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-UNF- vs Mimesis
Battle Rules:
6 - 14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 350 Check in by: 08-23-05 at 05:17 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
-UNF- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-05 05:18 PM.
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y we battling?????????????????????????????????????????? ???
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Lmao. You told me on AIM that you wanted to battle me? You also called me out in Bitchslapped. I'm just responding.
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After Numerous Anal Surgerys To Repair Ya Bunghole Wound’s Ammassed… There Remains No Drum Rolls…Cos Mimesis Broke Butt..Still…Half Assed… Wouldn’t Be Funky With Knowledge..Passin’ Gas Durin’ AP English & Maths… Ya Necks Like an Uncircumcized Gash..Someone Give This Malignant Peasant a Bath… Like a Lowlife Hobo on The Smash...U Clash For Christmas Presents Amidst Trash… Ur Jokes Are Malconsumed Like Product’s In Need of Bein Ransacked & Slashed… M' Use’s a Hand Vac In Reverse To Litter & Mash..He’s Low as Bodily Wasted Gas… Im Sayin…….Get Blasted With Mace..With Metaphoric Slurs As Im Slashin’ ya Face… -UNF-’s Embraced Like Diamond Platinum and Trinkets..Kid.Ur a Trashy Disgrace… Like Willing Fags U Been Maliciously Raped To The Point Of No Debate Or Escape… Ya Moms Resembles a…Dead Ape..Sportin’ a Rasta Weave with a Red Cape… I Literally Hate This Unemployed..Homeless...Engrate…Brutally Neglected’s Ur Definite Fate… With Gargantuan Arms..-UNF- Grate’s Ur Cranium Till Crushed Like Seed’s of a Red Grape… upping |
Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-21-05 07:52 PM.
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swiftmc2005: mimesis
uhhwhatupb: sup.. swiftmc2005: I DIDNT KNOW THIS WOZ U LOL swiftmc2005: i dropped but ima get owned This shit is fucking ridiculous.. Of course I'ma leave this dude tossed Cause you're the first kid to call me out.. and then tell me you've lost Just watch and learn.. overused multis, ill leave you on the tile and shit You do got some hotshh.. nah wait.. ..that's just who's style you bit But even he dropped it.. I do act tough.. i'll admit, but whats worse kid Is I did cry in the notebook.. that you write your fucking verses in All you post is shit.. may call yourself a champ, ill still roast your teeth But you're only like Ben Wallace.. cause both you bitches post up weak See, you ain't on my level.. you can take the loss, its meant for you Cause I'm gonna be pullin this out.. like what your paps meant to do Your a waste of life.. you cant beat me.. jesus, i dont care what you say I will get straight to the point.. because the rest of you is gay So fuck you.. I've won this shit, you're just left huggin the deck Man, I've sonned you so bad I have to send your mom monthly checks Fuck your overused multis, played concepts, and wack wordplay kid. |
This was feedback posted for Mimesis
checkin the polls.......I think Mim took this, but its a real nice battle, g'luck both..
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This was feedback posted for -UNF-
Tell You The Truth Good Battle Mimesis Full Of Personals Some Punches...-UNF- Full Of Multi's And Punches..Over All Good Battle Here I Can't Vote Though Both Dropped Nice
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Uhh.. Word.
Thanks for the feedback. Upping this for votes. |
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Voted For: -UNF-
iight man...i've been followin this dude to see if he could come weak in atleast a battle with mimesis but i guess i gatta swallow my xpectation cos he just proved me wrong....he had more vocabs and his verse kept on flowin from the begining to the end...structure was way better mayne and his punches all hit str8 and direct...he certainly had more decent metas and cooler effect came up with the multis...mimesis this isnt the best i've seen from you bro...what happened?...your verse was all focused on you and you winnin..you know that aint the main scope of a battle mayne...you came up with a blah verse...no real hard punch..but structure was ok.. o well..^^xplained me vote keep it up unf |
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This was feedback posted for -UNF-
checking da polls.........................................
