said get off RV?...2/10

Weak verse here.A lot of your bars ain't even rhyme man.Moral/tiol....bar/raw...shit doesn't rhyme.And what's with that last bar...common neva uttered the word RV...so what the fuck you talking about?

Record's 4-7 Your Win Percentage Is Less Then The Systems
It's Proven Flow Verse Is Destined To Fall, You Infested Victim
^^system lines are played and no punch...1/10
Your Elevation Aint Changing, It's Sort Of Like Your IP Number
You Couldn't Put Me In Check If, My Feet You Put Nike's Under
^^IP #'s can be changed...weak...2/10
6-10 Lines Why Waiste My Verse When I Don't Need A Word
Your Resemblence Presence Strong Obssesions, A Weed Herb
^^Weak...2/10
For Vote's Your Catching Range Checks, Verse Don't Got Flows
Out Of A Scale 1 To 10 Your At It's Worse A -10 You Compose
^^meh...3/10
Don't Need 10 Line's, Cause I Didn't Lose You Don't Convince Me
All I Know Is Your On Your Verse Sucks More Then Monica Lewenski
^^Played...3/10

OK...weak verse again...I think the 2 of you need to work on wordplay and metas.Shit was whack.But since the punches sucked on both sided...I'll base it on flow and structure...so moral gets it

Vote-Moral
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Lmao! Naw Nigga I Aint Voting For Shit Cause That Vote Was A Shit Vote Bitch...Lines We're Not Played If You Don't Understand The Concept Shut The Fuck Up Ho

^^LOL....nigga....ya shit sucked ass....so you think that monica lunisky line is not played?

See...herbs like you never elevate...swearing they the shit when they whack.

I bet you not even gonna take my advice neither...shut up herb....

LOL@ me even responding to you

So run along...stay whack forever...ignorance ain't ever gonna get you anywhere...

well what u want me to think it took two seconds for you to be up 3-0

Natural Killer Shut The Fuck Up I Bin Rapping Since You Was In Diapers I Bin Here Since 03 Bitch This An Alias Name Suck My Dick You Faggot Get Out Of Here For I Have You Banned

^^fuck you gonna have me banned?You started ripping on me first...

And does it loook like I give a fuck if you an alias?I'd still merk you in a battle

HaHa Man Fuck Off You Little Herb I Got Enough Beef To Start Ripping You Get Out My Thread Bitch

^^bitch....you whack as fuck...stop talking like you good..

Lame ass nigga...talkin about the system and monica luwinsky...then you claim it's not played...herb at his finest.....

This was feedback posted for Moral
 

Now Shut The Fuck Up You Bitch Ass Herb Fuck Off Get Out Of Here

^^wall street?...hmm...still don't know you...but you whack..

Unlike You Bitch Ass Text Heads I Don't Play With Text I'm Audio So Soon As You Step Your Game Up To Audio Holla At Me Untill Then Keep Doing Your Little Text Shit You Ho

^^umm....hate to burst yo bubble homie....but this thread..is a text battle

and you been here since 03 and you whack like dat?...smh...

Voted For: Moral

Aight here we go...
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FV---Rhymes are preschool like children stories behind them is always moral
This battle is for fun and games with you I am just going to toil<<<Weak opender and a punch that is below par and bad set up all around..

I would call you an: ass: but that we already know
Simple because of the fact when u spit only: shit flows:<<<congrats you just complemented him..(you said he could flow)

Even if you were a: cingular: rapper u still couldn’t: raise a bar:
Though you just been: murder: I still don’t consider you: raw:<<,not bad not bad at all......

And like the: alphabet: it will take 22 tries before you get a: W:
Take: Common’s: advise and: Go: get off RV cause no one like you<<<<<Whoa terrible.......cheap blow with a weak punch.................
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Moral----Record's 4-7 Your Win Percentage Is Less Then The Systems
It's Proven Flow Verse Is Destined To Fall, You Infested Victim<<<not bad just dont call him weak names...
Your Elevation Aint Changing, It's Sort Of Like Your IP Number
You Couldn't Put Me In Check If, My Feet You Put Nike's Under<<<<very good punch and origional.....
6-10 Lines Why Waiste My Verse When I Don't Need A Word
Your Resemblence Presence Strong Obssesions, A Weed Herb<<<<<not bad here good double meaning...nice punch all around
For Vote's Your Catching Range Checks, Verse Don't Got Flows
Out Of A Scale 1 To 10 Your At It's Worse A -10 You Compose<<<<<made me laugh...good punch also
Don't Need 10 Line's, Cause I Didn't Lose You Don't Convince Me
All I Know Is Your On Your Verse Sucks More Then Monica Lewenski<<<<whoa not good.....the feeling was off in this one didnt like it at all....
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OK Flow Verse, why did you only do 8 lines???.....in a battle may i suggest that you do the maximum amount....and oh yeah try to mix it up with metas and multies and keep the structure good.....and work on your punches ALOT...
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Moral---you need to elevate i sence that you were forcing your punches instead of letting them connect and flow the right way....most of your verse was good....but that last line was terrible...in my mind a newbie could have came up with that one.....but any way both of you dont force it let it flow......cause you are as good as your last battle...and nobody wants an L
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V/Moral

Voted For: Moral

Moral
Record's 4-7 Your Win Percentage Is Less Then The Systems
It's Proven Flow Verse Is Destined To Fall, You Infested Victim
Not feeling this. Blah personal and punch.
Your Elevation Aint Changing, It's Sort Of Like Your IP Number
You Couldn't Put Me In Check If, My Feet You Put Nike's Under
Bad wording, I can't see his IP.
6-10 Lines Why Waiste My Verse When I Don't Need A Word
Your Resemblence Presence Strong Obssesions, A Weed Herb
Eh...Ok punch.
For Vote's Your Catching Range Checks, Verse Don't Got Flows
Out Of A Scale 1 To 10 Your At It's Worse A -10 You Compose
Not a real punch really. A statement.
Don't Need 10 Line's, Cause I Didn't Lose You Don't Convince Me
All I Know Is Your On Your Verse Sucks More Then Monica Lewenski
Kinda played punch.

I've seen a lot better from you man. Blah concepts and punches.

flow verse
Rhymes are preschool like children stories behind them is always moral
This battle is for fun and games with you I am just going to toil
No punch.
I would call you an: ass: but that we already know
Simple because of the fact when u spit only: shit flows:
No originality here.
Even if you were a: cingular: rapper u still couldn’t: raise a bar:
Though you just been: murder: I still don’t consider you: raw:
Blah set up, bad punch.
And like the: alphabet: it will take 22 tries before you get a: W:
Take: Common’s: advise and: Go: get off RV cause no one like you
No punch.

This verse had one punch attempt. I didn't like anything really. Structure was easy to read I guess.

Overall, I've seen better battles, but I give this to Moral for real punches and harder hitting. Work on originality.

v- Moral