@. vs Natural killa
 

Battle Rules:

10- 15 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

I extended the time cause I relised I need a bit mroe time to write my verse. Hope you dont bitch and moan about it liek you allways do.

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-23-05 at 06:51 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.


Closed - Expired / old battle win


Reopened 10/5

@. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 06:46 PM.

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 06:49 PM.

ya hand's doin the rounds cuz in the text,ysdat/@. can't make a sound
Moves in the industry?,shit,jumpingjacks in the power plants doesn't count
u the one spouce pre-writing shit,n don't deny bitch cuz you ain't hiding shit
only throne/trown i see you sittin on is when the balls bounce from u riding it
he's a soakin faggot,n for him to bust he gotta pay the token,n hack-it
if this fag's fighting see-veer(severe) then he's swingin wit a broken racket
the shit u barging in get's dilaped from me with this spit with the carnage
u musta pulled out costumes from the attic to spit that garb.-age(garbage)
in the forums you hated n u the one pussy I can say I'm glad I neva ate-it
must be judging voices of kittens cuz in this bitch you purr-pet-u-rated
i spit my worse like an addict,n still beat ya,ya be goin at it,n they teach ya
this a battle on punches but I ain't hear a piss from you like damaged urthreas
u spit off the beat n gettin shit on by the elite,so sit down from the re-seat(reciept)
n the record you have at current's weak,like the level we swimmin knee-deep
u respectable?,no,like mexicans suddenly becomin fashionable ur neva cred-I-bull
you shoulda stuck to top-pickles like crazy gluing the peak on vegetables
teach to stop bein my shadow round the forums after u feel the incideration
pre-written or not,you still gettin whipped up like smarty jones rehabliltation
how's you an expert on makin it when you urself thrown ya cards for gators
the lay-ball(label) you signing with is when you squat down on the ANR for favors
cruise the boo's cuz you wanted something keyed?,well u chose to lose
so bring your basic rhyme scheme,one sllyable shit,n get votes for it too
cuz that's what this site's about when they ride you aloud n brag
i told u set it up in EFL n you went n put it here for clout,it's sad
following me n abusin it n this shit's like rocky vs apollo n you still lose it
only way you winning this bitch is by the herbs you got swallowin ya pubic's
bored of ur rhymes,all of em played,shit,it's like someone ignored the times
cuz your idea of keyin this is unlockin the closet where u stored those lines
told him to squash this beef,but like speakin to air,i saw no reasonin with this
n don't worry ysdat/@...we don't need the dot in the name to see the bitch


READ HERE
Words you may not know meaning off

Veer-clockwise
garb-costumes
cred-fashoin


Now bring the pre-written shit Ysdat -__-

fake rappers get on the net,they tend to foget about life behind them
fag forgot he tryna come up on my site, so let me remind him.



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topical head schools another textcee

Voted For: @.

@- nice verse had good punches i was feeling them...but i kno you could of came a little harder, but still nice verse...overall

natural killa- k, alright verse i seen sum punches in there but they were kind of weak...you could of made them harder..and i think thats were @ got you at cause structure was alright on both of you guys flow was cool but his punches came alittle harder...so

both try harder next time....

v-@

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LMAo....I can't start over......gotta stay natural

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Voted For: Natural killa

MERLINS BREAKDOWN:
fake rappers get on the net,they tend to foget about life behind them
fag forgot he tryna come up on my site, so let me remind him.
4-10...jus an intro so it really dont count
in registration you should of never agreed to the terms and conditions
Not one Rv crew wants you, I guess you've learned your position
4-10...no punch, no nothin
2000 post in a month, this is the result of no life rejections
you need this "flow to "surivive" like introvenous injections
7-10...nice feelin both lines, real creative
naturally killing shit,cause your post makes us all laugh to death
never survive as long as me, like you halfed your breath
5-10...good personal in da first line
your broke, like fogetting "flour" while baking you wont get your "cake up"
you more like dry sex............you simply a fake fuck.
7.5-10...nice concept, both lines were tough
this battle remains one sided, like I cut you in half
Each one of your lines dont hit,like a punch in the dark
4-10...endings didnt connect n punch was lame
My aproach is perfect position like a snipers roof
battle me? you bit of more than you can chew,like he hyped is tooth
5.5-10...this was aight, 1st line was blah tho
you couldnt tie a punch together if you gums were rope
grabbing "faiths" ass, relising to win you need tons of "hope"
7-10...feelin this one, both lines were on point
nigkah dont get me started i read ya verses ,pure boredom
so im'a make you fuckin disapear like the casino forum
4-10...nah that was just a blah attempt
This Pathetic Emcee gets Ripped Conclusively, Incisions Seriously Injures this Opponents Nutrients,
The same Phonetic Ego Ravaged, Continuing Investigation Sees Illness Obliterating his Nucleus’
5-10....nothin serious even tho i guess it was an attempt ta OD on him lol but nice vocab here

