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Juelz .CeZar. vs !x.c.c.x!
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6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-26-05 at 12:57 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Juelz .CeZar. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 12:58 PM.
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U A Drug Addict Heres ur fix jus to get it u'd have gay sex
Cuz like Shakey Club Chemisists,Juelz Droppin The X Obsessive Wit Pounds,Perfected,the Rest Is Profound like Assasinating Earl Simmons j's leavin X In The Ground Ur Flows old Get sum New punchlines...jab a Phone Ima have u lookin up to death like starin.......... .........................at ceiling's of funeral ..........homes |
!x.c.c.x! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 01:37 PM.
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this guys "19" hes rhymes are 'blakc and white' mine dazzled him in color he thinks he's a real 'G' bcuz he got fucked up but caught 'HIV' for 100 dollar juel had to go to a 'private' school you need to give ur rhymes some oil and 'fuel' your rhymes wudnt shine if i gave them jeweles they fucked up your a 'mule' hes on a "tour" hes needs his ass chucking back though the door yes hes a male whore your rhymes cudnt get into the 'core' of any1 putyour rhymes plus any more you sitlll cuudnt score 1. Username Font Color: Black Username Glow Color: white (and his avatar is black n whtie) 2. he thinks hes a 'g' and a 'pimp' 3. cuz his brain is fucked up 4. mule = a slipper = hes slipping (a.k.a tripping) 6. the middle - win not good but elevating |
Bump, merked me, but o well........only elevating at this point........ |
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inivisible mode........... ------------------- has my verse got bigger or is it just me? |
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Voted For: Juelz .CeZar.
JUELZ TOOK THIS EASY.......ALL ROUND BETTER PREFOEMANCE FO REAL. X.C.C.X YOU NEED TO ELEVATE .THIS KIDS OBVUIOUSLY MORE LYRICALLY SKILLED.. JUS DONT THINK YOURE PUNCHES WERE CONNECTING. JEWLZ THAT WAS A TIGHT FINISER. |
"x.c.c.x you need to elevate" well thats a stupied thing to say....... "not good but elevating" ----------------- explain your votes more.........i need to no what i was good at and what i need working on |
This was feedback posted for !x.c.c.x!
u got this but u need to worl o nthat structure lol its all over
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This was feedback posted for Juelz .CeZar.
checkin pollz .
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Voted For: Juelz .CeZar.
juel had to go to a 'private' school you need to give ur rhymes some oil and 'fuel' your rhymes wudnt shine if i gave them jeweles they fucked up your a 'mule' ^weak line......didnt make ssence was stupid.....thats why i dont vote for you, u didnt even diss your opponent juelz ur verse was more self glor. but had like 2 punches that were iight so v/jeulz .cezar...............rtf in like a couple days |
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This was feedback posted for Juelz .CeZar.
checkin da polls and shit.......
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Voted For: Juelz .CeZar.
Flow:juelz Structure:the cat with the whack colour Word Play:both Metaphors:none.. Punches:juelz Personals:the cat with the whack colour Creativity:juelz Enjoyment:juelz Vote:juelz Explanation:ayo, the cats colour put the battle off real bad i had to copy it n read it in word...but juelz kept it real n got my vote...werd |
RTF..............werd i 4got to add it in my vote.
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yo ass is wack..........u dont vote cuz of color u n00b
werd............ |
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This was feedback posted for !x.c.c.x!
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Voted For: !x.c.c.x!
this guys "19" hes rhymes are 'blakc and white' mine dazzled him in color he thinks he's a real 'G' bcuz he got fucked up but caught 'HIV' for 100 dollar 4...user color disses ain't all that..and HIV lines are played. juel had to go to a 'private' school you need to give ur rhymes some oil and 'fuel' your rhymes wudnt shine if i gave them jeweles they fucked up your a 'mule' 5...no...u seem to just be saying shit just becuz they rhyme hes on a "tour" hes needs his ass chucking back though the door yes hes a male whore your rhymes cudnt get into the 'core' of any1 putyour rhymes plus any more you sitlll cuudnt score 5...weak..again..just spittin shit cuz it rhymes. U A Drug Addict Heres ur fix jus to get it u'd have gay sex Cuz like Shakey Club Chemisists,Juelz Droppin The X 5...didn't like 1st line..gay shit is played..but 2nd line wuz nice Obsessive Wit Pounds,Perfected,the Rest Is Profound like Assasinating Earl Simmons j's leavin X In The Ground 4...ok..bordline self glorifing..n the 1st line wuz irrelevant..just seemed a lil forced Ur Flows old Get sum New punchlines...jab a Phone Ima have u lookin up to death like starin.......... .........................at ceiling's of funeral ..........homes 3...aah... self glorifing OK..this wuz a close battle.But i think I gotta give it to X.Simply becuz he actually dissed.J started off good..but then he started self glorifing with his last 2 bars..and for that..he lossed in my opinion Vote-!x.c.c.x! RTF BELOW IN 3 days...or this vote WILL be removed :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206909 |
Voted For: Juelz .CeZar.
x.c.c.x breakdown: this guys "19" hes rhymes are 'blakc and white' mine dazzled him in color he thinks he's a real 'G' bcuz he got fucked up but caught 'HIV' for 100 dollar 4-10, i dont get it dunn juel had to go to a 'private' school you need to give ur rhymes some oil and 'fuel' your rhymes wudnt shine if i gave them jeweles they fucked up your a 'mule' 2-10...huuuuh? @ dat last line hes on a "tour" hes needs his ass chucking back though the door yes hes a male whore your rhymes cudnt get into the 'core' of any1 putyour rhymes plus any more you sitlll cuudnt score 2-10...jesus, wat in da fuck u talkin about? creativity: none wordplay: so so flow: nothin serious multiz: none punches: garbage structure: needs work basically, ya wordplay was crack at some parts but tha whole concept of ya lines made no fuckin sense...WHATSOEVER...so u lose mad points for that Juelz CeZar breakdown: U A Drug Addict Heres ur fix jus to get it u'd have gay sex Cuz like Shakey Club Chemisists,Juelz Droppin The X 5-10, weak coulda been stronger n lame concept Obsessive Wit Pounds,Perfected,the Rest Is Profound like Assasinating Earl Simmons j's leavin X In The Ground 5-10...nice i liked both lines Ur Flows old Get sum New punchlines...jab a Phone Ima have u lookin up to death like starin.......... .........................at ceiling's of funeral ..........homes 7-10...tight shit but just waaaay too long dunn shorten ya lines creativity: good wordplay: good flow: aight multiz: so so punches: on point structure: needs work OVERALL: Juelz takes it cause his shit actually made sense, i wasnt lost readin da shit....work on ya concepts n creativity@ x.c.c.x RTF@ Juelz or ima get this shit removed <---Daubs style ahaaa |
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Voted For: Juelz .CeZar.
ripppedddddddd cannt say anything else flow and everything else to rell |
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