ColdSTEEL vs C.ghost
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


explained votes only

3-0 k.o
4-1 same

no hate

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-27-05 at 10:19 PM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

ColdSTEEL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-05 10:20 PM.

c.ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-05 10:23 PM.

Aye buzin u aint cold n u don't keep no steel, stop
Matta fact u from memphis,tell me 1 dude in ya hood thas still hot
Rvz pimp so i guess u pull chicks
My rhyme lines like bullets cuz i load 16 on u like a full clip
C.ghost u aint heard a me u gots ta know
When i drop my verse like a dam in da river it'll stop ya flow
Or i take it to the memphis language,"stop it ho"
Somebody shoulda told u i rock wit flow
And niggas smoke afta a loss so afta this battle go out and copt some drow

We opposites,
U stop, I go
I win, u don't
I will, u wont

I Know im Nice i give a fuck about a vote
And u a pimp wit money so if i see ya fancy car in the street i Jack it like a coat(jacket)
And every thing i saw niggaz dint know iy was my style that they moldin
And u aint no balla only silver in ya mouth is the gun dat im holdin
Neva 4 get wit my style u gon remember me
U da pimp out of memphis, u aint Terrance howard this aint hustle n flow
I move fool ass niggaz around ta corners sayin hustle n go

Aye blood dont let the record fool u

It doesnt....I know ur wack!(lol.)

Naw,fam..I hope its a good battle...

This battles Gravy...But!..I dont need No~Toast!
"He Wanna Be Patrick Swayze" Peep tha name...See~Ghost.(C.Ghost)
He's weak Folks!....Hidin your Record,but word seem tah Travel.
I think ur ah Joke,Because You Complain ery'time you lost a Battle!
Look fool Your Wack!.......So why you constantly Happy!?! :huh:
You off track... Imma hand you a"L" ta match tha 1 with ur aunt Jackie!
Yeah,thats right!.... Cold pimp hard on ah Hoe!
Fuck ownin this Dike!...I rather do 'em like trash an Disgard of his flow!

Too Eazy,Really!..Hah?

YOu have been owned!
Now bitch get out there an Make my Moneyz! *sing's "its So Hard On ah Pimp"* :noob:

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lol that nigga evil was wack though,ya boy gotta conspiracy in his head that evil cheated,n i think im rite..............im out Bs^^

aye i c u in tha streetz ima fckin Burry ya head in

Voted For: ColdSTEEL

And u a pimp wit money so if i see ya fancy car in the street i Jack it like a coat(jacket)
^^
c's one good line but it wasn't a punch, but still decent
..
cold steel-
i wasn't feelin any of your lines but you were throwin punches and tryin to make fun of 'em with
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This battles Gravy...But!..I dont need No~Toast!
"He Wanna Be Patrick Swayze" Peep tha name...See~Ghost.(C.Ghost)
He's weak Folks!....Hidin your Record,but word seem tah Travel.
I think ur ah Joke,Because You Complain ery'time you lost a Battle!
Look fool Your Wack!.......So why you constantly Happy!?!
You off track... Imma hand you a"L" ta match tha 1 with ur aunt Jackie!
^^^
these were dissin 'em but you didn't have any creativity, but punches still win but try some wordplay like that one line ghost had... word?
PLEASE RETURN WITH A VOTE ON MY BATTLE AGIASNT MR. LYRICIST!!!!! LINK IS IN MY SIG

Sike nah good verse...........................and yeah it was cold wit wat happend to my aunt..............Ull c it 1day


~1~

Js^

shit gonna come back around

This was feedback posted for ColdSTEEL
 

C. Ghost
Aye buzin u aint cold n u don't keep no steel, stop
Matta fact u from memphis,tell me 1 dude in ya hood thas still hot
No.....Wack... 0/10
Rvz pimp so i guess u pull chicks
My rhyme lines like bullets cuz i load 16 on u like a full clip
No.. A bit played out...0/10
C.ghost u aint heard a me u gots ta know
When i drop my verse like a dam in da river it'll stop ya flow
An okay attempt at a punch...1/10
Or i take it to the memphis language,"stop it ho"
Somebody shoulda told u i rock wit flow
Self glory diss's is what i want to here..0/10
And niggas smoke afta a loss so afta this battle go out and copt some drow

We opposites,
U stop, I go
I win, u don't
I will, u wont

I Know im Nice i give a fuck about a vote
And u a pimp wit money so if i see ya fancy car in the street i Jack it like a coat(jacket)
HAHAHA no!!! Elevate
And every thing i saw niggaz dint know iy was my style that they moldin
And u aint no balla only silver in ya mouth is the gun dat im holdin
No...come harder.. 0/10
Neva 4 get wit my style u gon remember me
U da pimp out of memphis, u aint Terrance howard this aint hustle n flow
I move fool ass niggaz around ta corners sayin hustle n go

