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will appear vs Intermental
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1:00-4:00 no crew votes no biting good luck Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 08-27-05 at 02:44 PM Must drop verse in 5760 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
Intermental has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 03:33 PM.
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will appear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-05 03:07 PM.
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hey i just found the beat i want to use so ill record tonight and make my sc page
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=395940
oh and the beat and the chorus are there because of tony greens sig lol |
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ehh close call really
i liked both verses coming into the battle i hadnt heard anything from either of you...so i didnt know what to expect but both of you were pretty nice willa- good flow, i was pleased to see that... there were a few parts that fell off, but nothing very noticable lyrics was pretty solid, you had a couple nice punches in there, but nothing that really made me say "ooooh" mental- your shit was really just as good your flow was a bit off but i think your lyrics made up for it, you had better ones than willa in my book... however, you did take kinda long to get to the diss itself....which isnt really necessary all in all, i enjoyed battle solid stuff from both of you, sorry i cant really vote though...i thought it was too close =/ if you get time drop some feed in my song http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206040 weerd 1 |
Voted For: will appear
yea peepin'...... Will a peer, flow is good. Good lyrics, nice punches and shit. Shit was on point. Liked it. New York beat was good too.....good flow throughout. Emotion was coo could be upped tho. Quality ok, could be better too. lol overall nice.... Intermental, intro kinda too long yo. Realest killas beat nice. Like this shit. You got good lyrics, might have been a lil better then Will a peers. Flow is coo too, but goes off on some parts. Emotion coo, could be upped too. Quality not that great either. But overall, good spit too. mosquitoe bite line made me laugh for reel. good shit there lmao Overall, both y'all my homies and all. And i was suprised by both of y'all. Elevated a lot from last time I heard y'all. both came nice lyrically, but I think Will a peer took it wit the flow and emotion. But shit was nice battle. props to both. y'all both comin' up but v/will a peer |
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Polllllzzz.................cnt vote, not have 500 posts
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Checkin' polls............................................. .
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Voted For: Intermental
Intermental wins...Willappears verse didnt have a single line about her opponet...WTF? didnt even say the mans name once...aside from that her verse-straight quality sub par lines...flow was unsteady...well mixed aswell...Intermental needs better mixing, flow getting better ur punches were wack but enough to win this battle...ur mosquito titty line was jokes tho lol...1 RTF in y Ritzgo battle plz n close that mofo.... 1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Feedback for my girl
willa-first....wow nice voice ;) i like the beat a lot and you stayed constant with the beat with some nice lyrics...very pimp Intermental-have you hit puberty yet? just wondering...anyways, you pretty much got smoked...your best line was the mosquito bite one lyrics were kinda weak you need to elevate a little bit...your intro was kinda retarded to shoulda known better to fuck with CS son |
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You wanted me to drop feedback........lol is kinda hard if going against some Trigga fam............
But i will drop feedback for both of you..... Willa - vocals are too loud....delivery was good, and flow was on point......you're actually better than i thought you would be. Your problem, it seemed that you worried more on if you hit the beat more than being effective with what you say. It also seemed on a few bars, you forced it out. Just be more confident with what you say, and your forcing of the words will deminish. Good drop though. Intermental - Damn man, whats up wit the intro.....lol....... Quality - needs to be improved.....you have the same problem as willa You're flow was decent, beat choice was good. If i hear another line about putting something on layaway, I'm going to scream, lol. Your drop was short also. Work on your delivery and make it more complex, because your punchlines seemed average. But there you go both...................good drops........ |
Yo calipso, you stupid ass ho bitch dick rider.....look jus cos shes youre "girlffriend" you dont leave hate feeds like that, check yo self bitch
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its a fuckin joke that intermental is going too loose this battle...
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Voted For: Intermental
Ok Will a peer This is a good beat = chorus wise i feel u rode it well but no real content O i feeling ya flow ma definetly only one problem. you sound like a pre-pubescent boy Punches were ehh..they ight nothing really stand out though Felt u needed to up ur vocal's was hard to hear at certain points Delivery was coo' overall a decent diss track especialy for ur 1st VS inter = Well 1st of all ight intro def feeling the beat Vocals needed to be turned up a little Punches def the strong point of ur verse some good personals and the kitchen line ha! Quality is def coo Lmfao at robbin oxfam Delivery and flow is coo' falls of a lil but for most part it cool actually flow is all coo' just need to sound more confident in urself Well i gotta give this to Intermental both had same delivery will's punches were ehh where inters had me rollin a few times flow was dope by will and coo by inter but i felt inter just edged this out |
Voted For: Intermental
v/Inter by listen to the songs i could hear that Inter had a lot hard and more punches.... The beat ok quality is aight Willa u might have won this if you would have had some hard personals and dont talk about Tony Green when u battling Inter....unlucky:) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppppin..........thanks yall.......thanks acuity........
