Natural killa vs King Solo
 

Battle Rules:

8-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dickriding
No Bullshit

3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO


....i didn't put 12-16 lines cuz that shit is just too long and majority of people dont like them long ass verses to read.....with that said, G'Luck :thumbup:



Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 08-22-05 at 12:47 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.


CLosed - Win by 3-0 KO

word to this.....dopeness......................... :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

King Solo has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 09:37 AM.

This kids mistaken for talent, but he’s really only a beginner
Cuz with over 100 posts a day, Natural still fails to deliver
Picture ya self as a vet, dude ya misplaced ya self in a day-dream
Puttin on a new ‘Face’ kid, but ya still ain’t makin’ the ‘A-Team’ (2nd)
Ya believin’ a depiction of fiction, but in reality I’m the killa, that’s factual
So there ain’t no stoppin’ me killin’ you all cuz dude……, it’s just natural
And yo I got 'wordplay' for ure ass, watch as I 'scrabble' ya brains
And my 'structure may seem demolished', but u’ll be 'left in remains' (4th)
I’d say my punches were false, watch him get confused by my verses
Cuz Natural’s idea of a 'pair-a-docs' is a 'duet of hospital nurses' (5th)
See the look on ya face, did I lose ya? Sorry, I know that ya slow
But it’s cool, if ya wanna know why ya lost……just look down below (6th)


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2nd bar = Face is a character from the program A-Team.
4th bar = Scrabble, the word game you play, hence the wordplay part. And then demolishing the structure of a building and it crumbles leaving nothing but remains. (WORDPLAY)
5th bar = pair-a-docs / paradox……paradox means self-contradiction, hence me saying my punches are false, but really they are true, I am contradicting myself.
6th bar = YES! The last bar permits me to utilise explanations.

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 03:17 PM.

70 wins from dickriders but i'll say u suck freely n give u a throw
n I'll slap you to have ya spirit's in circles so you'll really be soul-o
I'l shoot your mother with paste,kill her,n give yo brother some spray
king?well u outta flirt wit the referee's,cuz u won't try-ump. another way
nK's packing heat like cherynobyl n attacking the weakest nobels
solo sukin testicles with glitter,cos his whackness is known glow-ball
come from the back quietly n strike with knives n tumtacks all alike
n fractured jaw n broken spine cos you ain't get no feedback on open mics
his punches are like water, barely tapping me being so ineffectual
like virgins loving defeat,solo defines epotome of the sex-u-a-l(oser)
I'ma beat you till you dead n teach you to be quiet instead
n u went an beat up strobe cos it showed how weak you are in bed


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i think you are an alias of Daz, you have the exact same style as he does

^^him n OMB were my infuences......I studied they battles as a newb to get where I am...

anyways ....uppin...good drop solo :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for King Solo
 

checkin polllzzzzzzzzzzzzz nice battle yalll........

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Checking this out...................................

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damn you up this battle a lot......................

^^and yet and still.......no fucking votes.............

fuck........why no one voting?....................

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This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

oo-shit u are truly WACK........
U GOT OWNED BADLY HERE....

just quit now while u ahead....

^^ LoL!! killa you got a lot of haters..............

Voted For: King Solo

King Solo:
This kids mistaken for talent, but he’s really only a beginner
Cuz with over 100 posts a day, Natural still fails to deliver
true personals are good, but this doesnt hit very hard
Picture ya self as a vet, dude ya misplaced ya self in a day-dream
Puttin on a new ‘Face’ kid, but ya still ain’t makin’ the ‘A-Team’ good wordplay, nice punch
Ya believin’ a depiction of fiction, but in reality I’m the killa, that’s factual
So there ain’t no stoppin’ me killin’ you all cuz dude……, it’s just natural
ok.......doesnt really hit too hard
And yo I got 'wordplay' for ure ass, watch as I 'scrabble' ya brains
And my 'structure may seem demolished', but u’ll be 'left in remains'
first line is bad, because u mean scramble, not scrabble...2nd line doesnt make much sense without the explanation
I’d say my punches were false, watch him get confused by my verses
Cuz Natural’s idea of a 'pair-a-docs' is a 'duet of hospital nurses'
not bad, not that good either
See the look on ya face, did I lose ya? Sorry, I know that ya slow
But it’s cool, if ya wanna know why ya lost……just look down below
lol, good closer, could also refer to his verse, even though that wasnt intended

overall- good verse, 2/6 punches were really good (a-team, look below) ur problem is that most of the punches dont hit that hard...

