hotshh! vs NaRc-UzI
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dickriding
No Bullshit

Crew Battle: The Establishment vs. Trigga Town Inc.

Declining The Battle = Automatic Loss.

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 08-24-05 at 03:16 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 03:46 PM.

NaRc-UzI has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 02:06 PM.

Wish I never 'Slept' on ya name cause pain is all it Gets Me
Cause since I read ya battle stats I've suffered from NARC-olepsy
You paid the price to face some vets like it dont Matter the Cost
But whats the point, huh?.....Just to say you Battled and Lost?
See theres no Way he's Ill, You get bashed with Crazy Skill
'Seeing' me will make your head spin more than your Avy Wheel
General? Ha! .............These newbies is getting so Stuck Up*
Aint robbing gunshops......But I bet I "Jack-Uzi" the Fuck Up
Use this dude as a Recliner, your crew....a group of Minors
So you can ALL "Get Lost" like Condoms in Loose Vaginas

*he aint a newb but his crew is, also faced most of the vets......and lost*

You aint "Hot" so "Shh" cause ur verse is putting the voters to Sleep
The chances of you beating me R slimmer than a Benz losing to a Jeep
This bitch is Cautious cause he has no Offense like the Miami Dolphins
To Win Hotshh needs Dick Ryders like Casting Directors in Adult Films
Ur verse is "Injury Pone" like a gymnastics performed by a "Blind Kid"
Dont like my style then ill "Split Ur Dome" and make u "Open Minded"
Homie I know you Scared but I dont Care so its the end for this Guy
After the battle hotShh will be saying "No Fare" like a "Free Bus Ride"
If that was my verse i would be Embarresed cuz that Shit was Trash
If T.E ever gave a call I would be like a Quarter Back and Just Pass*

T.E=Is a Tight End in football who catches passes and a Q.B passes him the ball,but ya prbably get it already

*Vote and Ill Return The Favor*

Hotshh using fake personals in our battle LMAO
How i lose to all vets when i beat

tephlon aka khaoz theroy
Jack the Ripper
Paranoid
and other vets

The Narc-Olepsy rhyme i already used it in one of my battles

Calls me a newbie then in the end says im not

Fams step your shit up

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How is it fake? All your losses are to vets. Well not Stanza, but your other ones are.

hotty you killed this battle my friend. Good job..

Mimises and king solo,a no show and to stanza but W/e ity6s not like the voters can see this any way

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W/E it was a good battle so its all good
Hotshh nice drop

WTF at you breaking down my verse?
if this was a league u'd be dq'd for swaying
and i step up to my competitions level
so if my verse was ass......then.....
it is what it is
but other than that, good battle

They cant see what i said anyway but i regret posting cause it was dumb thing to do so my bad but it wont affect the voting cause they wont be able to see it

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good battle...checkin polls..........................

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LoL you def got this one...............................

Voted For: hotshh!

Narc..... opener was bad, seen way to many "hot"-"shh" lines used against him, ya verse was structured good and it flowed good... the punches were decent, could of been much better, good conecpts and vocab but they were lacking in the "hard hit category", your closer was pretty good but its kinda self-glory saying that your better than TE

hotshh!.... damn! your verse was on fire!, was full of wordplay!, structure and flow were good, opener was hot!... your punches were nice and hard, hahahaha closer.. funny as hell! very good verse here.... gets my vote

vote: hotshh!

thanks for voting
he up 1-0

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Hotshh! took it...

Checking them polls though, good verse from Narc as well...

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I would vote...but I think Narc might take it as hate....

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word, i was up in the city for the week, missed this i guess.......word up hotshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhizzle

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Voted For: hotshh!

Wish I never 'Slept' on ya name cause pain is all it Gets Me
Cause since I read ya battle stats I've suffered from NARC-olepsy
See theres no Way he's Ill, You get bashed with Crazy Skill
'Seeing' me will make your head spin more than your Avy Wheel
General? Ha! .............These newbies is getting so Stuck Up*
Aint robbing gunshops......But I bet I "Jack-Uzi" the Fuck Up

^^^ good fuckin punches cuz of the name plays and the flip off his avy... all actually good punches except the two bars i left out. whish i didn't like.
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You aint "Hot" so "Shh" cause ur verse is putting the voters to Sleep
The chances of you beating me R slimmer than a Benz losing to a Jeep
^^^almost a good punch if u woulda played of slimmer by sayin sumin about anarexia or sumin, but the way u compared cars didn't make it hit.
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and also u had some lines i've seen before like that open mind line i saw last week on RB and it was played then too. and also i saw that no fare line i saw last year in the kll here. so i gotta be votin hotshh for comin more original and havin good nameplays with punches...
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PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR MY BATTLE BEEN UP FOR EVER!!! link is in my sig agianst mr. lyricist

