BLACK~MAGIK vs Batman
 

Battle Rules:

6 -8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hate votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-20-05 at 11:39 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

BLACK~MAGIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-05 11:54 AM.

Look..

Faggot, ya rhymes is wack, everything you write is trash
Seriously, How am I gonna be intimidated......................
...........................By a man who hides behind a mask??
Look fam your just wack, ya amatuer raps cant damage this cat
And fuck batman, I'll run up and hit this man with a bat!!
Nothing about you is fierce, kid, there's no doubt that your queer
When the tightest thing about you, is the outfit you wear!
You're old and weak...Souldier? Please, I expose emcees
And got got time, for your rhymes, like I'm being charged roaming fee's

Blah......

Look..

Faggot, ya rhymes is wack, everything you write is trash
Seriously, How am I gonna be intimidated......................
...........................By a man who hides behind a mask??*
Look fam your just wack, ya amatuer raps cant damage this cat
And fuck batman, I'll run up and hit this man with a bat!!
Nothing about you is fierce, kid, there's no doubt that your queer
When the tightest thing about you, is the outfit you wear!**
You're old and weak...Souldier? Please, I expose emcees
And got got time, for your rhymes, like I'm being charged roaming fee's

* Batman wears a mask

** His outfit also consists of a cape and tights.



Blah......

Come on man.......Come check in and drop

Dont no show dawg

Batman has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-05 03:54 PM.

drop your verse......................

your a lyricall disaster,im a rymin master,to win this battle u gotta be a spell caster

you say that ur magik but im the real wizard,i frezze in ur traks like a god damn blizzard

i come and wreck ya fuckin hood,i got the skillz that u wish u could

ur tryin to hard dawg u need to keep it simple,ill pop ya pussy ass like a god damn pimple

u think ur hard cuz ur black but harder and im white,ma rymin skillz are tighter than tight

ull git so pissed ull shit urself like cheddar bob,ill chew u up like corn on the fuckin cob

if i hurt ur feelins i dont feel too bad,i didnt mean to make u that god damn madd

explanations

in the movie 8 mile cheddar bob shoots himself with his own gun

when i said i didnt mean to make him that madd i might to where he would shoot himself(i really did though)

wen i said he would have to be a spell caster it means he would have to put a spell on voters to git them to vote 4 him

Word...Uppin for some motherfucking votes on this shit...

yo im uppin cuz we need to git some god damn vote on this shit dawg

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Faggot, ya rhymes is wack, everything you write is trash
Seriously, How am I gonna be intimidated......................
...........................By a man who hides behind a mask??*
^^coulda made a play of it better....4/10
Look fam your just wack, ya amatuer raps cant damage this cat
And fuck batman, I'll run up and hit this man with a bat!!
^^not much of a diss....1/10
Nothing about you is fierce, kid, there's no doubt that your queer
When the tightest thing about you, is the outfit you wear!**
^^Lmao....nice....8/10
You're old and weak...Souldier? Please, I expose emcees
And got got time, for your rhymes, like I'm being charged roaming fee's
^^hmm...ite...4/10

OK...decent verse.Had some nice internals n shit so flow was good.Best line you had was the the tightest thing he has is his outfit.I think that 1st bar coulda been better.U had a good concept with the hiding behind mask shit..but you didn't execute it well enough.And that 2nd bar ...not a punch.But overall..decent verse.

your a lyricall disaster,im a rymin master,to win this battle u gotta be a spell caster
^^Ok punch..but erase the filler n word it better..4/10
you say that ur magik but im the real wizard,i frezze in ur traks like a god damn blizzard
^^No punch...0/10 :cussing:
i come and wreck ya fuckin hood,i got the skillz that u wish u could
^^No punch...0/10 :cussing:
ur tryin to hard dawg u need to keep it simple,ill pop ya pussy ass like a god damn pimple
^^no punch...0/10 :cussing:
u think ur hard cuz ur black but harder and im white,ma rymin skillz are tighter than tight
^^no punch...0/10 :cussing:
ull git so pissed ull shit urself like cheddar bob,ill chew u up like corn on the fuckin cob
^^not much of a punch still...0/10 :cussing:
if i hurt ur feelins i dont feel too bad,i didnt mean to make u that god damn madd
^^no punch..0/10 :cussing:

OK...first off...structure your verse better next time.Make it in bar couplets.Don't d it like this next time.And stop saying shit just because it rhymes..that'd get you nowhere.And do you even know what a punch is?Go to tutorials and find out what one is.Cuz apperantely you don't know.It's all about wordplay and metas.

Vote-Black Majic
RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203772

Good looks on the vote...I will RTF...Uppin this shit

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

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Fuck my bad...

Get that shit removed

Uppin Thru The Fucking Roof...

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This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

Uppin This Fucking Shit...This Is Black Magik BTW...

Uppin This Fucking Shit...

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

kinda one sided here. BM came harder. punches connected but the 2nd bar was played. overall BM had wittier punches and was more creative with his verse. Batman, you got a good rhyme scheme/style. you just need to develop better punches and youll be straight. just drop original concepts and hit harder with punches.

overall vote - BM..
rtf in my sig plz. or ill have this vote DQd. nice battle.

wuts considered a punch? explain it to me cuz i guess im not gittin it

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

yo u had a slight self glorification but besides that u got this dude yo...you more punches that hit and even thought u were kinna repititive on the bat man stuff u still keps the battle comin harder..structure was way better abd u didnt space ur lines like ur opponent...yo bat man u really didnt have to blasphame there just becos u battlin bro...fuck all that white and black stuff peeps woulda been winnin wackli if they said such in their battles...that stuff turned u off the battle mayne..u had some shit but u didnt make it up to the jackpot...black magic ur verse wasnt that tich but i guess the magic in ya made u win this even if,to me, u really didnt need so much effort...

pc holla at mine with honest votes plz

wun

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Batman forgot his bat alphabet soup cup apparently...

Heres a tip Batman... When you flick the board tuck your back foot in.