natural killa:

70 wins from dickriders but i'll say u suck freely n give u a throw
n I'll slap you to have ya spirit's in circles so you'll really be soul-o
his record really isnt something u should draw attention to
I'l shoot your mother with paste,kill her,n give yo brother some spray
king?well u outta flirt wit the referee's,cuz u won't try-ump. another way
doesn't hit very hard, but not bad
nK's packing heat like cherynobyl n attacking the weakest nobels
solo sukin testicles with glitter,cos his whackness is known glow-ball
that hit harder than any of ur other punches, pretty good
come from the back quietly n strike with knives n tumtacks all alike
n fractured jaw n broken spine cos you ain't get no feedback on open mics
didnt hit hard at all
his punches are like water, barely tapping me being so ineffectual
like virgins loving defeat,solo defines epotome of the sex-u-a-l(oser)
doesn't rhyme, or doesn't make sense, depending on wether or not "loser" is part of the line
I'ma beat you till you dead n teach you to be quiet instead
n u went an beat up strobe cos it showed how weak you are in bed
better, but not as good as king's closer

overall- not as consistent as king's, most of the punches were weak...


v/king solo

please vote on my battle with kapital, link in sig...

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

checkin polls, good drop both....should be a close one..

WerdNizzle........................................ ........

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Voted For: King Solo

Damn one sided to me Solo just straight ripped this kid he came more original and with better puncehs fav line was.......

See the look on ya face, did I lose ya? Sorry, I know that ya slow
But it’s cool, if ya wanna know why ya lost……just look down below (6th)

Nk the problem with you is you come into these battle too cocky you came okay but could of did better like the Soul-o line was played as fuck but my fav line from you is......

his punches are like water, barely tapping me being so ineffectual
like virgins loving defeat,solo defines epotome of the sex-u-a-l(oser)

but solo gets my vote

WerdNizzle again......................uppin again...........

Voted For: King Solo

This kids mistaken for talent, but he’s really only a beginner
Cuz with over 100 posts a day, Natural still fails to deliver
rofl good opener ^^ lol he has no life i dont think
Picture ya self as a vet, dude ya misplaced ya self in a day-dream
Puttin on a new ‘Face’ kid, but ya still ain’t makin’ the ‘A-Team’ (2nd)
^^rofl like ateam its funny good punch
Ya believin’ a depiction of fiction, but in reality I’m the killa, that’s factual
So there ain’t no stoppin’ me killin’ you all cuz dude……, it’s just natural
^^ok not ya best
And yo I got 'wordplay' for ure ass, watch as I 'scrabble' ya brains
And my 'structure may seem demolished', but u’ll be 'left in remains' (4th)
^LMMFAO rofl..good connected
I’d say my punches were false, watch him get confused by my verses
Cuz Natural’s idea of a 'pair-a-docs' is a 'duet of hospital nurses' (5th)
rofl......jus got it o.0
See the look on ya face, did I lose ya? Sorry, I know that ya slow
But it’s cool, if ya wanna know why ya lost……just look down below (6th)
LMAO good finisher

good structure good punches great personals...LMAO good verse i neva seen you drop weak yet good flow all fitted in very well

