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Tekneek vs Yvonne
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Beefin No Biting Gd Luck Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 08-24-05 at 11:24 AM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 10:57 AM.
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Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 11:00 AM.
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like his sig..this cats verse cudnt be nothin but blank
his more aimless than a misile dats y ur Tek's got no rank like a pastor castin out spirits ima wipe your hands outta text you still wudnt catch 'Fiya' if u bit from 'Lady's' brext (breast) like gatherin letters you still wouldnt catch a point like its scramble NFA muh'fucker you'ld get diced if this shit was a gamble* i'll bake this hoe and make him realize he aint got his pants zipped like an over scratch disc your lines r just played and skipped * NFA means No Future Ambition thats it...thanx...all honest and well xplained voted will be apprecited and returned wun |
ahhh shit...i made some typigraphical mistakes =/
ima get it fixed up |
yo this my first battle in months.....
chk.... dont know why yvonne decided to try-this-tyrant... ....... fucking hoar, i'll have any one of my DOGS, 'pee n shit on her' like she was a 'fire-hydrant'..... ...... damn, i'm fillin this shit wit more 'punches' than 'bowls-at-proms'........ ..... ya verse was butt, but if i really wanted to see ass, why battle u, i'd juss call-ya-moms........ ... lil gurl come one slut, stop trynna punch me n hit-me-bitch...... .... we all know your boyfreinds known for 'Droppin GAME' like '50-DID'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good luck gurl........ |
good luck........nice battle....................
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word....lol ur verse got me laffin...nice nice......
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damn i've voted on many peeps battles but they wunt holla bak?...ughhh
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i know the feeling..........
uppin this anyway..........0-0 |
*walks in*
*sighs* *walks out bangin the door* |
This was feedback posted for Tekneek
Polls............................................. ..................Good Drop Tek
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thx. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Uppin This Issh
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hey nice name change...lol
this loox like the forgotten battle....we need just five well xplained damn votes yo....ughh |
Voted For: Tekneek
Yvonne like his sig..this cats verse cudnt be nothin but blank his more aimless than a misile dats y ur Tek's got no rank ^Good opener weak punch 4/10^ like a pastor castin out spirits ima wipe your hands outta text you still wudnt catch 'Fiya' if u bit from 'Lady's' brext (breast) ^Good wordplay, decent punch 6/10^ like gatherin letters you still wouldnt catch a point like its scramble NFA muh'fucker you'ld get diced if this shit was a gamble* ^Not feelin this, coulda been more creative 5/10^ i'll bake this hoe and make him realize he aint got his pants zipped like an over scratch disc your lines r just played and skipped ^Again good wordplay, strong finish 7/10^ OVERALL:Ur verse was nicely structured gave it good flow, each of ur punches just kept rollin allong making them presented well.Ur personals were ok, coulda been more creative overall 6/10^ YouKay dont know why yvonne decided to try-this-tyrant... ....... fucking hoar, i'll have any one of my DOGS, 'pee n shit on her' like she was a 'fire-hydrant'..... ...... ^Awesome opener, good wordplay strong punch 8/10^ damn, i'm fillin this shit wit more 'punches' than 'bowls-at-proms'........ ..... ya verse was butt, but if i really wanted to see ass, why battle u, i'd juss call-ya-moms........ ... ^Meh, didnt like the flow, but still good creative diss 6/10^ lil gurl come one slut, stop trynna punch me n hit-me-bitch...... .... we all know your boyfreinds known for 'Droppin GAME' like '50-DID'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^Lol, nice wordplay and good punch/closer felt it 8/10^ OVERALL:Ur verse was poorly structured...hard to get a flow but u made up for it with ur dope punches and tight personals....didnt lack much in this verse......overall 7/10^ v/YouKay rtf in any of my battles, since i kinly peeped urs...make sure u explain ur vote.....peace |
yep yep...
keep 'em commin and they'll be returned... |
uppin....................upping................... ...up up...
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Uppin This....damm.....why's No One Voting. .
