-UNF- vs Fiend
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
i got tired of waitin :shocked: so i set it up hurry up n chek in n drop

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-22-05 at 09:20 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

-UNF- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-05 09:21 AM.

keyed this hurry up n spit...

Man I Own U Like I Bought Shares-Of-Stock, Prepare-To-Rot
U So Borin If U Performed Live 'Jacob The Jeweler' Wouldnt 'Care To Watch'
Its Like U Got Nuthin Under-Ya-Visor, I Grab Attention Like Thunder-N-Geysers
U Beatin Me's Like Findin Out Stevie Wonder's-A-Sniper(Wont Happen)
Hoe Like U Make This Planet-More-Fruity,From All That Dick Ya Ass-Be-Sore-Usually
U Couldnt Be 'Hot' If U Acted As The 'Human Torch' In The 'Fantastic-Four-Movie'

lol sos only quick key

Fiend has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 09:20 AM.

14 - 0 record .. but all against newbies UNF' pushing his luck.
dude im not gay but i wanna fuck you..
i prey on bitches with lust, & like Tech N9ne guns will bust.
repping UK to the fullest? ya missed ya chance to blow up..
cant spar for long with the best, ya winning streak will never last.
unfucks clutching the pen & inc, when i put this trigga don ina cast.**

** hes from doncaster. hence the don & cast wordplay. also just look at his user title.

* bombings in london. r.i.p.

just a quick key g'luck.

wurd^at gdluck good battle mayne y evry1 takin out on ma rec lol all i get from ppz is bout ma fuckin rec....anyway upping.......................

Voted For: -UNF-

v/UNF

His rap was better by far, he had better punches as they hit hard. He also made his rap easy to read so it made his rap better. I also thought that fiend didn't really write his best. As his punches weren't hard and the flow was all out of sink.

wurd.........good battle upping.......................

fuck you. explain better when you vote. plus, flow doesnt matter you fucktard lol.

Voted For: -UNF-

Man I Own U Like I Bought Shares-Of-Stock, Prepare-To-Rot
U So Borin If U Performed Live 'Jacob The Jeweler' Wouldnt 'Care To Watch'
6...original concept in the 2nd line, nice wordplay and a little multi.
Its Like U Got Nuthin Under-Ya-Visor, I Grab Attention Like Thunder-N-Geysers
U Beatin Me's Like Findin Out Stevie Wonder's-A-Sniper(Wont Happen)
7...LMAO!! stevie wonder a sniper, that is funny as fuck.
Hoe Like U Make This Planet-More-Fruity,From All That Dick Ya Ass-Be-Sore-Usually
U Couldnt Be 'Hot' If U Acted As The 'Human Torch' In The 'Fantastic-Four-Movie'
5...not feelin this, decent multi and wordplay, but the punch lacked.

OVERALL: 18/30


14 - 0 record .. but all against newbies UNF' pushing his luck.
dude im not gay but i wanna fuck you..

UP..
4...weak, personals on records are played, and the fuck you up concept been used before, BY ME!!
i prey on bitches with lust, & like Tech N9ne guns will bust.
repping UK to the fullest? ya missed ya chance to blow up..

in LDN on the bus*
4...harsh punch, disrespectful but still I'll allow it, still it wasn't al that good anyway.
cant spar for long with the best, ya winning streak will never last.
unfucks clutching the pen & inc, when i put this trigga don ina cast.**
5...ok wordplay, ok personal.

OVERALL: 13/30


Fiend came weak, nuthin really original and the only bar that really had any affect was the last one. UNF came with some dope wordplay and multies, a couple original concepts and that real funny ass stevie wonder line...(a sniper<--OMFG!! LMFAO!!) :laugh2:

V/ - UNF

plz RTF on my Reflekt battle, links in the siggy :thumbup:

thx :thumbup: i will rtf then...have a really nice day

Voted For: Fiend

-UNF-

You had multies, and a little bit of wordplay...Thats it. No real punches, no personals...Come on man, I know that you are better than this...

Fiend:

Dont know who you are, but your verse was pretty decent...a few of your lines werent even (one was stretched, and one wasnt long enough) but Im not judging a text battle on flow. You had punches, he didnt. You had personals, he didnt. That right there gives you my vote.

V/ Fiend

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

i used punches........................................... .

Well, his punches were personals, and yours werent...Not hate man, just how I saw the battle.

aight^ upping .....................................

word. thanks for the votes. upping this...........

uppidy check......................................pz

upping............................................

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This was feedback posted for -UNF-
 

pollz............................................. ........

Voted For: -UNF-

i vote fo dis guy
bcause i like what he had wrote
it was poetry at work and it looked like he did it
quick as hell
dis guy had a Flow, good struct and punches
he came out strong therefore i give him his vote

best line
U So Borin If U Performed Live 'Jacob The Jeweler' Wouldnt 'Care To Watch'

Voted For: -UNF-

14 - 0 record .. but all against newbies UNF' pushing his luck.
dude im not gay but i wanna fuck you..

UP..
i prey on bitches with lust, & like Tech N9ne guns will bust.
repping UK to the fullest? ya missed ya chance to blow up..

in LDN on the bus*
cant spar for long with the best, ya winning streak will never last.
unfucks clutching the pen & inc, when i put this trigga don ina cast.**

Opener was far too basic, good opening line, then your punch was worded horribly.....

I liked the london punch, good hit right there, made me laugh.....

closer wasnt very good either, again good opening line but the final punch let you down....Ya last punch should be one of your best, too finish off your verse, an you failed too achieve that, verse lacked ALOT of consistancy.

UNF:

Ya opening line seemed like forced multies, BUT....You recovered well, that jacob the jeweler shit was Niiiiice..

Opening line in the 2nd bar was dope, good vocab an flow, wasnt feelin the stevie wonder punch, it was creative, just needed too have better wordplay in there.

Closer was DOPE tho, Good punch made me laugh too....

Overall unf gets the win, better wordplay an more consistant with his 6 lines..

Voted For: -UNF-

-unf- took this one to easy you word.
good pucnehs and all