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.:The Diary Of -UNF-:.
Day 1
21 August 2005 13:25pm --------------------------------------------------------- *mental note-kill maddrapper...1* Man i need to go get sum lunch Satanic Chapters. Chapter.1 -------------------------------------- Murdered Holy Men ...I Spread Silence Thru Churches, Decimate Those Who Still Prayin Infinite Slaying, Body Rottin For Days, Flesh Slowly Decayin... ...Projectin Evil Thoughts Enforced By The Worlds Blasphamey Problems Smash Into Me, Saliva Drips From My Mouth As I Drift To Insanity.. ...Slowly In The Shadows, Jus Out Of Ya Presence I Stalk Ya With Turmendous Torture, Prayin For Your Own Death At The Alter... ...And Still I Assult Ya... Leavin Demons For Your Enitiy To Linger Wit Blades Spring To Hit, Slowly Puncture Yu Wit Needles Thru Ya Finger Tips... ...My Mind Projects Images Of Those Who Shall Feel The Slaughter Next Grasp Ya Lungs N Stop Ya Breath...Yu Rest Until The Next Day An Alter Boy Smells Rottin Flesh... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- *Mental note-continue tommorow* |
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21st August 2005 14:06 ----------------------------------------- finished eating-go out n play b-ball soon First Freestyle of the day -------------------------------------------- Alphabet meh....................... bomb chronic leave glass pipes and bongs exploding, strong tonics leave trapped life until I speak my next-notion... dark matter leave materials imploding stem-potions, cause alter egos slightly nefarious that have slim-boasting... choke artist like inhaling the paint toxins on demo-tapes, stimulate while fakers immulate the future of grimmest-fate... integrate into systems while ripping fates-of-my-victims, watch em taking incisions leave em with breaking-decisions... Im with-wicked-logic Im spitting-talk-sick with explicit-content, have paper cuts like oragami fold when you twist-and-lock-it... then pivet-rocket bring back dead languages with crptic-topics, seisures leave you with livid-sockets displayed in vivid-optic... acid head scalps strippin-caustic speak no evil like lipless-gothics, like burning books Im ripping-topics making the timid-nautious... ya thoughts be cleaned-better like the strings of a dream-catcher, be like linchmobs looking for freddie end up with creamed-lecher... speaking-with-heat exposes hidden laws just the the secret-police, reaping-the-streets of ya killers that go for peeps-that-are-weak... Ill attach ya soul to a carriage to have you running-for-ya-life, the weak fall but the strong will keep coming-more-to-write... they'll be screaming-holy shit like I shoved a cross-up-ya-ass, Im seeming-boldly but ya shit will get tossed-in-the-trash alphabet alpha apostles assaulting assinine approaching aprehenda lasting lyrically longer living ligaments have lacking-lenders punching petty pitiful plans paralyzing paranoid prodiges hitting histerical hater hopping hazing hiatus horribly hot-mcs attacking avarice avid adversaries assuming they adequote basting bastards breaking bold befriending basic battlist exact edicate evaporating excessive extrogen-energy tearing terrible timely task taking text-trojans-timidly ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Concept is played but fucka concept...rofl 1...... see ya tommorow! |
Good verse, the emotion was good. You made all your lines rhyme and flow well, which made it interesting and good to read.
...My Mind Projects Images Of Those Who Shall Feel The Slaughter Next Grasp Ya Lungs N Stop Ya Breath...Yu Rest Until The Next Day An Alter Boy Smells Rottin Flesh... Thought that line was the best, it showed good emotion and created a good image. Overall, it was good. |
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21st August 2005 15:54 ----------------------------------- Responding to feedback -------------------------------------- Hey Man Thanks For The Feed Upping... ------------------------------------------------------- *mental note-write more shit*...1 |
Good Shit Man Keep This Up Very Good Emotion And Imagery Story Line And multi's Great Vocabulary Was Great!