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Voted For: Yvonne
dont know why yvonne decided to try-this-tyrant... ....... fucking hoar, i'll have any one of my DOGS, 'pee n shit on her' like she was a 'fire-hydrant'..... ...... 4...forced multi..ok concept wit fire-hydrant shit..but wording wuz messed up damn, i'm fillin this shit wit more 'punches' than 'bowls-at-proms'........ ..... ya verse was butt, but if i really wanted to see ass, why battle u, i'd juss call-ya-moms........ ... 3...mama joke?...no. lil gurl come one slut, stop trynna punch me n hit-me-bitch...... .... we all know your boyfreinds known for 'Droppin GAME' like '50-DID'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 6.....decent.... like his sig..this cats verse cudnt be nothin but blank his more aimless than a misile dats y ur Tek's got no rank 4.....meh...wuz ite..nothing special like a pastor castin out spirits ima wipe your hands outta text you still wudnt catch 'Fiya' if u bit from 'Lady's' brext (breast) 4...forced wordplay..brext/breast?..doesn't match homophonically. like gatherin letters you still wouldnt catch a point like its scramble NFA muh'fucker you'ld get diced if this shit was a gamble* 6..creative concept 'n shit.good. i'll bake this hoe and make him realize he aint got his pants zipped like an over scratch disc your lines r just played and skipped 3...played... ok..ynovee got this. She had the best bar in this battle with the NFA one.And she also had more lines...so an advantage to her already for that. Tekneek.. didn't like the structure.I thought some of your multis were forced.U had some good concepts like the fire hydrant lines..but the wording wuzn't good.And u also had a mama joke?NO> Vote-Yvonne RTF BELOW IN 3 DAYS :thumbup:...OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205767 |
^^thanx
but i am not gonna rtf ima vote honestly...cos u know how shit goes down on rv..with those dick fixed children... |
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Voted For: Yvonne
like gatherin letters you still wouldnt catch a point like its scramble NFA muh'fucker you'ld get diced if this shit was a gamble* i'll bake this hoe and make him realize he aint got his pants zipped like an over scratch disc your lines r just played and skipped vs ya verse was butt, but if i really wanted to see ass, why battle u, i'd juss call-ya-moms........ ... lil gurl come one slut, stop trynna punch me n hit-me-bitch...... .... we all know your boyfreinds known for 'Droppin GAME' like '50-DID'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
^^...hm at least u voted unlike many...thanx
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Voted For: Yvonne
easy win for yvonne... youkay... i felt that your structure was messed up so it took my interest away from your punches.. yvonne pretty decent verse overall.. nothing special but you did enough to win good job.... |
^thanx yo...
common rv...dont be so slow to act.... |
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Voted For: Yvonne
Yvonne - Good verse, you had strong punches and good personals. Best Line - i'll bake this hoe and make him realize he aint got his pants zipped like an over scratch disc your lines r just played and skipped Worst Line - NONE YouKay - That verse was ok, it flowed iight, and you had some decent punches. Best Line - lil gurl come one slut, stop trynna punch me n hit-me-bitch...... .... we all know your boyfreinds known for 'Droppin GAME' like '50-DID'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Worst Line - dont know why yvonne decided to try-this-tyrant... ....... fucking hoar, i'll have any one of my DOGS, 'pee n shit on her' like she was a 'fire-hydrant'..... ...... OVERALL - This battle was one sided, I think that Yvonne had this the whole time. I liked her punches and flow. YouKay you need to work on a better flow and more solid punches. Vote - Yvonne RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210106 |
thanx...
ok rv...lets finish this up b4 i travel out...common... |
This was feedback posted for Tekneek
checkin pollzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz......................
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^^^fuck you...lol jk
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn....one more vote to go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Voted For: Yvonne
lil gurl come one slut, stop trynna punch me n hit-me-bitch...... .... we all know your boyfreinds known for 'Droppin GAME' like '50-DID'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! VS like his sig..this cats verse cudnt be nothin but blank his more aimless than a misile dats y ur Tek's got no rank i'll bake this hoe and make him realize he aint got his pants zipped like an over scratch disc your lines r just played and skipped Y just plain came harder...her closer owned his whole verse. EZ vote. NO HATE RTF Vs oreo please. |
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