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Apostrophe vs. Dizzee Rascal
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Ok his name is Apostrophe hence the Ap wordplay
Bitch has to borrow pride, since he hasn't got any swallow Swing an axe like spacecraft abandonments 'leaving Ap-hollow' /Apollo |
*to swallow..... (spelling error)
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Dizzee's poor..searchin the uk streets for food.. and it's really a shame boy..
and this Rascal's just happy for a meal... even without the fucking lame toy.. |
Dizzee -
Line 1: Didnt hit at all and wasnt used as a line to build up the 2nd one. Basically a pointless waste fa real. Line 2: Just because you used the first 2 letters of his name, it doesnt make this line nameplay. I felt it was weak. If you were going to go this way at all you could have worded it a lot better. Apostrophe - Line 1: First line was pretty much weak. BUT, it did in fact build up your second one. You also used a little nameplay in both lines which I liked a lot better than just the first 2 letters of his name. Line 2: Pretty funny shit, made me laugh. Didnt think you were going to go that way with the punch. At first I was kinda like blah, but after re-reading it I was like dope/funny shit son. V/APOSTROPHE......................... |
vote/ ap... top ten nomination easily
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Dr....just spelling my name........................
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vote dizee rascal/
dizzee came strong in both lines......funny wordplay...decent punch....7/10 yo apostrophe...youre first line wasnt good, but ure second was rlly funny i liked that bt jus came short IMO 6/10 |
Vote:apos
even if i liked dizz punch............. i re-read apos and find out he comes harder...... |
Dizzee's was wayyyy forced.. Apostrophe, that was pretty decent man, nice job.
Vote - Apos |
v/apostrophe...
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v/apostrophe
Dizzie had nicer concept..but I thought he used it bad. |
ehhnh....i really don't like this battle, cause both could have been better...
v/apostrophe...cause dizzee's was too general. |
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LMAO @ me getting DR's.. C'mon kid take a loss.. |
v/ apos was a lil more better though......
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v/Apostrophe... his was just better, wack battle though
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v/apost better punch
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Apostrophe wins by KO.
Dizzee Rascal loses. |
This thread is now closed.
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