Speats and Intermental - "Hocus Pocus"
 

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check the song Hocus Pocus

My boi speats on this....thanks to him for puttin me on this

1st verse: Speats
Hook: Speats
2nd Verse: Inter

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the next one will follow in one minute too

this was something hot..............lets brake it down.......

beat:excellent choice......sounds nice.....

hook: this was maybe best part of song....flow well with beat....and speats makes gd job..

1st verse speats:flowed well.sounds like some slim shady drop.......could be more barz...
2nd verse inter:different style...suit well...more barz than spe. have.......nice job man

overal:i think that was best song from both of u...tell me if im wrong...but i liked it.....
could be 3rd verse too........but nice job

thanks alot rlly appreciate it....

uppp...........

lol my dick is enormous lol lmao

speats was iight some points it was too loud that i couldnt heard you
Intermental that was good description choice of words it was good good lyrics and the flow was also good as well
the hook/chorus was iight lol hocus pocus my dick is enormous lol

lol...thanks alot.....

nice shit the name didnt really fit the mood of the song speats verse had a better flow then intermental but vocab and syllabels i gota give to intermental the hook had reall good flow 7/10 nice shit keep doin ya damn thing

thanks I appreciate that...............

thanks man.....

Speats - first off the verse was on some eminem type shit but it sounded nice on this beat. delivery could be a little better. your quality was decent it was better on the hook than your verse.

Hook was nice

Intermental - you chopped your flow too much in this. sounds decent but not as good as it coulda been. You tried to speed up and slow down to catch the beat. worst sound is to chase the beat. quality needs improvement

Decent drop

OK thanks man ill take that into account

flows are okay..speats a lil more polished

but all the levels were too loud

deamp em


not a bad track

and the beat was entertaining


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thanks..I aint got an amp lol....

uppin this............

iight cool uppin

ok......

Speats verse....u could work on your flow a lil bit...lyrically it was ok...quality isnt too good...sometimes it seems like it a lil loud...then goes back down...delivery was decent...youve mos def gotten better.....

Hook...was coo...it wasnt extremely great...but it was kinda catchy..prolly best part of song...

Inters verse....you gotta pretty good flow...quality isnt too good...u need to work on the mixing....lyrically it was ok...nothin spectacular....delivery was pretty good too....you got potential man....just up that quality..

Where the F did u get that beat though?....its dope as shit......

but...RTF....on my song....Soccer Kids Diss....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204544


thanks

my flow wasint good??? lol wtf, anyway thanks man

nah your flow was on ok...you could just touch it up a lil bit...it hit the snare and everything ok....but i think it could be just a lil more smooth sounding..and it would be dope.....

same thing with Inter...his was off a lil more than yours...i know i didnt say that the first time i posted...but he seems like he is rushing some of his words a lil....

but Speats....if you just polished yours a lil bit....it would be dope as shit...you should get a new mic since youve elevated...so they quality can be good...itll just make you that much better...

and where the hell did you get this beat? i love it

Thanks alot man, I really appreciate what you said.....

upppppin.............

ok

speats.. you need to sort your vocal levels out... lol flow is ite.. you've deffinatly got better dilvery is kool... overall not bad, hook is pretty decent your my new hook man. intermanl flow is pretty decent, you need more emotion deilvery is a bit meh but your deffo elevating. hook agen like it..pretty catchy track pretty decent mate keep it up

thanks man really appreciate

thanks man, and invektive, i found it on soundclick somewere lol really really deeep on soundclick

one more time..

Holla.....

like the beat right off the bat....where did you get that? I want the beat.....

hahah....dude is funny.....got me rollin.....

voice sounds kinda like Mr. Boxcutta....nice...

2nd dude is tight too....but his stuff is sounded all super wackly produced.....static-super

....yea, that was some funny material.......keep up


-E to tha T

thanks............

thanks eturnal.

hmm betta then ya otha songz on both ya'llz pages the flow was aight but the quality gotta be worked on...kuzz iono...hurtz tha ear to hear fuzz all da time but if u want tipz on how u fix all dat just IM me or suttin i can give u sum tipz... but overall Good job kidz

Thanks...yo imma IM you dawg