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Limited Edition vs ...1ndeph...
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-17-05 at 03:44 AM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
...1ndeph... has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-05 03:47 AM.
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Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-05 03:49 AM.
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Voted For: ...1ndeph...
limited edition - punch lines do not hit you need to take some time and think of some harder punch lines and more creative and original verses 1ndeph - flow was aight nice punch lines it sound like you battaling the 8 mile movie in some parts but at the end you started to leave the movie out of it and spit some hard punch lines. |
This was feedback posted for ...1ndeph...
indeph came correct and all that great stuff
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Voted For: ...1ndeph...
LMAO some of the lines made me laugh like a mofo... y both spit ova role model :bored: aight...LE no h8 but in terms of actual punchlines and just str8 personals indeph killed ya fam...tha suicide lies old as they are still own..."if 8 mile didnt happen..you wouldnt be rapping" &...vs.."Indeph gonna be In-Debt"...indeph rapped more fluidly over the beat..Limited dont adlib or overdub so much od your vocals jus on a couple of woreds per bar at most...and try and work on lining em up more cos some were mad out...plus Indeph's voice is jus dope..yall both need to work in delivery..altho indeph had the blance between dissin n self glorification down...both could up quality got better heads to mix ya shiznizzle 4 u...decent battle yo..:thumbup: VOTE _INDEPH RTF AGAINST RTGZO IN MA BATTLE BITCHES |
This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
Damn..ima just leave some feed on this...
Indeph..ya flow has improved..now it seems like u not readin..like u just flowin..lyrics and disses is straight really..quality tho..is raw ass..damn..lyrics really is good tho..delivery was good too..u had emotion and it wasnt shoutin... LE..to much reverb off the jump..flow is kinda shakey..like u dont have enough syllables in ya shit..vocals is to loud too..disses is real meh...lyrics could be stepped up...chorus could be betta too.. if i had to vote..id say Indeph won..ckuz his shit had a betta flow and betta lyrics...but..it says no crew votes..so Indeph..fuck u :) |
This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
Jus checkin.......................................
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this is bullshit........ u already got two votes?!?!?! u whore
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uppin .
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chea... umm.... uppin and shit .
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RTF MOTHAFUCKA :shoot:..............................
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Haha I knew I didn't come hard enough in this...
This is why I hate battling...I always underestimate people haha... Anyways...uppin... |
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chea... umm.... uppin and shit .
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This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
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Voted For: ...1ndeph...
Yo I decided to make you a beat after hearin this. As Long as you let me produce your wack quality havin ass. |
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That was meant to be feedback. Fuckin RV. Limited Won. :shoot: |
Voted For: ...1ndeph...
le beat is good u jsut love eminem lol flow ur flow wasnt that bad but it wasnt taht good off in a few places but uve imrpoved alot since this punches werent anything special ur voice was like odd like i couldnt hear a few of the words like idk lyrics yea like i siad above not very good bitch are u deaf lol nah indeph beat good i like urs too lyrics he killed u hear le he had soo many personals flow ur flow was better tahn les in this but it wasnt perfect quality yes u need to work on this oh well doest mean anything overall indeph had this sory le i still love both of u will u rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=205738 |
fuck u Indeph...... u vote whore
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This was feedback posted for ...1ndeph...
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Voted For: ...1ndeph...
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