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yvonne vs DJ BANANAZ
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-23-05 at 04:41 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
b4 i accept...im fuckin too tired for 6 unlimited lines...make it 6-8 at least
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ok 6-8 lines but your only add more lines that you can do
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Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 04:46 PM.
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check in...imma go ahead and drop im laying it down now
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like bent dicks this banana's punches are loosin aims
chains would wrap ur neck after a show cos u lockin ur game you cant spit bitch,u just here to roll balls like ur avy you'ld shoot urself if you were hustlin in war in the amy (army) from grafix to battlin..who wunt tell u mistakin i-dentity? i looked at the cypher and u dropped 3..u sample null-entity dis wigga cant hold a mic,if he could stone wud b crawling you just a pure bitch like fox,your verse shows how you fallin i'ld go bak to drawin if i were u dj..cos u got it twisted you dragin ur hairs thinkin its fun..when ur wackness is listed ...thats it |
omfg!!!!!!!......
are ghost writtin...or pre-writting?.... damn bro just accept and drop whateva comes to ur mind mayne... |
imma stomp you out like i do my rugs ...
this kid wanna play you can play wit slugs cuz i got a 9 wit the scope one shot gon have ya ass thinking you da pope this kid real hood you could say im dope ..imma dot ya eye then imma cross the t's..this bitch laying in the grave still on her knee's |
DJ BANANAZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 05:00 PM.
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yo my computer is fucked up i accept and it worked then i droped then it didnt pop up so i had to drop there so make due ...whats there cuz i gotta roll
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omfg my post is in the wrong place be get the thread closed and take the win.... cuz i cant repost because of the no recycling rule ...oh well maybe next time yvonne will my verse is right up there so nothing i can do unless the mod can fix it well i gotta go now so peace out
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hol up ima help us out herre...
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uppin this stuff mayne...peeps ur battles r gonna be hitted too
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yo uppin this battle money this shit be bananaz yo give us some votes
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Voted For: Yvonne
wow lolz dj bananas elevate serius imma stomp you out like i do my rugs ... this kid wanna play you can play wit slugs ^^meh played n not good cuz i got a 9 wit the scope one shot gon have ya ass thinking you da pope this kid real hood wtf? you could say im dope ..imma dot ya eye then imma cross the t's..this bitch laying in the grave still on her knee's wtf? work on ya structure rofl.............elevate badly yvonnes seemed to be structured better punches hit harder had punches erm...good flow ,yshud i explain this more lol vote-yyvonne Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
umm the rules where 6-8 hahah you did 9 verse thats againts the rules and you only got the vote because you ask him to vote for you in the chat room this morning so thats cheating
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Voted For: DJ BANANAZ
punches was not all that good but....i liked it better than hers Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Yvonne
punches are stronger, rhymes and flow came more direct,personnals are more hard hitting. return the favour, @. vs natural killer Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Yvonne
u get this vote basically the other kid was kinda elementary like i can tell hes young.....i like yvonnes rhyme scheme and word play good shit no hate jus potin my honest opinion Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: DJ BANANAZ
yvonne, nothing really stood out, your punches didn't have flow or creativity, and really hurt them. no personals, which can really influence a battle. structure was fine, but that adds little.....you really need to work on creativity and wording of punches. get right to dissin' him, don't focus on other stuff, and try not to make punches about his dick, because how the hell would you know. get more creative, expand your horizons a little, think outside the box, elevate dj bananaz, nice verse man, i see you've elevated from the last time i read your stuff, you really put a packing on her. you came out consistent with punches, that really seem to connect and your verse had a nice overall flow, which really brought everything together....overall, you did quite nicely, but i feel you lack some creativity in punches as well; getting off into some played shit, thats bad, try and avoid that, but you've elevated quite a bit, so continue along, good work man rtf on this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d=1#post2383335 v/dj bananaz |
rotfllllllllllllllllllllllllll...lmmfaoooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooo
this is pure madness.... 1) mr bananaz...i told him to vote on this battle cos it was gettin slept on..i didnt tell him to vote for me 2) u said we cud add more till where we can get to...or am i mistakin...re-read ur posts and u'll c i aint frontin 3)lmmfao...at the continuos dq's this all fucked up mayne...is drakel really serious or there was some shit that went on b4 he voted?...ahh fuck it... 4)peeps keep votin and xplain ur damn vote yo...plzzz...so we get this shit closed 5)i wonder y i decided to battle u...prolly cos i thought u were a gd one(bein it that u kept ur text rec hid)...never will i make this mistake...nubees always piss me off when they c they gettin ripped...fuck fuck fuck... holla |
yo bitch my text rec was not hidden stupid ass it said 0-0 grafix 0-0 next look before you run your mouth .... and it seems that im winning so who is the newbie
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lmmfao...now i wanna beef or wha?...u got the wrong person cos i hate it!
well i didnt c ur text rec if not i wudnt have replyed to ur call out...and dont start feelin like u've won dude its just one vote...this wuda been closed if there werent no dq's u know...its all gd mayne dont be gettin pissed off yo...lmao... |
uppin this shit mayne left fold it up peeps plz......................