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21st August 2005 17:37 ------------------------------------------------- man im bored second freestyle of the day ------------------------------------------ Intro...The Girl goes to a party to impress a guy she hardly knows...lets go to the scene.. ...The Party... Tardy peeps poppin hearty bacardi and mixin it with Nine-Pills-Of-Ex-Tacy that'll send Spine-Chills-Thats-Plexed-Ya-See, deaths smilin while Lines-Kills-Her-Neck-To-Breathe Optics slammed-dim as her waists still dancin to spread the Poison-To-Da-Core a bitch Hoistened-On-Her-Fours, her face abused,eyes Moistened-Till-It-Pours Knocked equilibrium cuz da prequels-premium as her body Shifts-Her-Position and Rifts-Her-Cognition, her 'minds in da clouds' the way shit 'Swifts-Her-Ambitions' Visions wrecked in secs as a rapists darkly blessed- shes a Date-Rape-Victim her cries State-Scraped-Dictums unheard as the mans Hate-Taped-And-Gripped-Sins ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- *mental note-continue in a bit* *chek operation takeover forum* pz 1 ---------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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21st August 2005 15:41 ------------------------------------- respondin to feedback ------------------------------------ Hey Man Thanks For The Feed Upping... ----------------------------------------------------- pz ...........1 *mental note-do a collab wid yvonne* |
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21st August 2005 17:59 ----------------------------------------------- man im soooooooo fuckin bored second freestyle of the day continued --------------------------------------------------------- ...Afterwards...((Two Hours Later)) Rollin in a torn-caddie thats scorned-patchy bouncin on the Rocks-N-Gravel Doors Popped-From-Travel as the system blares, leavin peepes Shocked-N-Raveled Her eyes flutter half-open while she hears laughs-potent...her Memory-Lapsed in heresy tacts, her 'heart of stone softened' like her Emories-Cracked the driver pledged-in-sin as he pops more 'medicine' to help him 'Think-Straight' he can't Beat-Grace from the gods, to Plea-Base to 'space his heart' and 'Greet-Space' Parked at street-lights, vision fucked and he cant speak-right..but his Shoes-To-Da-Metal Bruised-N-Not-Settled, an innocent girl's 'droppin her fruit' like she 'Threw-Out-Da-Petals'!! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *Mental Note-finish later* *another mental note-up ma OM's* Pz....1 ---------------------------------------------------------------- |
good shit man all of em keep this going for reals!
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nice freestyling there -UNF-....very good work keep it up
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21st August 2005 18:14 ----------------------------------- Responding to feedback -------------------------------------- Hey Man Thanks For The Feed Upping... ------------------------------------------------------- |
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21st August 2005 18:15 ----------------------------------- Responding to feedback -------------------------------------- Hey Man Thanks For The Feed Upping... ------------------------------------------------------- |
danm this kid is hella good with hes open mics, and battles, i thought our collabo was hella good, ya other open mic was fire, ya battles its like u elevate depend how good ya battler is all around keep doing ya thing........
9.5/10 thats based on over-all skills point blank........ |
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21st August 2005 18:18 ----------------------------------- Responding to feedback -------------------------------------- Hey Man Thanks For The Feed Upping... ------------------------------------------------------- |
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21st August 2005 18:35 ----------------------------------- Man im talkin to too many ppl on aim Second freestyle of the day...part 3 ---------------------------------------------------- (Change of Style) ........motors torqued goin Zero-to-Sixty, 'midas repaired ' so its a 'Hero-Wit-Quik-Feet'; as the innocent girl's Fear-Blows-In-Tripped-Heat... ........Drivers visions soon are Addin-In-Numbers, Splatted-N-Cumbered...cuz like 'psychopaths in comas' their deaths gonna be 'Padded-In-Slumber!!'... .......Speedin mass units Criss-Crossin-Traffic, Switch-Crossings'-Graphic as their fender meets da rail, 'dentin in faster' then a 'Bitch-Flossin-Plastic!!'... ......Flyin in oblivion over Massive-Cliffs, they Wrapped-N-Stiff...shocked at their 'motionless death' like they still 'Trapped-In-Midst'... ---------------------------------------------------- Man this automated reply is annoying me Pz .....1 |
yea good drop.....