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I'm not one to credit votes against me as dickriding..
But come on; http://community.rapverse.com/showb...21&page=2&pp=15 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=204876 Now, that's your last THREE battles. Me, I don't just accidentally end up in somebody's battles three consecutive times and vote for them. I've voted for people more then three times, but not just in a row like that. Lmao. Whatever, kid. |
And no, that wasn't an accusation, so you don't need to get your friends back in here to say that they aren't dickriding you.
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Voted For: -UNF-
Mimesis This shit is fucking ridiculous.. Of course I'ma leave this dude tossed Cause you're the first kid to call me out.. and then tell me you've lost ^nice personal opener Just watch and learn.. overused multis, ill leave you on the tile and shit You do got some hotshh.. nah wait.. ..that's just who's style you bit ^hehe good punch But even he dropped it.. I do act tough.. i'll admit, but whats worse kid Is I did cry in the notebook.. that you write your fucking verses in ^damn...harsh... All you post is shit.. may call yourself a champ, ill still roast your teeth But you're only like Ben Wallace.. cause both you bitches post up weak ^decent wordplay but not really feeling it See, you ain't on my level.. you can take the loss, its meant for you Cause I'm gonna be pullin this out.. like what your paps meant to do ^coo punch, seen it a lot of times before though Your a waste of life.. you cant beat me.. jesus, i dont care what you say I will get straight to the point.. because the rest of you is gay ^good wordplay but no real punch So fuck you.. I've won this shit, you're just left huggin the deck Man, I've sonned you so bad I have to send your mom monthly checks ^nice closer Solid battle verse here, I felt you had a decent consistency with the hardhitting punches. You added some personal touches to them, fell off in few places where I felt it was more a filler than a real bar but overall quite solid. The flow was good, not always as smooth everywhere but nothing too bad though. The vocab was good, creativity was there and had some wordplay as well. -UNF- After Numerous Anal Surgerys To Repair Ya Bunghole Wound’s Ammassed… There Remains No Drum Rolls…Cos Mimesis Broke Butt..Still…Half Assed… ^hardhitting opening punch Wouldn’t Be Funky With Knowledge..Passin’ Gas Durin’ AP English & Maths… Ya Necks Like an Uncircumcized Gash..Someone Give This Malignant Peasant a Bath… ^wordplay is there formed into punch Like a Lowlife Hobo on The Smash...U Clash For Christmas Presents Amidst Trash… Ur Jokes Are Malconsumed Like Product’s In Need of Bein Ransacked & Slashed… ^lmao @ first line, aight wordplay in second M' Use’s a Hand Vac In Reverse To Litter & Mash..He’s Low as Bodily Wasted Gas… Im Sayin…….Get Blasted With Mace..With Metaphoric Slurs As Im Slashin’ ya Face… ^not feeling second line but the first one's nice though -UNF-’s Embraced Like Diamond Platinum and Trinkets..Kid.Ur a Trashy Disgrace… Like Willing Fags U Been Maliciously Raped To The Point Of No Debate Or Escape… Ya Moms Resembles a…Dead Ape..Sportin’ a Rasta Weave with a Red Cape… ^aight, first line started off bleh but you picked it up and had nice punches I Literally Hate This Unemployed..Homeless...Engrate…Brutally Neglected’s Ur Definite Fate… With Gargantuan Arms..-UNF- Grate’s Ur Cranium Till Crushed Like Seed’s of a Red Grape… ^closed it off with good wordplay Good verse from you, it's the first battle I've seen from you and I must say I was pleasantly surprised by how you come consistent with the complexity. The vocabulary was complex yet it remained understandable, the wordplay was at high level, good creativity as well and you formed it into hard punches. Here and there some filler lines maybe but not that much, the flow was good due to multis and internal rhyming, sometimes bit stretched maybe but overall real good and complex. Punches: -UNF- Personals: Mimesis Opener: tie Closer: Mimesis Multies: -UNF- Wordplay: -UNF- Flow: tie In the end my vote goes to -UNF- but this was a very close and good battle from both of you...props... |
