"Q & The Rainbow Coalition DISS!!"
 

Some quick-ass shit I threw together but oohh fuckin man. Niggas just don't learn man. LOLOLLOLOL Come get me bbbiiitccchhhhhesss!!!


http://doom2.dmusic.com - "Q & The Rainbow Coalition DISS!!"


http://community.rapverse.com/showp...839&postcount=4
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...56&postcount=10

"Im runnin low on dickriders, and I think I seen some new members- so ima go post my pics again"--- yoooo!!.... haha this shit was worth typin and pressin enter foreal-- track was real aggressive, mad punches, but the outro/adlibs made that shit hillarious--good job. 1

u aint got to spare his feelings

it sucked...be honest

lol

lol aight, honestly i dont like dooms music usualy.. but there was sum aight shyt in here, flow was aight.... voice came off w/ delivery better than i've heard on ya older shyt, i like the "down for tha count" line... n lmao at the lady fiya shyt man... lol, u said alot of tru ass shyt about q in this... but my fav was the lady fiya impression, aka "dike tyson" lmao... awww man... it was a better skit than n e thing else, but this was honestly tha best i heardfrom u... still not my typa shyt, but i can recognize improvement... this DOES not mean i respect you tho.... just bein real...

ROFL shit was dope dooms...lovin tha down for tha count line an oj line flow was good etc...lmfao am still laughin ...........=1=

Man, if that's the case, you must not have listened to any of my tracks in a solid 2 months. Oh yeah, this still don't mean I like you or your wack tracks. Just being real :finger:

Oh yeh, 'fore I forget

LOL @ "I'll have you like seasme street hookers - goin down for the count line". ROFL. Hella punches in here, but the funniest shit was about him posting about his new job, etc. He just posted a new one about his pic. POINT AND CASE. Yea, q got ripped, course he's gon come in here and say it was wack, cause all that shit in there was the truth. Word.

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listening:

ur voice is too grimey...LOL @ the new shoes....LOL @ new job...werd ur preaching bout Q..its all fact...Q lives wid his moms?ha...ur quality is real nice on this man...closet bar is raw...diss-own wordplay was tight...LOL @ "aint you make a track about sucking MY DICK" LO>>>>FUCKIN OWNAGE...lol @ lady fiya outro...L VERACITY IS GETTING OWNED----> DIKE TYSON LMAOOOOO...ouch!.....werd yall all need to battle...

dopeness dooms...

nice diss.....

but who the fuck is Q... lol

I didn't liked the beat, but overall it was funny

Phen, word, lol. Dude came at me outta no whee on some bitch shit so he got handled. buuttt ooooooooooohh I dare a bitch to call me out. The amount of shit about all three of these fruitbaskets is rediculous.


Acuity: lol Dyke Tyson. Sometimes a motherfucker should know when to STFU and not get involved. Her and LF are classic cases. Mind ya bizniss hoe. Not bad for a kid with a lisp huh? :rolleyes:


Ax, long story.

hot air balloon on this shit.

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WOW>........................


this right here was hot.... lol........ killin the gay walker wit Dynomite???? LMAO..... damn........ rhymes belong in the closet.......where your sexuality was.... LOL.... wow.... yea....... too many quotables up in here.......id be keyin the whole verse.... but this was good right here......

yall two keep goin at it like this....... the animosity is creating hella good tracks... lol.....


keep droppin nigga


'respect'

lol...man..the intro was funny yo..and a nice flow and delivery yo..shit was funny fa real..and u said this was only a lil bit yo..so thats good too..for a diss this is nice ckuz it actually had disses and joint man..lol outro is ok..i like the part when u was talkin about LV and the lisp..

lol word man. how the fuck's somebody gonna diss me for a lisp that i don't got, when the chick that reams you with the strap-on's got a MEAN one?!!

But yeah man, this shit is straight-up tip of the iceburg 1-hr wrote&record shit. I'm waitin for them clowns to make their track(s) son. Guarantee you aint' see jiddacckk shiddiitt yet :evil: Call my bluff, hoes. I dare you.

aight but can u go leave some feed on m track :)

Pm it to me mang, you know I always return that shit.

uppin for anyone who ain't heard the hillarity.

only right I up this shit again LMAO

the intro was funny lol.. lyrics was okay.. but damn u got nice quality... n i dont :( damn lol.. wut mic u use man?

LMAO..wow man, this track was funny as hell, nice diss track..good mic presence and emotion, flow is on point,and the overdubs fit in nicely too..lyrics were brutal, quality of your tracks improved, good shit.1

Dabatos, that'd be an MXL 990.

Fluid, lol, long time no see. Thanks for the feedbizzle. Glad you likes the track. I noticed not one of those clowns had a response, lol. Smart.

I just listened to it my self again and LOL. Thanks man.

you sound deep hahaha at what would the Q would dude

Flow seems off to me for some reason,
Delviery is nice, presenc eis nice, quality is flawless

Run in the closet like your sexuality was hahahahahahha that is dope

Damn dissing Lady FIya (Thats my girl fuck LJ) - but you dissing her is wrong

hahahahaha at Dike Tyson

Dyke Tyson LOL yeah man, that's that real talk.

Thanks for the feedback mayne, lol. Chea, uppin this mofo

I'm leaving feed on this one just cuz I left feed on Tha Q's...

Your intro was tryna outdo his, using the same style he did.. that's annoying, cuz the shoe thing, wasn't funny. All that echo in your voice is too much, and your adlibs are annoying, really annoying.
Cut that part that say "JIMMY WALKER!, STRAIGHT HATE.." it sound retarded, you talk to much over your lines...

stop stressing your last word for each bar, you sound newbish..