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21st August 2005 18:48 ----------------------------------- Responding to feedback -------------------------------------- Hey Man Thanks For The Feed Upping... ------------------------------------------------------- |
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21st August 2005 20:19 ----------------------------------- second freestyle of the day part 4.? lol i forgot *mental note dont foget* ------------------------------------- Deaths Discretely Smiles At Innocence Lost.................. .......Car breachin the earth sendin MASSIVE-SHOCKWAVES sufferin a tortrous death cuz its a PASSIVE-BLOCKED-GRAVE!!..... .......The gas tank EXPLODES-ON-IMPACT as the interior IMPLODES-N-TWISTS-BACKS and flings them BESTOWED-WIT-WRISTS-SNAPPED.... .......Shards of glass rip sockets and EMBEDS-THEIR-THOUGHTS, INSTEAD-IT-PLOTS to shatter dentals and SKIN-HEADS-WITH-ROCKS.... ......Jutted and spines cracked, their NECKS-SNAP-AND-CRUMBLE as the car's DECK-FLAPS-AND-FUMBLES and clasps, so their CHEST-CHAPS-AND-STUMBLES... .......Death laughs at them, with his lucid KNIFE-IN-THE-DASH gettin ready to take more innocence...another LIFE-IN-A-FLASH!!....... -------------------------------------------------------------- *mental note-do collab bout love* |
very good dairy
u r very imagery and da ideas was good u had a good vocabulary but half da word i didnt know wat they mean overall 9/10 |
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21st August 2005 20:35 ----------------------------------- Responding to feedback -------------------------------------- Hey Man Thanks For The Feed Upping... ------------------------------------------------------- |
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21st August 2005 21:27 --------------------------------- Meh im soooooo fuckin bored holla at me for a collab:thumbup: A Nerds Perspective ------------------------------------------------- Mother used to say.."I doubted that you would live".. cos she didn't have to push..I walked out of the uterus.. vitamin sizes are to big..so my vitals are obscene.. you think it's a coincidence all my idols are obese..?.. my body's a laugh..anorexics view me as a gentleman.. but in biogoly class..teachers use me as the skeleton.. gravity?..in basketball I WISH I could land like another.. because whenever I jump..I always land like a feather.. I used to work at a circus..as the nerd never nervous.. tight ropes?..big deal...endless turf when I worked it.. I have a passion to one stab some phatty asses.. and when I do..I'm gonna lube my shaft with fatty acids.. even simple cliches have been to known to get me prude.. like when I run..I hear "I have a bone to pick with you".. a T-Bone is finger food when made for this fellow.. who needs knives..when I can cut steaks with my elbow..?.. I never date a billiards due to dudes who are foolish.. who swear it's funny..to have me used as a poolstick.. and I'm burly so I'm sending all girls in a fit of awe.. cuz I'm stunning in the gym when I'm curling a sishkabob.. but now I'm swollen..so cats can never offend me.. because last week..I boasted a max of negative 50.. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ *mental note-stop being weird * *mental note-collab wid yvonne* Pz ..............1 --------------------------------------------------------- |
Day 2
22nd August 2005 11:16 ------------------------------------------ i promised ya chapter 2 so here we go Satanic Chapter Chapter.2 -------------------------------------------------- Murdered Babies... ..I Sit In This Woman...Considerin' Vile Speciment Of Her Fetus On The Outside, Crying.. All Hope For My Survival Seems To Leave Us.. ..No Longer Clingin Hope To Join And Be Apeart Of This World Of The Living Pull Into The Abortion Clinic Its Evident That I'll Die In This Prision... ...As Time Passes The Operation Is Preformed And I Fail To Death Wit This Failure Of A Mother Who Kill Her Own Son Before He Exhaled A Breath... ...Victim Of Abortion Clinics..A Supposed Catholic Girl Kills Her Baby Without Repentence As She Goes To Live Her Daily Life, Not Even Acknowledging My Existence.. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- pz......1 ----------------------------------------------------------------- |
