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"One Son's Symphony"
http://www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan
Word...another emotional track...but this is beyond anything I've ever done before... This is Limited Edition at his absolute best at this point in time. Leave feed. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205584 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205566 |
this song is aight your flow got better ...the last time i heard you was a long long time ago....word the beat is str8 hook was aight....the direction u was goin was aight overall id say about7/10 word stay up and hit up Walkin Free word http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205817
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Iite im feelin this song, good emotion, ure deliverance was really good, we could hear you, hook was rlly good, im feelin the flow, liking the topic chosen, its a deep route to go talking about these situations and specially getting the message across, I think u did that near perfect, reminds me of some Eminem type ish....1...holla
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this songs was pretty sick...i'm going to be hard on you because i'm all about elevation...your flow is a lot better in this song...but you still try to stretch out rhyming words a little bit too much...chorus is my least fave part...it's too simple...and although most emotional songs don't need to be lyrical, this hook should be a little more...ya dig...quality is getting better...the subject matter was pretty dope, you painted a decent picture in my head. you can still do better, you rush songs a little too much. But the heart and drive is there over almost anyone i know...good shit...keep it rollin...sometimes your words got a little muddy...the first 6 bars were fuck fire...lgood shit...i like that flow
7/10... flow 7 lyrics 5 emotion 9 beat 8 hook 5 good shit |
start of this gave me chills
everything was good in it...track has lots of HIGHS that are pronounced...but this is one of the best tracks I've heard on here good shyt and yea, flow is good...but, the theme and creativity stood out most 8/10 |
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This track was straight fire.. ur emotion and delivery were alot better then ur prior tracks.. the hook was lacking.. but the story line and ur creativity was the high point.. your lyrics were good.. this whole song was nice man.. ummm i liked ur beat choice.. its not something i would use .. but u sounded good on it..sooo overall im gonna give this an 8.5/10... that is all
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alot of emotion here i liked it i mean ya flow could be a lil more fluent but other than that the lyrics and emotion were so real... and some of the feelings in this song are the same that i have with my personal life man i can relate keep doin it man later
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Wow thanks to all...
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Uppin' :bored:................
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lol @ ya lil intro there,
nice beat, damn this a cool lil banger, you musta made this beat pretty good man, flow is pretty good man nice lyrics, emotion isn't to bad i'd say its pretty good lol, the hook was a lil awkward, the vocals could be upped on the hook man, damn the 2nd verse would have to be the most interesting verse on this track nice job man you seem to be gettin better man. 1 |
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this is by far ur best song ur flow has gotten l;ike whoa alot better uve been elevating alot
i liked the lyrics on the 2nd verse they wer really good ur intro was umm well i didnt like it lol :/ |
you have great mechanics but the only problem is your charisma or character.. flow is on point - beat is cool, not my style but cool nonetheless. Delivery is ok that goes along with the charisma.. You got mad talent tho. The hook is decent couple be improved a little.. other than that - I think that's all the advice I can give on this..
-Gutta |
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nice track... Very Nice.. Emotion is dope as fuck.. Yah Flow.. Well Bomb shit.. You Remind me of Classified more then eminem.. I checked out some other tracks from you as well.. Yah got some hot shit// Keep it comming..
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beats ill...nice as fuck...
lyrics are deep i can tell but lyrically it aint really somethin special and the singin on the chorus aint my style but it wasnt bad ...somethin lil different ya emotion is real good man perfect actually for what your rappin about...quality is real good nice work man i'll give you a 8.5/10 P.s. if you dont mind i'd like to use that beat for my mixtape drop a freestyle or some shit over it...hit me up on aim be nice track 1ne... |
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