"Tell Me" -M.A.S. ft. Bobby Valentino
 

word, Decree and Tizzle doin' that shit wit bobby Valentino. Yea, I posted this, but I ain't spit on this, I jus looped verses longer and put hook and shit on. :cool:

but word..

Intro: Bobby Valentino
First verse: Decree
Second verse: Bobby Valentino
Third verse: Tizzle
Bridge: Bobby Valentino
Hook: Bobby Valentino
Beat: "Tell Me" by Bobby Valentino

Song Link (CLICK HERE!!!)

Link 1

Link 2

yeah, Bobby Valentino the newest member of O.K. :cool:

dope shit yall, of course.....



P.S. anybody know where Decree is? :huh:
he's supposed to be on a collab wit me and im done with my part

^^foo thats not feed!!!

and nah i aint know where decree is....prolly died again

decree i think you could up your volume a bit, its a bit hard to hear you ya know, this beat is very loud though i dont know why, anyway decree you did pretty good lyrics wasn't bad flow wasn't bad emotion could be upped some what more lyrics i thought maybe didn't quite fit this track but they would be good if the track was tittled somin else maybe, tizzle somins fuckin up your sound, are you addin some filter you shouldnt be, flow aint to bad, emotion is pretty good, its your quality that needs work thats all really.

anyway cool lil remix, could yall rtf on my track "Split Optics,

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^yea i gotchu para...
props on da feed

aight, u want feed....

decree, pretty nice lyrics but i thought your flow was a little bit off from where it normally is, tizz i agree completely with Para it sounds like u had some kinda filter on your voice in this one or somethin for some reason but i really liked how your verse kinda built up and stayed on topic the whole time..

werrd.... :shoot:

OK!

why don't you leave feed like that for M.A.S anthem track? :shoot: lol

but word @ join' fan club. :cool:

and Tizz and D, y'all already kno what I think of shit. good shit. keep it up. M.A.S.!!! OK!!!

weerd....
my mic is just gay :)

word....... uppin' this for y'all...

yea, im just overwhelmed by the feedback......

:huh:

:shocked:

so much feed.....

cmon yall

shit will be returned.....leave links if you need to

pshhhh @ your sig.. prolly never even started workin' on mine. :shoot:

decree i can barely hear u in the beggining but then in the middle of ur verse u get louder so its cool
ur lyrics were pretty good
flow was actually pretty godd off in like 2 places nothing big though props
i think ur emotion could have been better but overall good
tizzle yea i agree ur mic is gay lol
ur voice fits this track well i like it
ur flow isnt as good as it was on the mas anthem but its alot better than it was so no big deal again ur emotion could use work but ull get that down
ur getting better and better ull be one of the top heads on rv in a few months at the rate ur elevating ur very determined jus work on ur emotion and save up and buy a ne mic lol
7/10

^^appreciate feed willa

and yea, id love to buy a new mic =/

wooooooooooooooo baby

HIT ME!

Props to spul on looping this shit.....ah'ight here we go.....decree...ya vocals is low...but I can hear you.....ok son u gotta come more original u took a 50 cent type approach to this....which = wackness to the 10th power...flow was cool....delivery needs to be upped.....ok tizzle quality is terrible but vocals can be heard......ya delivery needs alot of work....flow was decent needs work as well...lyrically typical...overall not bad tho.....I know both yall relaitvely new to the game....so this is def an improvement for both yall...jus keep elevating an dropping.....1

litizzle.. i got my cd now.. i jst need that cover u promised me :(

This is my favorite beat right now, and I'm mad that no one asked me to do this collaboration on it, but thats coo, lol

verse 1 - Really good storyline, and how you delivered it was good also. But your flow was a little off at the end of a few bars, which through me off a little. Overall, really good.

last verse - Running water, in the background. So the quality is your main problem. The effect on your voice made it seem that your were in the bathroom somewhere. Your flow and storyline was on point, but quality is diffinity your henderance on this track.

Overall - 7.8/10

good track.

weerd, props to trip and deuce for the feed....appreciate it
and deuce, aint know you wanted to be on yo :huh:

but weerd thanx
and chris ill still hit that cover up yo

upppin el shit

ill return favor if you leave links :cool:

man :shoot:

jus leave some feed please...

this was some pretty good shit...boht of u flowed pretty good...seem like ya'll tried to have that lil swagger goin...lol...good shit though...delievery was pretty good...lyrics were aight...i personally use multi's so yea...lol...rtf on my remix of "Tell Me"

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