OVERALL: u had an aight flow, some of ya punches were stronger than others, i felt like ya finisher was jus a whooole bunch of vocabulary put together ta "look" tough but it wasnt that serious....that fucked u up in tha long run cause da regular verse was potentially fire


NATURAL KILLAS BREAKDOWN:
ya hand's doin the rounds cuz in the text,ysdat/@. can't make a sound
Moves in the industry?,shit,jumpingjacks in the power plants doesn't count
7-10...i found that shit funny, 2nd line was tough
u the one spouce pre-writing shit,n don't deny bitch cuz you ain't hiding shit
only throne/trown i see you sittin on is when the balls bounce from u riding it
7-10...tiiiight wordplay, concept, and meta
he's a soakin faggot,n for him to bust he gotta pay the token,n hack-it
if this fag's fighting see-veer(severe) then he's swingin wit a broken racket
6.5-10...even tho u gave tha meanin it wasnt that effective ta me
the shit u barging in get's dilaped from me with this spit with the carnage
u musta pulled out costumes from the attic to spit that garb.-age(garbage)
8-10...nice concept and set up in both lines
in the forums you hated n u the one pussy I can say I'm glad I neva ate-it
must be judging voices of kittens cuz in this bitch you purr-pet-u-rated
9-10...ahahaha shits hilarious dunn, both lines
i spit my worse like an addict,n still beat ya,ya be goin at it,n they teach ya
this a battle on punches but I ain't hear a piss from you like damaged urthreas
7.5-10...good wordplay, creativity also
u spit off the beat n gettin shit on by the elite,so sit down from the re-seat(reciept)
n the record you have at current's weak,like the level we swimmin knee-deep
6-10...these lines were so-so, liked da concepts tho
u respectable?,no,like mexicans suddenly becomin fashionable ur neva cred-I-bull
you shoulda stuck to top-pickles like crazy gluing the peak on vegetables
8-10...once again nice concept, good hit
teach to stop bein my shadow round the forums after u feel the incideration
pre-written or not,you still gettin whipped up like smarty jones rehabliltation
6-10...tight but not that serious dunn
how's you an expert on makin it when you urself thrown ya cards for gators
the lay-ball(label) you signing with is when you squat down on the ANR for favors
8.5-10...lmaoooo aha humor is alive in ya shit
cruise the boo's cuz you wanted something keyed?,well u chose to lose
so bring your basic rhyme scheme,one sllyable shit,n get votes for it too
7.5-10...feelin that personal, not too strong but liked it
cuz that's what this site's about when they ride you aloud n brag
i told u set it up in EFL n you went n put it here for clout,it's sad
5-10...dun get it, honestly
following me n abusin it n this shit's like rocky vs apollo n you still lose it
only way you winning this bitch is by the herbs you got swallowin ya pubic's
7.5-10...tight personal
bored of ur rhymes,all of em played,shit,it's like someone ignored the times
cuz your idea of keyin this is unlockin the closet where u stored those lines
7-10...personals, personals, personals
told him to squash this beef,but like speakin to air,i saw no reasonin with this
n don't worry ysdat/@...we don't need the dot in the name to see the bitch
10-10....beautiful finish on some honest shit

OVERALL: okay...ya shit was MUCCCCH longer than @'s so in my eyes it wasnt all that fair, but as for creativity?? u nailed it, personals were strong everywhere u used em, punches werent played, flow was on point, and u installed a lil humor in each line...ya ending TOPPED @'s that shit basically took da battle in my eyes


OVERALL VOTE= Natural Killa


RTF in any of my threads, i got three up...dos

thxx....I'll return favor tonight.................

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Voted For: @.

damn GREAT battle i think merlin got this though this shit was krazy man punch for punch i think merlin only got this ckuz his vocab was all over the place it was insane but GREAT GREAT battle