70 wins from dickriders but i'll say u suck freely n give u a throw
n I'll slap you to have ya spirit's in circles so you'll really be soul-o
^rofl...good opener
I'l shoot your mother with paste,kill her,n give yo brother some spray
king?well u outta flirt wit the referee's,cuz u won't try-ump. another way
lol quite funny...shud have wordd it better tho
nK's packing heat like cherynobyl n attacking the weakest nobels
solo sukin testicles with glitter,cos his whackness is known glow-ball
meh...didnt feel this
come from the back quietly n strike with knives n tumtacks all alike
n fractured jaw n broken spine cos you ain't get no feedback on open mics
rofl good
his punches are like water, barely tapping me being so ineffectual
like virgins loving defeat,solo defines epotome of the sex-u-a-l(oser
didnt feel this)
I'ma beat you till you dead n teach you to be quiet instead
n u went an beat up strobe cos it showed how weak you are in bed
meh............

ok you need to work on ya structure an make ya verse consistent seriously...king took this

vote king

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Damn Ko'ed him in bout a hour that was fast........

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.................................removing votes, :nono:

Voted For: King Solo

This kids mistaken for talent, but he’s really only a beginner
Cuz with over 100 posts a day, Natural still fails to deliver
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It was aight, pretty basic but it hit...sort of lol 6/10

Picture ya self as a vet, dude ya misplaced ya self in a day-dream
Puttin on a new ‘Face’ kid, but ya still ain’t makin’ the ‘A-Team’ (2nd)
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Nah, wasnt feelin it much, still it was a okay bar, 6/10 again

Ya believin’ a depiction of fiction, but in reality I’m the killa, that’s factual
So there ain’t no stoppin’ me killin’ you all cuz dude……, it’s just natural
^
Nice nameplay, straight punch....7.5/10

And yo I got 'wordplay' for ure ass, watch as I 'scrabble' ya brains
And my 'structure may seem demolished', but u’ll be 'left in remains' (4th)
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Good hit, feelin the playin off your own structure an using it against him, somthin new right there, 8/10


I’d say my punches were false, watch him get confused by my verses
Cuz Natural’s idea of a 'pair-a-docs' is a 'duet of hospital nurses' (5th)
^
Kind of complex, good flow too it an wordplay 8.5/10

See the look on ya face, did I lose ya? Sorry, I know that ya slow
But it’s cool, if ya wanna know why ya lost……just look down below
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LOL Kind of witty, again never seen the concept before, good hit 7.5/10

Nice verse not much i can fault besides ya opening few bars, rest was flawless, decent drop solo.


70 wins from dickriders but i'll say u suck freely n give u a throw
n I'll slap you to have ya spirit's in circles so you'll really be soul-o
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Opening line using the ''dickrider'' thing is played, kinda like the pun in the second line i was like ''heh, thats aight''...lol, 6/10

I'l shoot your mother with paste,kill her,n give yo brother some spray
king?well u outta flirt wit the referee's,cuz u won't try-ump. another way
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opening line seemed corny too me, didnt really understand the second line either, weak bar anyway 4.5/10

nK's packing heat like cherynobyl n attacking the weakest nobels
solo sukin testicles with glitter,cos his whackness is known glow-ball
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good wordplay, really feelin this bar 8/10

come from the back quietly n strike with knives n tumtacks all alike
n fractured jaw n broken spine cos you ain't get no feedback on open mics
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opening line was good, thought you was gonna drop a bomb on him in the second, but it dissapointed me 5/10

his punches are like water, barely tapping me being so ineffectual
like virgins loving defeat,solo defines epotome of the sex-u-a-l(oser)
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good try, just worded horribly 5.5/10

I'ma beat you till you dead n teach you to be quiet instead
n u went an beat up strobe cos it showed how weak you are in bed
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Good creativity, but again...could of been worded alot better than it was 6.5/10

Ya verse was aight, kid...you just lack better wording of your punches, ya ideas are good, but you gotta know how too term them creative ideas into better punchlines

Overall solo had the more consistancy an a more complex feel too his verse so he gets my vote

vote=solo.....yeah.

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yo i would had to give this shit to king solo...his verse was better...i liked the flow and structure...rtf wen i start battlin

nah....I got mad beef with TG n UNF..yet they go votin in my battle

but you won now..me n khaoz ain't got no beef.

so congrads on a win :thumbup:

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