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

my vote is for narc-uzi

Structure-Narc-uzi's structure was better, had good flow...it was obvious...narc-uzis lines matched up every line.....hotshh ur verse was not that well structurized.....up on that

Personals-Both had good persoansl but hotshh's personals were more plain too see and harder hitting narc-uzi's personals were not as appealing to the eye

Punches-I felt that narc-uzi's punches were harder hitting and more comedic......meaning the reader was appealed to them......hotshh had top punches also but fell short to narc-uzi

Multis-Niether really had any good multis that effected there versee...both up on ya multis in ur verse.....so tie in this catergorie

Vocab-Biggest word in this battle was gymnastics.....so again neither can be voted on this catergorie....both up on your vocab.....

Originality-I felt both verses were fresh and original but again its the readers opinion to whose is better and in my eye its narc-uzi's i felt his punches were more dominant that hotshh so

v/narc-uzi

rtf if you want on my battle vs. mizz fyre

Voted For: hotshh!

checkin pollz.....................................


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oops :cool: werd

y'all need to fix that........

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

Wish I never 'Slept' on ya name cause pain is all it Gets Me
Cause since I read ya battle stats I've suffered from NARC-olepsy
NICE DAWG....
You paid the price to face some vets like it dont Matter the Cost
But whats the point, huh?.....Just to say you Battled and Lost?
OK....
See theres no Way he's Ill, You get bashed with Crazy Skill
'Seeing' me will make your head spin more than your Avy Wheel
GOOD PERSONAL...
General? Ha! .............These newbies is getting so Stuck Up*
Aint robbing gunshops......But I bet I "Jack-Uzi" the Fuck Up
AIGHT I GUESS....
Use this dude as a Recliner, your crew....a group of Minors
So you can ALL "Get Lost" like Condoms in Loose Vaginas
JUST AN AIGHT FINSHER
8.4/10 DAWG THIS WAS NOT YOUR BEST VERSE BY FAR HAD SOME GOOD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS BUT NOT ENOUGH OF THEM......AND THE THING IS I KNOW YOU COULD DO BETTER

VS

You aint "Hot" so "Shh" cause ur verse is putting the voters to Sleep
The chances of you beating me R slimmer than a Benz losing to a Jeep
NAH I DONT LIKE IT....
This bitch is Cautious cause he has no Offense like the Miami Dolphins
To Win Hotshh needs Dick Ryders like Casting Directors in Adult Films
HAHA NICE DAWG
Ur verse is "Injury Pone" like a gymnastics performed by a "Blind Kid"
Dont like my style then ill "Split Ur Dome" and make u "Open Minded"
I LIKE THE CONCEPTS HERE DAWG TITE...
Homie I know you Scared but I dont Care so its the end for this Guy
After the battle hotShh will be saying "No Fare" like a "Free Bus Ride"
IT MADE ME LAUGH LOL
If that was my verse i would be Embarresed cuz that Shit was Trash
If T.E ever gave a call I would be like a Quarter Back and Just Pass*
GOOD FINSHER
8.5/10 YOU STARTED OF BAD BUT THEN YOUR VERSE JUST GOT BETTER ALOT OF FUNNY PUNCHES AND PERSONALS WHICH MADE ME LAUGH....SO KEEP IT UP DAWG!!!!

V/NARC FOR COMING WITH PUNCHES AND PERSONALS:D

*cough cough,* bullshit

nah dog its coo, thanks for the vote

Voted For: hotshh!

This bitch is Cautious cause he has no Offense like the Miami Dolphins
To Win Hotshh needs Dick Ryders like Casting Directors in Adult Films
If that was my verse i would be Embarresed cuz that Shit was Trash
vs
General? Ha! .............These newbies is getting so Stuck Up*
Aint robbing gunshops......But I bet I "Jack-Uzi" the Fuck Up
Use this dude as a Recliner, your crew....a group of Minors
So you can ALL "Get Lost" like Condoms in Loose Vaginas


both pretty much sucked
but that condom closer was funy enuff to take this
narc need to try harder and hotshh is past his prime
give it up already