No 0/10

Elevate on everything. Punches were weak strucutre was ok. flow was bad. Multis an personals werent even a consideration you dint have any... You were nothing but self glory. Diss you opponent... 1/10

Cold Steel

This battles Gravy...But!..I dont need No~Toast!
"He Wanna Be Patrick Swayze" Peep tha name...See~Ghost.(C.Ghost)
Nice wordplay....8/10
He's weak Folks!....Hidin your Record,but word seem tah Travel.
I think ur ah Joke,Because You Complain ery'time you lost a Battle!
okay... bit og a multis too. 7/10
Look fool Your Wack!.......So why you constantly Happy!?!
You off track... Imma hand you a"L" ta match tha 1 with ur aunt Jackie!
No, dont know where you got aunt jackie... 0/10
Yeah,thats right!.... Cold pimp hard on ah Hoe!
Fuck ownin this Dike!...I rather do 'em like trash an Disgard of his flow!
good punch/closure 8/10

Good overall verse. Flow was good strucutre was good. I think you only had one multi in there come with more... You had good wordplay to an your verse was interesting to read....

Breakdown
punches-Cold
personals-Cold
flow-Cold
strucutre-Cold
complexity- Cold
creativity-Cold
wordplay-Cold
multis-Cold

v/ Cold for harder hitting punches personals an all aroun verse. He won this hands down..

I dont have 100 posts so i can only leave good feed. g/l with this.

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This was feedback posted for ColdSTEEL
 

aw hell naw! steel even left links........ that's cold playa, that's cold.........

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Up UP and Awayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

Aye buzin u aint cold n u don't keep no steel, stop
Matta fact u from memphis,tell me 1 dude in ya hood thas still hot
3...i'm sure there's a better way to rip Mephis than to say "not one dude there is hot".
Rvz pimp so i guess u pull chicks
My rhyme lines like bullets cuz i load 16 on u like a full clip
1....not a punch...didn't diss
C.ghost u aint heard a me u gots ta know
When i drop my verse like a dam in da river it'll stop ya flow
3....dumb and self glorifing
Or i take it to the memphis language,"stop it ho"
Somebody shoulda told u i rock wit flow
2...self glorifing
And niggas smoke afta a loss so afta this battle go out and copt some drow
0...not gonna finish this bar?
I Know im Nice i give a fuck about a vote
And u a pimp wit money so if i see ya fancy car in the street i Jack it like a coat(jacket)
3....2nd line stretched..and played concept
And every thing i saw niggaz dint know iy was my style that they moldin
And u aint no balla only silver in ya mouth is the gun dat im holdin
5.....probably ur best bar
Neva 4 get wit my style u gon remember me
U da pimp out of memphis, u aint Terrance howard this aint hustle n flow
2...not rhyming?
I move fool ass niggaz around ta corners sayin hustle n go
0?.....?wtf?

This battles Gravy...But!..I dont need No~Toast!
"He Wanna Be Patrick Swayze" Peep tha name...See~Ghost.(C.Ghost)
5..ok..
He's weak Folks!....Hidin your Record,but word seem tah Travel.
I think ur ah Joke,Because You Complain ery'time you lost a Battle!
6...LMAO!!....dope personal
Look fool Your Wack!.......So why you constantly Happy!?!
You off track... Imma hand you a"L" ta match tha 1 with ur aunt Jackie!
5....decent
Yeah,thats right!.... Cold pimp hard on ah Hoe!
Fuck ownin this Dike!...I rather do 'em like trash an Disgard of his flow!
2....not feelin this

Ok..this was one sided..Coldsteel got this shit.

C.Ghost..you may have had twice as much lines as him..but most of ur verse was bassically self glorifin.The only attempts at personals that you had were the ones bout his location..which suked.Cuz..how's you just gonna say "not one hot dude in his hood"?That's basic and shitty.I saw ur attempt at wordplay as well..with the jacket one..but execution was pitiful

Vote-Coldsteel
rtf below in 3 days....or this vote will be removed :thumbup:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206789

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This was feedback posted for ColdSTEEL
 

if i could vote....

open-cold
finsih-cold
flow-tie
structure-tie
punches-cold
multies-cold
wordplay-cold
vocab-cold

v/coldsteel ......

RTF pls on my two battles in my sig..thanks

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2 days............................................

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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

aight you won this

ok this was an easy battle to vote on

C:you won this becuase of structure and becuase you all out just woned him and what not, but you aint know pimp i bet you hav enever even pimped a girl out, LOL see me ive pimped a bitch out and i know for a fact you havent so whatever

C;you lost but you had some Ok lines all you need to do is elevate and learn some shit. RV will help you elavte and after a few months you 2 should battle again...

vote=cold

RTF please

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207228