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Let Me Hold You ft. Omarion
Let Me Hold You-
http://outspoken.dmusic.com/ |
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oh yea leave links and I'll RTF.
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this track is nice fam.....its better than bowwow version of the shit...good drop fam
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^^if you mean it lol....thnx.........uppin
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respondin to this for the 2nd time quality was iffy in spots not bad ur flow wasn't bad keep droppin 1 |
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lol you didnt have to drop feed again lol but thnx for the feed |
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yo I was feelin the flow fam...also feelin the vibe of this track a good quality song...this was good...liked it alot...flow fell at one bit evidently..but no biggie...8/10
RTF to me and speats - Hocus Pocus http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204456 |
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lol @ doin a remix for real..... flow still needs to be polished........ stumbled in a couple of places.......... mixing....... quality aint bad ........ just that added omarion sample sounds a lil off..... but other wise not bad...... sounds like you fitting too many words into a bar...... but ...... keep droppin..... 'respect' |
thnx. for the feed.
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word....listened to this when u sent it to me....on AIM
your flow was ok in some points...and then in others it seemed like you were trying to fit too many words into a bar.... quality is ok...could be better...but could be worse.... unless you changed it since i told you..i thought the omarion sample was a lil off.... beat is dope...lyrically it was decent... overall it was worth listening to...keep working and youll be str8 RTF on my Soccer Kids Diss |
thnx for the feed I left feed on yo soccer kid diss song...
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well i love this version wit bow wow, anywho, i think your vocals need to be upped a lot cuz like i got my headphones turned all the way up and i cant even hear you, your flow needs mad work, it seems like you kinda wrote to some other beat, and you forced shit man, emotion needs a lot more work, quality needs a lot of work as well, and the way you tried to match the hook and shit was bad man, you could made that work better. anyway keep elevatin man.
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thnx for the feed even if I didnt like it I can take critism lol.
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shit was aight fam...ya flow seemed a lil off at times and omarion's hook was mixed just a lil off beat...ya lyrics were decent...only thing that held it back from being better was u were trying to fit to many words into some of ya bars and o's hook being outta place...keep working at it though fam...rtf on "Tell Me"
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it will help if you gave me the link to ya song.
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make a thread of it in this forum and I'll leave feed there
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i just made a thread
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listenin..
was gonna do this also lol your voice reminds me of some cat i know.. flow is coo, delivery fits the track i guess quality needs to be upped tho not bad track man, keep droppin! |
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