Robert De Niro vs One Mic
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-19-05 at 07:05 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Robert De Niro has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-05 10:23 AM.

you think your better then me COOKI!


this kid's a 'mermaid', everything he spits is half 'bitch like'
how your throwing fast punches? mic can't even pitch right
i'd say your nice 'butt' your verse is 'shit' where'd you get it
fuck, he Stole it from my toilet, i should have you arrested
why you laughing your talent's Hawaii on a fucking atlas
i dont molest kids but i'll rape and tear throuh that whackness
don't joke around, you need a dictionary for your text an
and the day your dope is the day our president is mexican
okay i give up, naw man, i'd rather take this kid's 'one mic'
lols sorry you waisted my time but dissing yourself was fun right?

one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-05 04:41 PM.

yo c'mon man i think its best if you stay off this site/
i aint even sure if you got the balls to type/
you callin yourself ill, c'mon man you only got 4 posts/
im'a let off ur secret about you jerkin off to gay porn wit the door closed/
"If he's lucky, he will die young", well thats some belief/
i run the streets, your wackness'll cause nutin but beef/
you getting pleased cuz UNF sed you were tite/
he woz bein sarcastic, c’mon we all know that you aint nice/
pm’d me callin me a “cookie”, no I’m a man/
call yourself masculine when you probably tried getting breast implants

did this quite quickly.
no hate, just battlin.

lol! nice verse!, i think i lost this one! g/l anywayz

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yer man, uppin this....i swear no1 votes on this site lol

Voted For: Robert De Niro

De Niro - you had some decent punches..that first bar wasnt great but it was alright..the mexican president wasnt very good either..but it was probly ur best line..other than that..u had a good flow to it..i'd give u a 6


One Mic - you suck..basically that sums up your whole verse..you need to come up with punches and be creative with it..u kinda had a personal but not really cause it wasnt very well..gay jokes are lame..you get a 3


Robert De Niro wins

ite then fair enough. uppin this..................

don't have to be so harsh dude lmao.................

Voted For: Robert De Niro

imo, RDN got this. you had a few generic punches. but OM didnt really bring anything. OM came weak. he didnt have any hard punches, where RDN overdid him with. basically RDN gets this due to harder punches, wit, creativity and an overall better verse.

good battle though.
RDN - rtf in my sig. or ill have this voted DQd.

can't he's in my crew..........................................

This was feedback posted for one mic
 

checkin pollz...............good battle 1 you took this easy

sorry wrong personrob you took this easy lol.......

lol that vote cud get dqed anyway for inadiquite fed back dumn fuck im murkin you so i wudnt up it you can leave that to me

I KNOW WHO YOU ARE :hump:

have a nice day :thumbup:

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Voted For: Robert De Niro

one mic's breakdown!


yo c'mon man i think its best if you stay off this site/
i aint even sure if you got the balls to type/
Weak opener,and tha punch was invisible...1/10

you callin yourself ill, c'mon man you only got 4 posts/
im'a let off ur secret about you jerkin off to gay porn wit the door closed/
Fake personals get no vote from me...cuz its stupid,not even Real!0/10

"If he's lucky, he will die young", well thats some belief/
i run the streets, your wackness'll cause nutin but beef/
Weak an played..no punch at all...couldve been better..2/10

you getting pleased cuz UNF sed you were tite/
he woz bein sarcastic, c’mon we all know that you aint nice/
a lil personal,but wasnt nuffin ta really say it was 1..4/10

pm’d me callin me a “cookie”, no I’m a man/
call yourself masculine when you probably tried getting breast implants
Hey!...This didnt even rhyme,sorta like tha whole reason for rapping is rhyme'n tha words..sounds like a convo...bad closer..3/10 cuz tha personal on cookie!

WhAt EvEr It TaKeS break down!

this kid's a 'mermaid', everything he spits is half 'bitch like'
how your throwing fast punches? mic can't even pitch right
i'd say your nice 'butt' your verse is 'shit' where'd you get it
fuck, he Stole it from my toilet, i should have you arrested
why you laughing your talent's Hawaii on a fucking atlas
i dont molest kids but i'll rape and tear throuh that whackness
don't joke around, you need a dictionary for your text an
and the day your dope is the day our president is mexican
okay i give up, naw man, i'd rather take this kid's 'one mic'
lols sorry you waisted my time but dissing yourself was fun right?
I really dont have ta break it down cuz any1 thats anybody can see that WhAt EvEr It TaKeS won this..better punches an lil personals..aiight structure...Really!

aight thanx for votin newayz. uppin this............

Voted For: Robert De Niro

yo lets see....

mic:
u got ok punches but ur flow and structure were kinda bad....some lines were too forced and didnt connect....
ur best:
pm’d me callin me a “cookie”, no I’m a man/
call yourself masculine when you probably tried getting breast implants
2nd line too streched.......but not bad..elevate

6/10

what:ur stucture was kinda gd....something same like i have lol..but for real nice shit..punches could be harder but not bad.....flow..ok......still elevate

ur best lines:
this kid's a 'mermaid', everything he spits is half 'bitch like'
how your throwing fast punches? mic can't even pitch right
nice opener..........gd work man............

7/10


keep elevating both of ya......

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Voted For: Robert De Niro

One Mic seemed to lack severely...punchlines, personals, wordplay, everything seem to go to Robert. Get it and arrested didn't rhyme, and his verse was only mediocre, but he had some nice lines... one mic just had some basic generic 'i'm better then you' shit and lame crap.

v/ Robert De Niro