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Pair-A-Docks vs. Atticus
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Check and good luck Atticus....
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Mmmmmmmmmmhm, Im Here...
Same To You Mayn... And I'm Prolly Dropping Tomarrow... So Tryn Do Yours Soon To So We Can Start The Voting... .One. |
Im Actually Done Now...
Lol I Got Bord, But Ya... Ill Post It Tomarrow Then... Good Luck Mayn... .One. |
I will drop tomorrow too....good luck again....peace
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This Kids A Fuckin Fake... Playin Manly On Top,
...Baggy Black Hoody, But This Bitches Bottom Half, Is A Par-a-docks. *Act Manly, But A Bitch... So His Bottom Half/Sex Is A Paradox And Top Half Black Hoody, But He's Fake Cuz The Bottom Is A Pair Of Docks (Dockers) .One. |
Cockiness is a bad habit...but I mean cmon y'all...what would you expect...
When even if I stapled his hands together...his punches wouldn't connect! |
good battle
V/Atticus |
v/atticus
but the "baggy black hoodie" made the punch a bit stretched |
v/atticus
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....lol.....i kno i saw that same punchline in RB....the staplin punch thing i saw it and he bit...damn another sik wit it....ill try to find...it.....lol.....v/atticus...anywys.....
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v/atty I guess, but damn dude you tried to hard to get creative, it was still decent though.
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*Shrugs*
Im Doing My Best... I Havent Written Text Ina Long Time... So Im Pretty Much Starting From Scratch... But Thanks For The Votes... As Soon As Your Battles Go Up Ill Be Sure To Vote... .One. |
v/ atticus....
Had nice complexity as opposed Pair-a-docks's simplistic bar |
ummmmm.........
Atticus...... not sure if you read the rules but its 2 lines... not 3 Pair-A-Docks.... really really played concept "blah blah punches dont connect" gotta give it to Atticus for not coming played.... Pair if you dropped something just a little bit better ya would of gotten my vote Vote: Atticus |
It Wasnt Three...
Thats Just A Structure Thing... I Coulda Put Those Three Words In The Bottom Line... I Just Wanted The Pauses As I Posted... But Most Wouldnt Say Thats A Third Line... But Its All Good, Thanks Mayn... .One. |
personally i consider it 3 lines.......
cause if you make that into 1 line then it would be stretched.... so intern you make it into a seperate line (or pause) to make it work...... i would say thats 3 lines........ but hey.... your winning so no big deal |
v/atticus... pair's concept is played
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v/ at... very bad worded punch but i got the idea and it was much more original then a connecting line
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Vote:acticus ............................not bad pair............
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ez lol
atticus went for a personal pair-a-docks went for a weak punch v/ atticus |
Atticus - Nice punch...It was simple and hit hard. Nice Nameplay.
Pair-A-Docks - Lines were too long, concept for the punch was lookin great. In this league your better off getting a personal in your punch rather than a random punch that you could use on anyone, ya know? But I thought you woulda been able to get some votes if you worded your bar better. V/Atticus................................. |
Word atticus....good battle homie
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Thanks Para, Same To You...
And Someone Ban The Fag Freeposting Above Me... .One. |
punches connect shit is plaaayed
v/atticus, for decency. |
umm..misk.. mad people use that structure.. its not 3 lines.. umm v/atticus harder punch
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v/ atticus slightly stretched though
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Atticus wins by KO.
Pair-A-Docks loses. |
This thread is now closed.
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Moved to Closed Battles.
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