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I won't even say anything.. it's not that big of a deal to me.. |
Voted For: Mimesis
After Numerous Anal Surgerys To Repair Ya Bunghole Wound’s Ammassed… There Remains No Drum Rolls…Cos Mimesis Broke Butt..Still…Half Assed… 4...ok, whether or not you know...homo shit is played out so pick a new concept to use. Wouldn’t Be Funky With Knowledge..Passin’ Gas Durin’ AP English & Maths… Ya Necks Like an Uncircumcized Gash..Someone Give This Malignant Peasant a Bath… 5...ok you got nice vocabs in there, but I am blind to where the real punch is. Like a Lowlife Hobo on The Smash...U Clash For Christmas Presents Amidst Trash… Ur Jokes Are Malconsumed Like Product’s In Need of Bein Ransacked & Slashed… M' Use’s a Hand Vac In Reverse To Litter & Mash..He’s Low as Bodily Wasted Gas… 5...ok, this was a punch just about, but again there is more focus on big words to make it look good than actual punching. Im Sayin…….Get Blasted With Mace..With Metaphoric Slurs As Im Slashin’ ya Face… -UNF-’s Embraced Like Diamond Platinum and Trinkets..Kid.Ur a Trashy Disgrace… 4...little multi, but other than that there is nothing that really jumps out and disses Mimesis. Like Willing Fags U Been Maliciously Raped To The Point Of No Debate Or Escape… Ya Moms Resembles a…Dead Ape..Sportin’ a Rasta Weave with a Red Cape… 4...again with some homo shit, u still continuing with played shit. 2nd line was mildly funny. I Literally Hate This Unemployed..Homeless...Engrate…Brutally Neglected’s Ur Definite Fate… With Gargantuan Arms..-UNF- Grate’s Ur Cranium Till Crushed Like Seed’s of a Red Grape… 4...meh, god damn it, stop using big words and actually throw a punch sometime. OVERALL: 26/60 This shit is fucking ridiculous.. Of course I'ma leave this dude tossed Cause you're the first kid to call me out.. and then tell me you've lost 5...ok personal punch here, but not that hard hitting really. Just watch and learn.. overused multis, ill leave you on the tile and shit You do got some hotshh.. nah wait.. ..that's just who's style you bit 6...better punch here, wud've been better if he used hot's style in this battle, but still nice. But even he dropped it.. I do act tough.. i'll admit, but whats worse kid Is I did cry in the notebook.. that you write your fucking verses in 5...i've seen a few punches based around this kind of concept, so its not highly original. All you post is shit.. may call yourself a champ, ill still roast your teeth But you're only like Ben Wallace.. cause both you bitches post up weak 5...pretty average bar, its a punch but not a real hard one. See, you ain't on my level.. you can take the loss, its meant for you Cause I'm gonna be pullin this out.. like what your paps meant to do 6...LoL!! first line was kinda plain, but the 2nd was funny. Your a waste of life.. you cant beat me.. jesus, i dont care what you say I will get straight to the point.. because the rest of you is gay 6...ok, naturally homo shit is played, but on the rare occassion it is used well its funny. So fuck you.. I've won this shit, you're just left huggin the deck Man, I've sonned you so bad I have to send your mom monthly checks 5...played concept, funny punch but the concept is played which ruins it a little. OVERALL: 38/70 ok, weak battle here.....Mimesis didn't really bring his best stuff but it was still enough to get him the win. he had some nice punches in there but a few that were average and some played concepts used to. UNF....poor drop from you, you've done better and here your problem was that you didnt really get down to real punches to diss mimesis with, you focused more on putting in big words to make ya verse look impressive and throwing in a couple of multies. but clearly mimesis took this with ease. No Hate At All. :thumbup: V/ - Mimesis |
