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Tekneek vs New Edition
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6 -10Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-24-05 at 12:07 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
New Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 11:37 AM.
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Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-24-05 11:38 AM.
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I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical,
i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical, u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you, man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2, i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland, but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands |
imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell….....
New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”…..... yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…...... but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’....... Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,....... for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”… look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'..... |
yo nice man...no hate..i forgot my explanations but thats nothing.......
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This was feedback posted for New Edition
OK, white u elevated alot in battling, teknical lol at that L's line, pretty good, i was impressd by that, cant vote because of crew, gd luck both u
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This was feedback posted for New Edition
checkin pollz.............................................
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Voted For: Tekneek
I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical, i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical, ^^^no...weak opener. u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you, man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2, ^^^ight punch not really effective i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland, but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands ^^^No Weak Closer..... imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell…..... New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”…..... ^^^Good Opener Nice punch yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…...... but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’....... ^^^Ight punch solid nuthin special Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,....... for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”… ^^^Ight Punch again..... look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'..... ^^^good Closer..... V/Tekneek this was a onesided battle tek came wit good punchs an wordplay but u need more personals....New work on ur punchs an the wordplay u had to basic punchs an need to use more personals.... V/Tek......Rtf THE FAvor In Sig or This VOtes REmoved.....1 |
Thx..................upping
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Voted For: Tekneek
I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical, i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical, ^^wordplay is ok, but punch is weak u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you, man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2, ^^no diss i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland, but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands ^^no diss work on actually dissing and making your wording better vs. imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell…..... New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”…..... ^^quite good yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…...... but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’....... ^^not direct enough Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,....... for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”… ^^why are you talking about dudes in general? Diss your opponent foo! v/tekneek drop a vote in my sig, thanks look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'..... |
sorry missed this bar from the feedback:
look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'..... ^^ok wordplay, but how is not having been in jail a good diss? The answer is, it aint/ Man you only took this, cos your opponent was so wack |
bump......................
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uppin............................................. ..........
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Voted For: Tekneek
tekneek imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell…..... New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”…..... "L's" punches are played, but still a goood punch yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…...... but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’....... good punch, wordplay Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,....... for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”… another solid punch, more good wordplay look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'..... lol, nice closer overall- very good verse, no bad bars, most of them hit hard... great wordplay throughout the verse v. New Edition I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical, i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical, not much of a diss.... u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you, man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2, sorta stretched.... ok punch i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland, but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands very stretched........................................<<doing that doesnt help, it just makes it more obvious... [b]overall- not bad, but nothing good either..... tekneek wins this easily... v/tekneek please vote on my battle w/stanza, link in sig |
i must have deleted part of that vote....
in my explanation for method's last bar, i said: very stretched........................................<<and doing that doesnt help, it just makes it more obvious |
Voted For: Tekneek
Tekneek imma show u the reason why the devil made me rap-in-hell…..... New Edition must like to ‘collect weed’ how he be “STACKIN-L’s”…..... ^Nice diss, good wordplay 8/10^ yeah I can ‘TOSS-BREAD’… n ‘SWING-THE-TOAST’…...... but I’m like ya ‘Paper-boy’, the way I ‘fling-ya-POSTS’....... ^its iight kinda a jab...good word play again 6/10^ Pardon-duke cuz I trap-these-‘ardent’-dudes,....... for thinking they ‘hot’ when they stay “fallin off bars” like “wack trapeze-artists-do”… ^lol haha this was funny punch 8/10^ look boi, i know u definately-ass... ...i juss got locked for the second time, but the only time u 'seen a cell' was lookin through a 'microscope' in ur 'chemistry-class'..... ^nice closer, hit hard 9/10^ Overall you had extremely hard hitting punches, flow was good....good word play an over all good drop and verse towards your opponnent. New Edition I thought you are hard spitter, but u make ur shit topical, i thought u broke my computer, but that was just tecnical, ^You really forced the rhyme...not a diss at all 0/10^ u wanted to take off ur 1st lose cauze thats was shame for you, man,u cant be serious,thats like remove tattoo but u can always get 2, ^This was iight nothin special....4/10^ i would eat u alive if i havent taste you,like taste that sweatness of wonderland, but ur like old shit,like toffee.............................like those old englands ^felt you really forced the rhyme didnt really think it was a good closer...2/10^ Overal i wasnt feelin your verse, i feel it had not hard hitting punches and you forced rhymes that just werent workin Nothing really played but nothing really hit hard though up on ur punches v/tekneek RTF on my sig link honest vote 1 |
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Voted For: Tekneek
Tekneek: The first bar was ur best, the second and third bars were weak. Poor concepts worded really badly. Flow was alright, structure was fine, just try and come up with better concepts and improve your wording. YouKay: You had some nice wordplay in there, I liked your third bar best even though it was very stretched, so try and get the lines closer together, no personals on him though which was bad, but overall definitely the better verse. v/ YouKay Would you mind dropping a vote on my battle please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973 |
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