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Voted For: Intermental
god damns will a peers chorus is annoying!!!! ahhh its wack lol, but ur flow is cool tho, voice is so so, i aint feeling it, lol at inters intro, but blah i wasint really feeling it dawg, beat is awsome, lmfao at your first line,man u really got better than before, this your best battles seriously, watch ur flow tho man, cuz one time u really fell off, i dunno bout will a peers diss, it was good but didnt have good punchlines like intermental vote: Intermental no hate only an honest voter Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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u probly won the award for biggest dickrider:thumbup: |
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Lol thats rite......yo and the award goes to..........calypso....lmao....yo uppin this |
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not gonna vote. just gonna listen to the tracks and look around a bit.
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man, this guy sounded liek a closet fruit in that intro, lol. How the fuck you gonna tlak dirty TO YOUR SELF!! man I gotta smh at BOTH these tracks lol, one guy is textcee to DEATH and the other is textee half to death. Both yall have quality issues like woah and that's the tip of the iceburg.
ps, so much for not feeding. |
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WOOOOOOOOO THAT'S MY GIRL! *does the harlem shake*
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wooooooo what harlem shake ure ass outta this thread
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Suck a dick faggot....this is not a hate thread this is listenin give sum real feedback and not hum half minded child like bitch made shit.........23 year old writin like a damn pre school nigga...man check yo self |
Voted For: will appear
Intermental i like your voice, but its true what willa said your intro and outro put together are longer then your verse, maybe you should just have less of a intro cuz i hate waiting for intro then the verse i wanna hear the verse first so maybe you could have a killa outro next time, and its also true how you had no personals, i didnt even realize any creative metaphors in there, flow aint bad but you could use emotion more. Willa i think you'd sound very good on a smoother beat, but yea its a battle but theres a advantage a gurl could have on a guy in a battle lol, i love your little hook the lil trigga town thing nice lil meta in that, but the verse was good to nice flow you had some pops in ya quality though, emotion was pretty could keep workin on it though, but overall i just think yours was more appealing and funnier ahha, and you we're more creative with lyrics. |
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that is my feedback you cocktoucher. You mad that I didn'thave anyhing good to say? That's cuz I didn't hear anything good worth saying. Cry about it you wack-ass shitbag. If you feel tough enough, shit man, just go set-up a battle and we'll rock out. DONE DEAL!! |
Voted For: will appear
wasnt really feeling either verse. but seems like willa had better flow...interm u had punches but i wasnt really feelin them..they seemed more like old school jokes you decided to use for punches...willa had personal punches and better flow which is why she gets my vote. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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You know if that one doesnt get removed then itll be under racism lol cos ive had 4 votes removed |
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haha...good battle, whats up willa? .....:thumbup:
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Inter you gotta be this biggest bitch I know...cuz someone drops negative feedback against you....you cry like a little pre pubescent girl....shut the hell up and dont have some lil homo you made a sig for try to take up for you either you fuckin hoooooooo
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Voted For: will appear
I was hoping that ur voice would be nice enough for me to masterbate too..... but FUCK!!!...your voice sucks...fuck you WILLA . . . . and this Natural killa BTW..I was K-trini all along :thumbup: Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: will appear
E...Z...willa one on flow,lyrics ect.ect................... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: will appear
Listening...Intermental...wtf @ the intro...beat choice is aight Realist Killas...long ass intro...flow is sloppy...vocals are emotionless...mosquito bites lol...sexist as a fucka ain't ya lol...disses are a bit -_-...flow needs working on...overall diss was below average...work is needed on ya verses...mic quality was aight though Will A Peer...feeding...don't do it...it's wack...your intro is worse...singing...don't do it either...flows better...verse is more consistant...feelin ya verse more but i ain't feelin ya voice sorry you sound like an eight year old boy IMO but i think you won...but again improvments are needed... V/Will A Peer Vote removed by Mad Dog's request |
^ Sexist remark was for the kitchen bar i didn't mean it in a bad way i thought that bar was funny jus to clear things
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HOW IN THE FUCK ARE YOU PPL VOTING FOR WILLA WHEN SHE DIDNT SPIT ONE LINE ABOUT HER OPPONENT CHECK THE LYRICS/STORY
THIS THREAD IS A PRIME EXAMPLE OF WHAT IS WRONG WITH RAPVERSE |
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well...good battle...can't vote due to posts so.....checkin polls.
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