Voted For: Mimesis
aiight um, let's see this: This shit is fucking ridiculous.. Of course I'ma leave this dude tossed Cause you're the first kid to call me out.. and then tell me you've lost eh... it's ok, yo......... could have been better. was personal tho... 5/10 Just watch and learn.. overused multis, ill leave you on the tile and shit You do got some hotshh.. nah wait.. ..that's just who's style you bit lol nice personal.......... 6/10 But even he dropped it.. I do act tough.. i'll admit, but whats worse kid Is I did cry in the notebook.. that you write your fucking verses in lol word... nice........... 6/10 All you post is shit.. may call yourself a champ, ill still roast your teeth But you're only like Ben Wallace.. cause both you bitches post up weak lol another nice line... good shit wit wallace.... 7/10 See, you ain't on my level.. you can take the loss, its meant for you Cause I'm gonna be pullin this out.. like what your paps meant to do lmao.......... dope....... 8/10 Your a waste of life.. you cant beat me.. jesus, i dont care what you say I will get straight to the point.. because the rest of you is gay lol word........ 7/10 So fuck you.. I've won this shit, you're just left huggin the deck Man, I've sonned you so bad I have to send your mom monthly checks lmao........... 9/10 Overall, man your shit started out aiight... but then you picked it up at the end wit the ill punches. Had nice personals too. Reall good shit man. loved the closer and pullin' out line. Dope shit.... 48/70 aiight UNF: After Numerous Anal Surgerys To Repair Ya Bunghole Wound’s Ammassed… There Remains No Drum Rolls…Cos Mimesis Broke Butt..Still…Half Assed… nice shit here............ 6/10 Wouldn’t Be Funky With Knowledge..Passin’ Gas Durin’ AP English & Maths… Ya Necks Like an Uncircumcized Gash..Someone Give This Malignant Peasant a Bath… ... ehh it's ok........ 4/10 Like a Lowlife Hobo on The Smash...U Clash For Christmas Presents Amidst Trash… Ur Jokes Are Malconsumed Like Product’s In Need of Bein Ransacked & Slashed… not great punch............. 5/10 M' Use’s a Hand Vac In Reverse To Litter & Mash..He’s Low as Bodily Wasted Gas… Im Sayin…….Get Blasted With Mace..With Metaphoric Slurs As Im Slashin’ ya Face… [eh].... no punch really? ......... 3/10 [/b] -UNF-’s Embraced Like Diamond Platinum and Trinkets..Kid.Ur a Trashy Disgrace… Like Willing Fags U Been Maliciously Raped To The Point Of No Debate Or Escape… it's ok...not hard....sayin' they raped? ok........ 4/10 Ya Moms Resembles a…Dead Ape..Sportin’ a Rasta Weave with a Red Cape… I Literally Hate This Unemployed..Homeless...Engrate…Brutally Neglected’s Ur Definite Fate… With Gargantuan Arms..-UNF- Grate’s Ur Cranium Till Crushed Like Seed’s of a Red Grape… uhhh..... ok.......... 5/10 Overall, dude, I don't kno who told you multi's is all that matters in a battle, because it ain't. It's good to use, but shouldn't be all you doin'. Cuz I mean fo reel, you really didn't have one punch in there tthat could be called witty, or even atleast one personal. None of that was there. I mean really, and also the big word usuage. Not really a good idea to use huge words that some people won't even kno what i t means..... but overall, shit was aiight 27/60 Vote= mimesis, for harder punches and personals. easy... |
This was feedback posted for Mimesis
if i could vote i'd have to say Mimesis won this..
