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@. vs Natural killa
HOW IT IS FAG
You Pm'd me for a battle, so this is it. Topical- when evil meets good 10 To unlimited bars No hate votes Must check in withing 15 minutes. Due date is three days from check Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-17-05 at 02:37 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by forfeit |
wtf is with this "@." shit?!?!?......set-it up against ysdat...I wanna battle Ysdat.
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I am Ysdat you fucking idiot.
This is my battle account..... |
wtf?...battle me with that other guy...If I win I wanna scar that Ysdat account...
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your not going to win fag. seriously, your fucking stupid..
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^^why am I not gonna win?...tell me?...why?.......
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Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-05 02:35 AM.
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@. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-05 02:37 AM.
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Reaching the grips of satan I applaude gods move laying next to the devil is a nun so smooth the date of there decision closed all devisions made people relise the lies in religion Im bout to explain why gods rain makes people complain
trying to strive for perfection while life makes you insain If You were to meet your maker would he have evil eyes would he laugh at your fakeness cause he see's all lies complaining about religion choices and who you are in life when your sitting right next to murder like the darkest knife god was to be meet with a servant in a red coat is the question asked,spoken thru the evil throat an alliance is made thru hate and loves common occurances a loss is now revamped like endless insurance's perfection isnt accepted,lifes balanced on the edge like pefect positions arguing for options..choices never made like swerving decisions the new love is hate, the blue dove is fate the glued heart shall break to sever the beast together they cant control the weather at least there hearts are both finally fullfilled,together in peace while what they played tug of war with is now insignifigant when they are laying on each others lifes,we arent magnificant there relisation that they were fighting for what neither have control of Hand in hand they gaze into each other eyes....and simply stroll off death is certain...there breath is hurting... show over's...close murders curtain. *curtains fall* ...................
Blah,your not worth my time. |
Reaching the grips of satan I applaude gods move laying next to the devil is a nun so smooth the date of there decision closed all devisions made people relise the lies in religion Im bout to explain why gods rain makes people complain
trying to strive for perfection while life makes you insain If You were to meet your maker would he have evil eyes would he laugh at your fakeness cause he see's all lies complaining about religion choices and who you are in life when your sitting right next to murder like the darkest knife god was to be meet with a servant in a red coat is the question asked,spoken thru the evil throat an alliance is made thru hate and loves common occurances a loss is now revamped like endless insurance's perfection isnt accepted,lifes balanced on the edge like pefect positions arguing for options..choices never made like swerving decisions the new love is hate, the blue dove is fate the glued heart shall break to sever the beast together they cant control the weather at least there hearts are both finally fullfilled,together in peace while what they played tug of war with is now insignifigant when they are laying on each others lifes,we arent magnificant there relisation that they were fighting for what neither have control of Hand in hand they gaze into each other eyes....and simply stroll off death is certain...there breath is hurting... show over's...close murders curtain. *curtains fall* ...................
Blah,your not worth my time.. |
EVIL evily prevails wit so many names,is it dick,schmuck,cock or penis? but it's all the same,cuz it neva hestitates to stop and beat us when it prances out as if it had feet to attack us like a leech n perpetually scars you vicously by cocksmacking you on your cheek while it may be the key to life,it deserves concern as it's a demon in turn firing and blasting shots rapidly with bullets they call semen or sperm GOOD one force that renders futile to stop the evil mister with the whip which is sometimes also referred to proudly as the sister of the lip milks the dick givin pleasure in order to function as the passageway of life n contrary to it's evil counterpart,it's able to masterbate without fight never bombs the table cuz it remains calm and stable with no bite knowing the fact dat it's like a puppy rolling on it's back, it neva stikes WHEN EVIL MEETS GOOD commences when they get the protection n evil gives the wood an erection n the process itself is a connection descibed by evil givin good an injection evil either gets blowed,pumps on top,or lets good be a bull and she rides conclusion of this act capped off when evil's milked n shoots bullets inside then the excruiating torment comes when 10 pounds comes out this tiny hole while evil neglects it and just searches for some hoe to swing off it's giant pole |
EVIL evily prevails wit so many names,is it dick,schmuck,cock or penis? but it's all the same cuz it neva hestitates to stop and beat us when it prances out as if it had feet to attack us like a leech n perpetually scars you vicously by cocksmacking you on your cheek while it may be the key to life,it deserves concern as it's a demon in turn firing and blasting shots rapidly with bullets they call semen or sperm GOOD one force that renders futile to stop the evil mister with the whip which is sometimes also referred to proudly as the sister of the lip milks the dick givin pleasure in order to function as the passageway of life n contrary to it's evil counterpart,it's able to masterbate without fight never bombs the table cuz it remains calm and stable with no bite knowing the fact dat it's like a puppy rolling on it's back, it neva stikes WHEN EVIL MEETS GOOD commences when they get the protection n evil gives the wood an erection n the process itself is a connection descibed by evil givin good an injection evil either gets blowed,pumps on top,or lets good be a bull and she rides conclusion of this act capped off when evil's milked n shoots bullets inside then the excruiating torment comes when 10 pounds comes out this tiny hole while evil neglects it and just searches for some hoe to swing off it's giant pole |
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This was feedback posted for @.
Ah i thought you was battlin Text then @...Didnt know Killa wrote topicals, good battle tho
But i think @ will take this... |
Voted For: @.
Natural Killa hmm well i thought you had a good flow and stucture, but something that wasn't there really was emotion ya know you need to show it more so then i can know when to pause i did see it but it was the fact that you didn't show it with a cama, well your imagery was very great probably the best thing about your piece but you need to up vocabulary make it more interesting ya know, give it some deph to your story ya know, anyway not bad pretty good man i didnt know you woulda been this good at topicals. @. fuck you for usin them pics all the time but it makes you wanna read it more lol, anyway good stucture your gettin better man i can see it, flow was good and your imagery has always been good but i was really feelin it here probably the best thing about yours, nice emotion maybe you coulda showed it better like what i said to natural killa, but something i'd like to see you work on is multiples work on thoughs alright man, but you get my vote. 1 |
^^thx for voting
meh...I hope ya win Ysdat...I'm glad I got some experience with topical battles now....who knows...I might beat you one day...LoL.. |
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^^cat cut yo tongue?
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shoulda put 3-0 KO Ysdat....this shit gonna take ad long to close
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This was feedback posted for @.
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Voted For: @.
i thought that @'s verse was a technically superior verse to natural killa's, the most obvious reason being that @'s blatantly wider vocabulary allowed him to create a deeper more meaningful verse with more successfully executed devices such as his use of metaphors to create more believable imagery...... i could see where NK's verse was coming from but he needed to rephrase it seriously because @'s verse just had a more mature feel to it as opposed to NK's immature terminology used to describe his thoughts and feelings... so no hate but @ gets this one for real |
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