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Voted For: Natural killa

Natural Killa
ya hand's doin the rounds cuz in the text,ysdat/@. can't make a sound
Moves in the industry?,shit,jumpingjacks in the power plants doesn't count
^Lol, pretty decent bar...nothing special 4/10^
u the one spouce pre-writing shit,n don't deny bitch cuz you ain't hiding shit
only throne/trown i see you sittin on is when the balls bounce from u riding it
^good wordplay and good multis...punch decent 6/10^
he's a soakin faggot,n for him to bust he gotta pay the token,n hack-it
if this fag's fighting see-veer(severe) then he's swingin wit a broken racket
^Nice punch, good wordplay 7/10^
the shit u barging in get's dilaped from me with this spit with the carnage
u musta pulled out costumes from the attic to spit that garb.-age(garbage)
^not feelin this wordplay, feel like its forced....3/10^
in the forums you hated n u the one pussy I can say I'm glad I neva ate-it
must be judging voices of kittens cuz in this bitch you purr-pet-u-rated
^Very good wordplay and decent diss, felt it 5/10^
i spit my worse like an addict,n still beat ya,ya be goin at it,n they teach ya
this a battle on punches but I ain't hear a piss from you like damaged urthreas
^decent punch....good flow...6/10^
u spit off the beat n gettin shit on by the elite,so sit down from the re-seat(reciept)
n the record you have at current's weak,like the level we swimmin knee-deep
^meh, nothen special..coulda been reworded better 4/10^
u respectable?,no,like mexicans suddenly becomin fashionable ur neva cred-I-bull
you shoulda stuck to top-pickles like crazy gluing the peak on vegetables
^pretty decent wordplay overall nice punch 7/10^
teach to stop bein my shadow round the forums after u feel the incideration
pre-written or not,you still gettin whipped up like smarty jones rehabliltation
^lol very good punch...landed hard 8/10^
how's you an expert on makin it when you urself thrown ya cards for gators
the lay-ball(label) you signing with is when you squat down on the ANR for favors
^ehh, not fealin this man...felt it coulda been better 2/10^
cruise the boo's cuz you wanted something keyed?,well u chose to lose
so bring your basic rhyme scheme,one sllyable shit,n get votes for it too
^pretty basic, right to the point 4/10^
cuz that's what this site's about when they ride you aloud n brag
i told u set it up in EFL n you went n put it here for clout,it's sad
^not a real punch...just rambiling on 2/10^
following me n abusin it n this shit's like rocky vs apollo n you still lose it
only way you winning this bitch is by the herbs you got swallowin ya pubic's
^pretty good wordplay nice punch 5/10^
bored of ur rhymes,all of em played,shit,it's like someone ignored the times
cuz your idea of keyin this is unlockin the closet where u stored those lines
^lol decent punch good wordplayh..6/10^
told him to squash this beef,but like speakin to air,i saw no reasonin with this
n don't worry ysdat/@...we don't need the dot in the name to see the bitch
^oh shit, nice closer...lol i liked it 7/10^
OVERALL:your verse was very long!! but throught out the whole thing you had good wordplay and good vocab. your structure was good so i was able to flow wit it...but some of ur wordplay seemed forced...yet still you prevailed and kept your verse strong overall..your punches landed hard and personals were appealing and shown...overall 7/0.

Merlin
in registration you should of never agreed to the terms and conditions
Not one Rv crew wants you, I guess you've learned your position
^not a punch, dont think he learned his position...cuz he's still here 3/10^
2000 post in a month, this is the result of no life rejections
you need this "flow to "surivive" like introvenous injections
^good wordplay and strong punch, way to come back 7/10^
naturally killing shit,cause your post makes us all laugh to death
never survive as long as me, like you halfed your breath
^naturallly killing, that name play is kinda played...and the punch wasnt that great 4/10^
your broke, like fogetting "flour" while baking you wont get your "cake up"
you more like dry sex............you simply a fake fuck.
^good wordplay and sick punch...8/10^
this battle remains one sided, like I cut you in half
Each one of your lines dont hit,like a punch in the dark
^umm didnt really rhyme, pretty forced 2/10^
My aproach is perfect position like a snipers roof
battle me? you bit of more than you can chew,like he hyped is tooth
^good wordplay nice punch...nothing special though 4/10^
you couldnt tie a punch together if you gums were rope
grabbing "faiths" ass, relising to win you need tons of "hope"
^decent wordplay, punch was iight 5/10^
nigkah dont get me started i read ya verses ,pure boredom
so im'a make you fuckin disapear like the casino forum
^good reference, punch a lil weak 6/10^
This Pathetic Emcee gets Ripped Conclusively, Incisions Seriously Injures this Opponents Nutrients,
The same Phonetic Ego Ravaged, Continuing Investigation Sees Illness Obliterating his Nucleus’
^woah, unleashed some sickness 9/10^
OVERALL:your verse was iight, pretty much had good wordplay (although some seemed played and forced) you still kept your verse together and made it flow tight..your punches and personals were appealing but i dont feel they were worded the best they could have been. your last 2 lines were dope with the vocab but they simply really lacked the hard hitting ending i was hoping for....overall 6/10

sadly v/natural killa

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