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Voted For: Yvonne
I'ma brake it down.... This: like bent dicks this banana's punches are loosin aims chains would wrap ur neck after a show cos u lockin ur game you cant spit bitch,u just here to roll balls like ur avy you'ld shoot urself if you were hustlin in war in the amy (army) from grafix to battlin..who wunt tell u mistakin i-dentity? i looked at the cypher and u dropped 3..u sample null-entity dis wigga cant hold a mic,if he could stone wud b crawling you just a pure bitch like fox,your verse shows how you fallin i'ld go bak to drawin if i were u dj..cos u got it twisted you dragin ur hairs thinkin its fun..when ur wackness is listed Vs.... imma stomp you out like i do my rugs ... this kid wanna play you can play wit slugs cuz i got a 9 wit the scope one shot gon have ya ass thinking you da pope this kid real hood you could say im dope ..imma dot ya eye then imma cross the t's..this bitch laying in the grave still on her knee's That ^ Yvonne wins, what more can i say? Nah, i'll explain it a little better so it doesnt get removed. Yvonne, ya had everythin this banana character didnt. Banana kid.... Ya verse lacked oersonals, had little to no punchlines, and i just wasnt feeling your verse an i dont think anybody would deny that..Yvonne gets the win. |
Voted For: Yvonne
BANANAZ - your punches were ok, you had nothing even remotely personal, waaay too basic everywhere...no wordplay really and your vocab was borrrrrring...elevate Yvonne - you had some nice punches, your personals won it really...plus u had some nice vocab...keep writin:thumbup: |
Voted For: Yvonne
imma stomp you out like i do my rugs ... this kid wanna play you can play wit slugs ^^^No Weak to basic cuz i got a 9 wit the scope one shot gon have ya ass thinking you da pope this kid real hood ^^^Didnt even rhyme you could say im dope ..imma dot ya eye then imma cross the t's..this bitch laying in the grave still on her knee's ^^^No Weak... like bent dicks this banana's punches are loosin aims chains would wrap ur neck after a show cos u lockin ur game ^^^Good Personal for the Opener you cant spit bitch,u just here to roll balls like ur avy you'ld shoot urself if you were hustlin in war in the amy (army) ^^^Good punch an personal from grafix to battlin..who wunt tell u mistakin i-dentity? i looked at the cypher and u dropped 3..u sample null-entity ^^^Nice punch dis wigga cant hold a mic,if he could stone wud b crawling you just a pure bitch like fox,your verse shows how you fallin ^^^Ight...not as hard hittin i'ld go bak to drawin if i were u dj..cos u got it twisted you dragin ur hairs thinkin its fun..when ur wackness is listed ^^^ight V/Yvonne this was a one sided battle....yvonne came wit some good punchs that were consistent wit personals an some wordplay also good structure...Dj u came weak u need to elavate some ur punchs didnt even rhyme....No hate Work on that.....RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED |
thanx....but drop a link so i can vote???????????????
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ok...
uppin this stuff mayne...lets finish it....... |
Voted For: Yvonne
Yvonne like bent dicks this banana's punches are loosin aims chains would wrap ur neck after a show cos u lockin ur game ^nice opener, funny punch 8/10 you cant spit bitch,u just here to roll balls like ur avy you'ld shoot urself if you were hustlin in war in the amy (army) ^nice punch with a personal touch to it, good stuff 7/10 from grafix to battlin..who wunt tell u mistakin i-dentity? i looked at the cypher and u dropped 3..u sample null-entity ^aight, again a personal touch to it, nice 6/10 dis wigga cant hold a mic,if he could stone wud b crawling you just a pure bitch like fox,your verse shows how you fallin ^wordplay is nice, good punch as well^/b] 7/10 i'ld go bak to drawin if i were u dj..cos u got it twisted you dragin ur hairs thinkin its fun..when ur wackness is listed [b]^dope closer, finished em off 7/10 Total: 35/50 = 70% DJ BANANAZ imma stomp you out like i do my rugs ... this kid wanna play you can play wit slugs ^uhm no punch in your opener 2/10 cuz i got a 9 wit the scope one shot gon have ya ass thinking you da pope this kid real hood you could say im dope ^uhm again no punch but decent vocab 4/10 ..imma dot ya eye then imma cross the t's..this bitch laying in the grave still on her knee's ^coo closer 5/10 Total: 11/30 = 37% Very one-sided, DJ BANANAZ had no punches whatsoever, Yvonne had a solid battle verse! |
Voted For: Yvonne
imma stomp you out like i do my rugs ... this kid wanna play you can play wit slugs ok cuz i got a 9 wit the scope one shot gon have ya ass thinking you da pope this kid real hood dont rhyme you could say im dope ..imma dot ya eye then imma cross the t's..this bitch laying in the grave still on her knee's weak verse no punch ya opner was ok N thats it pratices plez like bent dicks this banana's punches are loosin aims chains would wrap ur neck after a show cos u lockin ur game decent you cant spit bitch,u just here to roll balls like ur avy you'ld shoot urself if you were hustlin in war in the amy (army) ok from grafix to battlin..who wunt tell u mistakin i-dentity? i looked at the cypher and u dropped 3..u sample null-entity ha ha dis wigga cant hold a mic,if he could stone wud b crawling you just a pure bitch like fox,your verse shows how you fallin ok i'ld go bak to drawin if i were u dj..cos u got it twisted you dragin ur hairs thinkin its fun..when ur wackness is listed decent ending and a way better verse in all aspect |
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