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Voted For: Mimesis
Mimesis This shit is fucking ridiculous.. Of course I'ma leave this dude tossed Cause you're the first kid to call me out.. and then tell me you've lost Haha, nice punchline. Decent personal. Just watch and learn.. overused multis, ill leave you on the tile and shit You do got some hotshh.. nah wait.. ..that's just who's style you bit Lmao. Nice personal. Tile thing was random, but ya. But even he dropped it.. I do act tough.. i'll admit, but whats worse kid Is I did cry in the notebook.. that you write your fucking verses in Eh, ok punch. All you post is shit.. may call yourself a champ, ill still roast your teeth But you're only like Ben Wallace.. cause both you bitches post up weak Beast from the east, nah bad punch. See, you ain't on my level.. you can take the loss, its meant for you Cause I'm gonna be pullin this out.. like what your paps meant to do Fake personal, you started off so well too. Your a waste of life.. you cant beat me.. jesus, i dont care what you say I will get straight to the point.. because the rest of you is gay Gay punch man? No So fuck you.. I've won this shit, you're just left huggin the deck Man, I've sonned you so bad I have to send your mom monthly checks Daddy punch....*sigh* You started off good, but then your creativity got worse and worse. UNF After Numerous Anal Surgerys To Repair Ya Bunghole Wound’s Ammassed… There Remains No Drum Rolls…Cos Mimesis Broke Butt..Still…Half Assed… Really choppy and forced line. No real punch. Wouldn’t Be Funky With Knowledge..Passin’ Gas Durin’ AP English & Maths… Ya Necks Like an Uncircumcized Gash..Someone Give This Malignant Peasant a Bath… Ok....lotta vocab nothing else. Like a Lowlife Hobo on The Smash...U Clash For Christmas Presents Amidst Trash… Ur Jokes Are Malconsumed Like Product’s In Need of Bein Ransacked & Slashed… M' Use’s a Hand Vac In Reverse To Litter & Mash..He’s Low as Bodily Wasted Gas… He colided with christmas presents? Only attempt at punch was last line. Im Sayin…….Get Blasted With Mace..With Metaphoric Slurs As Im Slashin’ ya Face… -UNF-’s Embraced Like Diamond Platinum and Trinkets..Kid.Ur a Trashy Disgrace… Like Willing Fags U Been Maliciously Raped To The Point Of No Debate Or Escape… No punch, self glorification, and a bunch of nonsense. Slurs meaning something else? Come on. Ya Moms Resembles a…Dead Ape..Sportin’ a Rasta Weave with a Red Cape… I Literally Hate This Unemployed..Homeless...Engrate…Brutally Neglected’s Ur Definite Fate… With Gargantuan Arms..-UNF- Grate’s Ur Cranium Till Crushed Like Seed’s of a Red Grape… Again, bunch of nonsense Ok, you have absolutely nothing in this verse. A bunch of vocab and wording that ruins any attempt at a punch you have. Do YOU even know what you are saying? v- Mimesis |
Word.
I appreciate the vote. Keep voting and shit.. |
rofl....i knew he wud but wanted to see..................
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Upping this..
Somebody just fucking vote.. and shit. |
This was feedback posted for Mimesis
Checkin the Poll's.............E-style.............
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Upping this.
Keep fucking vote.. you lazy fucks. |
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Somebody, for real, fucking vote and shit. |
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Motherfuckers.. keep fucking voting and shit. |
ummmm...yeah vote.....-_-.........................
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Keep voting on this and shit. |
Vote, vote, vote.
You lazy fuckers.. shiiiittttttttt. |
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This was feedback posted for -UNF-
checkin pollz......................................
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Voted For: Mimesis
mim-some nice stuff, very consistent in the beginning n what not, closer was funny, basically you commanded this battle throughout.imo i think your lines could be shourtened a touch thats about the only improvement i could say your style/verse needs.... good shit overall.... . unf-im a fan of multi's, but your verse wasnt close to using them effectively, alot of filler that hurt your verse....cuz your setups were basically identical to your punches... with that said, i saw no creativity or decent wordplay throughout.. you were out leveled here yo...pz . . vote/mim, way more consistent with punches throughout the battle |
Thanks for the vote and shit.
Upping this.. nah mean? |
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Keep voting you gay weiners. |
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Just somebody fucking vote. Close this shit out. |
Upping this face heads.
VOTE, VOTE, VOTE. And read the quote in my sig.. ITS ILL. |
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Keep voting fish nips and stuff... |
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