Your voice too strong to be yelling on every damn line..

closet line was funny, not bad.. try making a hard punch...

control your pops = / "puh puh PuhLZ! PuhLZ!", it's annoying.

And stop stretching your lines then punching in another line on top.

lol @ you turning it into a trio diss, down for the count yo' best line.. you disappointed when it comes to punches, "lady fiya named cuz i claim i got a diseased vagina" < best multi you got in here, sad.. i see new members, wow and I haven't posted pics in forever only for sigs.. wow "dike tyson" for L. Veracity.. your outro seem like it took more work than your actual verse.

Stop saying "since", "like" and "more than" so damn much, that's why you sound hella boring even with a nice delivery, switch up your transitions for metaphors

This what you did:
more windy than streets of Chicago
more breezy than the top of tall towers in Toronto
more suspect than OJ rocking a white Bronco

They back to back, you overdo it, i would think you'd know how to spread your bars out better.. learn how to set up punches, i'm not shocked Tha Q didn't respond back.. you had more personals but your skits better than your actual verse.

Work on clarity, that "ya girl LV does" line at the beginning you'd have to listen to five times to know what you said.. and that "if it wasn't for your boy, you wouldn't see a studio".. if that's even what you said, that's not effective.

Try fa punches, you got set-ups but talk bout something else other half where you should be attackin the first point you made... = / The outro- record it all together don't piece it.. that "PZ bitch and orangatang part" sounded completely different from the previous sentence.. smh..

*checks other people's feed*: wow Acuity and the OYD crew.. not a shock. and everyone mentioned your skit over your verse. Work on your disses.

Overall: This was weak. You got delivery, but barely any substance.

lol @ Seven and his favorite part in your diss to Tha Q is the skit where you diss me.. pathetic, yet predictable and Fluid too.. y'all some funny people.

This was coo but you aint need to come at Fiya like that on the foe she was coo man leave her alone she coo man but you came coo

AHAHAHAH. This is the first time I read feedbakc that made me laugh. "You shouldnt record this part of the track first...do it last. That's why you suck!" lol. Fuck outta here. Soon as I seen that you posted I knew it'd be all negative yap because lets be real, who's EVER gonna come in a post about a disstrack that's got thme in it and say "wow, you really destroyed me there. that line about me being followed by a stench of dickriders (liek the one that came crawling in IMMEDIATELY after you) really shut me down!". you can say this track was ass all you want, but this shit's got more views/post than any track in August. And the fucked up shit is, thanks to them same dickriders I just talked about, the shit won't even get nominated. TOODLES!!




eeehhhhh blah blah blah, fuck you and her yo, lol. You're one of the dickriders mentioned in the track you clown, didn't you even realize it?! Good job trying to e-protect her though.

^^doomsday=Gangsta :shoot: ...LMAO.

I guess you think you Almighty... lol @ negative yap, you thought I was just making that up. I was serious, you won't ever get over yourself. What makes this funny is that you WANT me, LV, and Tha Q to respond to this, if we didn't, you'd start makin threads like you did in LL saying... "how does it feel to be on the receiving side of my disses"..

Now that I respond, cuz I'm not scared or spooked by your diss, you wanna say I'm lying and sayin it cuz I got dissed, it was wack, not completely wack, but it's made out to be something real big but in fact it's just decent.. and if you reppin OYD and everyone thinks this the best they heard than wow...

Look at the posts in here and tell me who got the most dickriders.
How many people mentioned your verse to Tha Q VS. How many people said your skit was hilarious
Just cuz Tony Green said I'm coo peeps don't make him a rider

lol @ you thinkin this was the best thing... want me to say Good Job? well good job, next time ride the beat a little better, ya flow was REALLY off, and fix the parts I told you and it would sound THAT much better

I have to beat the truth into arrogant muthafukkas... :thumbup:

^^Lady Fiya=Not gangsta..lame :nono:

LoL.....I ain't even listen to this track or Q's....But I'ma do it now :thumbup:

According to Dooms, you would be a rider... = /

Now isn't that right Dooms, count 'em up.

Rider???....fuck no...it's the other way...DOom on my dick...ridin me hard too!!!

I ain't read most of the psot to be honest, but all I know is you responding in my post dosen't make it a "response" as far as tracks go. If you want to respond, then cool, if you don't, then cool. Ask me if I give two shits, or one fuck about you or your moustache hairs on the mic.




nah, the dickriders are the one's who follow you into every post. Just liek the one that just did (Tony Green).



man, what the FUCK are you talkin about??

LMAOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! :laugh2:
Dawg...
I myself don't even know!!!

right, and that guy Deranged didn't just call you "Gangsta!" lol, and follow you in this thread... uhm okay.. well if you don't care, don't care.. i left feed, maybe you can find the truth in my post on some real shit then holla back :thumbup:

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Dusty Knuckles: Yo Q I got a question mayn.. What's brown, *laughs*, and smells like
the Q's ass? *laughs*, ayo! Q's finger *laughs*
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Catly: Ayo Q, I got a question mayn, what's with the Q mayn? Does it stand
for Queer? *laughs*
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Tha Q: Ayo why dont u sit down over there. Think I haven't heard that one already?
Let me get this straight, it's actually for Queens

On the foe just your biting ass up if you want it you can get it mafucker I own The CHI Nigga you sound like a 30 year old grown man fuckin with some teens over the net get a mafuckin life you good for nothing

lol, thanks man but uhh...that's a different track. LOL. This is the one on the second page http://doom2.dmusic.com

...Lol, I know :)

lol alright alright, what was I thinking lol. Up for anyone who hasn't heard the track that stole three mofos in one verse.