Sincere vs Sin`cere
 

Battle Rules:

.....LOSER WILL HAVE TO CHANGE THERE NAME....IF THEY DONT THEY'll GET BANNED.....WHEN U ACCEPT THIS BATTLE U ARE AGREEING TO THIS STIPULATION...

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-23-05 at 02:21 PM

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Sincere has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 02:21 PM.

Sin`cere has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 02:22 PM.

This guy took my name but really I got ur profile link
And ur punches are like Dinosaurs they became extinct
Like punches to ur face ill make them hurt like taking out a liver
You not the real sin`cere so like Drive-Thru Joints you do not-deliver
Then u claim that I bited ur name cmon u newbie y u so mean?
Must be faking like actors so ill quickly make him a deleted scene
Acting like u me man, I love the fans but biting my name is wrong
U had two mistakes one was calling u sincere and u typing www.rapverse.com
Cuz I just embarrassed u and made u look like change in my pocket
He lame at rhyming so after this they’ll call u tha RV Andy Milonakis

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EZ understandable....jus click the link wurr it says profile link to see that he jus joined today....and the punches are done...if u dont undastand PM me...or do not vote....

All honest votes will be Returned Honestly so PLZZZZZ VOTE....

wuteva........ok battle is set uppin for votes......

lmfao @ that no punch havin peice of jibber jabbish you called a verse....uppin

Voted For: Sincere

Sincere
the first bar was tight hahaha... i like the play on the cards, i thought it was gonna flop but it was pretty decent. The simon cowel/ American Idol lines was decent. I wasn't feeling the spritefull line and the cum line. The ending was straight. Flow was good, some concepts are overly used on here, but you found a way to switch it up in a clever way. The best bar was prolly the first one..You even had a line of wordplay.. you could step that up some. Seems like you wrote this in 10 minutes. Take your time and write up some better set-ups.


Sin'cere
the first bar wit the profile link, what were you tryna get at? The dinosaur line is overly used and not flipped creatively. the start of the second bar..

Like punches to ur face ill make them hurt like taking out a liver
You not the real sin`cere so like Drive-Thru Joints you do not-deliver
^^ what's wrong with this, is the double "like" in the first half.. that's annoying. The second half was decent at best. Your verse started to get weaker as you went on. And the last bar was a punch at yourself because it didn't rhyme and you said "he lame at rhyming" in that same bar. And your metaphors were extremely basic, work on better set-ups for metaphors if you gonna use them. -_-..

I don't know who either of you are, just ran into this battle to see which verse is better.. Y'all both could do a little better, but eh.. It was a decent battle.

My vote's the Sincere without the apostrophe.

This was feedback posted for Sin`cere
 

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Voted For: Sin`cere

Vote: Sin'cere

Sincere.... ya verse was kinda wack... a lot of your bars were just way to basic.... the punches werent that hard... some of them were but most of them werent... your opener wasnt that great.... but your closer was good

Sin'cere.... ya verse was good... more creative and harder than Sincere.... since this was a change your name battle... you actually had a bar or two about it.... punches were much harder... opener wasnt that good.... closer was good and funny

This was feedback posted for Sincere
 

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This was feedback posted for Sincere
 

Insecure about his sexuality but he "pussy" by nature
I'll speakingly rape ya like having simon cowel rate ya
^^
ive read that bar somewere before.

ohhhhh werd he prolly bit that from sum where jus like he bit my name.....lmfao....up......

nah i dont bit rhymes or names an hurry up an vote so i can get this W kid is wack......

im wack when u copied my name and have some wack ass verse that has nothin to do wit me no personals so shut the fuck up....and change ur name bastard......

Voted For: Sin`cere

Wow........................IO think this takes it in the closes battle i have seen here. um lets see Sin'cere came with some hardhitin punches with some nice personals while Sincere came with crazy punchlines which evened it out. To me this battle is pretty much decided in which content each voter likes. They were both even in all categories in my view. But im leaning towards the punches lines and personals Sin'cere had so he takes it in my view

Advice-both yuall text game is on point just keep doing ya thang and dont let the props get to ya head N keep elevatin

Voted For: Sin`cere

ok sin'cere won this ez his punches was more hard hittin then the otha sincere he lacked good punches as well as flow and vocab and ya structure suck ass get that fixed man and sin'cere had some nice personals givin him the win

sin'cere rtf or the vote will be removed
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Voted For: Sin`cere

Structure-Sincere got this one, sin'cere i felt ya lines was too stretched gutta make them end at the same spot to capture a better flow....sincere had better flow

Punches-Sin'cere really had the only good punches in this batttle, sincere didnt really think you ever did diss your opponent....dont know what happened there....sincere you can up on that on your new name :thumbup:

Personals-Just check out the links, sin'cere took it by storm and just ripped his opponent....sincere had lil personals that werent effective in his verse......

Multis-Niether had multis that appealed in there verse was just straight raw disses..which is not a bad thing

Vocab-Again not much vocab into these verses...for future reference i suggest you guys have your vocab enhance as your verse goes on, just a suggestion.....both up on that

Originality-Both had pretty fresh verses, but overall sincere had a very played verse sin'cere man, realy took it with ur raw punches and verse......with that bein said

v/sin'cere

rtf on my open mic's since i kindly analyzed your battle :thumbup:

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uppin for some honest votes kid gettin his herb buddys to vote for him.............

Voted For: Sincere

aight battle was decent sincere you came good had some good punches that hit him pretty hard your first 4 was dope after that it was alright def good verse though

Sin'cere structure was meh you didnt really have any good punches or or personals except for tha name thing an that could go both ways overall sincere (without ') got this battle pz...

This was feedback posted for Sin`cere
 

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This was feedback posted for Sincere
 

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Voted For: Sin`cere

Made me laugh a lil at the begining..nice punches..overall better verse..plus i like your name more than his..