Day 3
23rd August 2005 15:08 --------------------------------------- sory bout yestaday was out Satanic Chapters Part 3 ------------------------------ A Rapist.............................. ...I Wait For The Moment, My Mind States Drifts Off Steadily Breathing Heavily, Stand Cautiously In The Shadows, Waiting Readily ...Then The Moment Came, Slender Blonde Hair, Plush Breasts Fitted Snuggly In Her Bra Seemingly The Moments Passed Quickly, Checking The Surrondin To Ensure No One Saw ...And Without A Flaw, I Accended From The Shadows With One Blow To Her Temple Sexy Dimples, Her Limp Body Lay On The Ground, Breathin Softly I Fondle Her Nipples ...Lips Cold, As She Slowly Stirs To Reality, No Skirt Bare Nude I Was Deeply In It One Move And Yur Dead Cunt! My Voice Struck Fear And She Put Up No Resistence ...Without Repentance, As I Reach For The Rusty Blade In My Back Pocket Yeah Love Kills Strike Her Abodomen Reapedly, And Slowly Drift Away As The Blood Spills |
Day 4
24th August 2005 16:10 ------------------------------------------------------ Satanic chapters the last part ok gonna do a freestyle later ---------------------------------------------- Man On Death Row ...Facing The Judges Anxiously Yet Nervously Waiting On This Scentence Rape, Murder, Guilty On All Charges, Pain To The Victim Yes Its A Fact The Sent This ...My Mind Drifts Back In A Flash Back Of The When I Let Bullets Fly N Fill Ya Chest Streets Were Still A Mess, Didnt Care, Attempted To Burn Evidence Yet Police Smelt The Meltin Flesh ...To This Day I Still Cared Less, My Drifts To Insanity Came Back Instnatly As I Picture The Time I Stopped Ya Breath As I Viciously Raped Yu Then Chopped Ya Neck, And Spit In Your Mom's Face When She Asked Why I Caused Ya Death ...But Now My Tone Differs, As Im Brought Into This Metalliac Chambers, One Wooden Chair My Cold Dead Stare, Grim Smile, Im About To Meet Lord Jesus, And Yu'd Think I'd Care ...Yet Even Tho, As Demons Scribe Verses In The Epics Of These Satanic Chapters On How The World Lost Me Insanly Laughed And Before They Stopped Me, 1000 Volts Surged And Melted Skin Off Of My Body. FUCK!! -------------------------------------- pz 1 |
word up duke i like ur style u got alot of good imagery, structure, multi'z & organization of material overall good shit keep writing fa sho ight & yea peep out my diary when u get a chance
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Damn...hella nice shit...you're bored a lot aren't you?
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Day ...9
29th August 09:08 ----------------------- aight am gonna put some stuff ni today jus bear wid me |
Day 9
29th August 2005 13:02 --------------------------------------- umm thing i jus wrote lol -------------------------------------- seems like y'all got narcalypse, i'm not one to underestimate// sleep on me & catch a rude awakenin', be atcha wake// load up the Clipse, "I'm Serious", don't fuck wit my cake// get sprayed like Mase, make ya "Breathe Stretch & Shake"// i got the Eagle & you can get carried away on a stretcher// so when i flip the bird, it's more than a obscene gesture// don't come at me sideways. i'm the wrong one// have ya heart racin' to the flatline in the long run// i ain't afraid ta put ya heart in the street, so don't push me// i'm like a Gynecologist, i keep seein' you pussies// frontin' like you tough cuz you stole a car or two// but the burner'll cook ya ribs like a Barbecue... -------------------------------------------------- wurdnezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz |
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