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TheSinnister vs Unrestricted
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-20-05 at 09:01 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Expired battle close - Tie |
Unrestricted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-05 09:02 PM.
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TheSinnister has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-17-05 09:05 PM.
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yo, this "hollow" will really fuck up your view of the "horizon"*
my rhymes are like blinding disco lights, fucking dazaling them u aint no sinner, bitch ur purer than fucking holy water your win record is like a dick all da way in a pussy, not going any farther TheSinister, bitch ass nigga, jus give up, here is a word of advice to u from me ur bitch ass say ur a sinner so ur from hell which means ur used to being fried repeatedly *his aim name is Hollow Horizon |
Look At You A Fuckin Wack Mental Case Get Away, Your Makin Rv Look Like A Dicrace just Incase, I Got My Pencil Case In A Suit Case So I Can Earase You With An Ozzie Chase The Sinnister And You'll Lose Me Your Angry Words Just Sooth Me Make Me Nautious And Woozy I Don't Know How I Can Get So Many Mixed Feelings How I Love To Hate Your Voice From Squeelin, Or What Ever That Sound Makes That You Make, Sometimes I make Simmilar Mistakes Like Your Mother Having You, Or Having The Condom Break It's Time To Take A Permite Break You Little Hermit, I Don't Want To Make You Disquraged, But Im Cashing In Your Life Insurance, Don't Worrie About Your Mother She Loves Dick And Cool Whip :) |
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Voted For: Unrestricted
Look At You A Fuckin Wack Mental Case Get Away, Your Makin Rv Look Like A Dicrace ^^basic punch.....3/10 just Incase, I Got My Pencil Case In A Suit Case So I Can Earase You With An Ozzie ^^no punch....0/10 Chase The Sinnister And You'll Lose Me Your Angry Words Just Sooth Me Make Me Nautious And Woozy ^^terrible....wtf?...2/10 I Don't Know How I Can Get So Many Mixed Feelings How I Love To Hate Your Voice From Squeelin, ^^stop with this voice...he neva did audio..so stf?..2/10 Or What Ever That Sound Makes That You Make, Sometimes I make Simmilar Mistakes Like Your Mother Having You, Or Having The Condom Break ^^Played concept...2/10 It's Time To Take A Permite Break You Little Hermit, I Don't Want To Make You Disquraged, But Im Cashing In Your Life Insurance, Don't Worrie About Your Mother She Loves Dick And Cool Whip ^^a Mom joke?....1/10 Awful verse.get some real concepts for your punches.Stop with this basic shit.I saw no wordplay at all in that verse.As for ur structure..fix it...make it look like everyone else's one.Ur flow suked too.Work on everything. yo, this "hollow" will really fuck up your view of the "horizon"* my rhymes are like blinding disco lights, fucking dazaling them ^^didn't rhyme..not much of a punch..2/10 u aint no sinner, bitch ur purer than fucking holy water your win record is like a dick all da way in a pussy, not going any farther ^^set-up was nice..but punch lacked..3/10 TheSinister, bitch ass nigga, jus give up, here is a word of advice to u from me ur bitch ass say ur a sinner so ur from hell which means ur used to being fried repeatedly ^^meh....4/10 OK..you had less lines.Next time..use as much lines as the oppenent.flow was ite..structure was ite.Punches were mad weak.But you got the win for actually having punches. Vote-Unrestricted RTF BElow http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204478 |
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Dont break up my lines like that , its one flow natrul killa
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Voted For: TheSinnister
That You Make, Sometimes I make Simmilar Mistakes Like Your Mother Having You, Or Having The Condom Break ^^^ this one good punch won the battle cuz it was the only one in the whole battle... creative and it hit sin- yo, this "hollow" will really fuck up your view of the "horizon"* my rhymes are like blinding disco lights, fucking dazaling them ^^ this had wordplay but similies aint good and this isn't a punch its talkin about you and not dissin 'em . u aint no sinner, bitch ur purer than fucking holy water your win record is like a dick all da way in a pussy, not going any farther ^^ decen't punch but sayin someones record isn't goin any farther isn't really a punch also it was another similie should said sumin like.. my fresh battle style take this match your old and a sittin duck and ya wins column must have erectile disfuctin cuz it aint gettin up .. see that was a metafour .. anyway PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR... link in my sig |
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Voted For: Unrestricted
Look At You A Fuckin Wack Mental Case Get Away, Your Makin Rv Look Like A Dicrace 4...too basic just Incase, I Got My Pencil Case In A Suit Case So I Can Earase You With An Ozzie 1...no punch Chase The Sinnister And You'll Lose Me Your Angry Words Just Sooth Me Make Me Nautious And Woozy 3.....basic and weak as fuck I Don't Know How I Can Get So Many Mixed Feelings How I Love To Hate Your Voice From Squeelin, 3...weak...wtf?..when you gonna spit a nice line? Or What Ever That Sound Makes That You Make, Sometimes I make Simmilar Mistakes 3...weak..weak!!...said makes too much..fuked flow Like Your Mother Having You, Or Having The Condom Break It's Time To Take A Permite Break You Little Hermit, 3.....omg.....punches!!where are they!! I Don't Want To Make You Disquraged, But Im Cashing In Your Life Insurance, Don't Worrie About Your Mother She Loves Dick And Cool Whip 2...no rhyme? yo, this "hollow" will really fuck up your view of the "horizon"* my rhymes are like blinding disco lights, fucking dazaling them 2...self glorifing in 2nd line..should of switched it so 1st line was punch u aint no sinner, bitch ur purer than fucking holy water your win record is like a dick all da way in a pussy, not going any farther 4....basic....but still had a little hit TheSinister, bitch ass nigga, jus give up, here is a word of advice to u from me ur bitch ass say ur a sinner so ur from hell which means ur used to being fried repeatedly 4....meh....w/e. Ok...Unrestricted got this very weak battle sinnister...i don't know what that was.Structure an everything was good...by lookin at the verse alone..looked like you'd win...but when i read it..i saw you didn't throw one decent punch.And some lines...like that cool whip/insurance one..didn't rhyme. Vote-Unrestricted RTF in 3 days...or this vote will be removed :thumbup: |
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Voted For: TheSinnister
the sinnister ----------- Look At You A Fuckin Wack Mental Case Get Away, Your Makin Rv Look Like A Dicrace just Incase, I Got My Pencil Case In A Suit Case So I Can Earase You With An Ozzie Chase The Sinnister And You'll Lose Me Your Angry Words Just Sooth Me Make Me Nautious And Woozy I Don't Know How I Can Get So Many Mixed Feelings How I Love To Hate Your Voice From Squeelin, Or What Ever That Sound Makes That You Make, Sometimes I make Simmilar Mistakes Like Your Mother Having You, Or Having The Condom Break It's Time To Take A Permite Break You Little Hermit, I Don't Want To Make You Disquraged, But Im Cashing In Your Life Insurance, Don't Worrie About Your Mother She Loves Dick And Cool Whip -------------- dude....your lines was played...but the punchs in it just gave me more feeling... -------------- unrestricted. -------------- yo, this "hollow" will really fuck up your view of the "horizon"* my rhymes are like blinding disco lights, fucking dazaling them u aint no sinner, bitch ur purer than fucking holy water your win record is like a dick all da way in a pussy, not going any farther TheSinister, bitch ass nigga, jus give up, here is a word of advice to u from me ur bitch ass say ur a sinner so ur from hell which means ur used to being fried repeatedly ------------------------- ur style is simple man...and you got some good shyt..just work on ur vocab and you will be alright..the other cat got this in my eyes.. v/thesinnister can i get a RTF plz dudes.... |
Voted For: Unrestricted
verses were aight unrestricted came wit some good shyt but sinister used some simple ass lines and spelled "dicrace" wrong so v/unrestriced Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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