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Torch. vs New Edition
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6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good Luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 08-27-05 at 10:57 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
New Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 11:03 AM.
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Rapforums.com is here?shit u missed site boy get back there,
like change ur sexuality,its over bitch like ur RF flames(fame) were battles none but u r ground like bubblegum, we spit u off, make some finishing moves like kung-fu before kick u off. think you torching us, I give my property to bet u wont do it, like bet wrong horse,only time u won was when horse ride on u kid. explanations: his sig.. RapForums.Com Is Here -Acomplishments- Rookie Of July -Battles- None |
Torch. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 11:28 AM.
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Fuck It!!!
New's Nice, Naw I Was Lying G, Using Reverse Psychiatry Surprisingly I Came To Battle, But His Verse Was Tired See 6 Lines Is Nothing, Look Yo I'll Even Give You A Red Star You Heard Of Dead Bolts?, Well New's Shit Is Dead Bars I Fed Scars To His Whack Verse, So His Lungs Collapse First Make Like A Car And Retire, You Don't Belong On Rap Verse Keystyle Bitch Served!! |
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nice verse man..........gdluck :thumbup: ..can we now get some votes
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Voted For: Torch.
Rapforums.com is here?shit u missed site boy get back there, like change ur sexuality,its over bitch like ur RF flames(fame) were nah didnt feel this battles none but u r ground like bubblegum, we spit u off, make some finishing moves like kung-fu before kick u off. nah dont connect think you torching us, I give my property to bet u wont do it, like bet wrong horse,only time u won was when horse ride on u kid. aight didnt really connect New's Nice, Naw I Was Lying G, Using Reverse Psychiatry Surprisingly I Came To Battle, But His Verse Was Tired See nice opener im suprised that worked 6 Lines Is Nothing, Look Yo I'll Even Give You A Red Star You Heard Of Dead Bolts?, Well New's Shit Is Dead Bars lol nice I Fed Scars To His Whack Verse, So His Lungs Collapse First Make Like A Car And Retire, You Don't Belong On Rap Verse wasnt feelin but aight wordplay nice verse from torch i think oyu defin got skills like the way u use your multis erm new....you should elevate work on makin ya punches connect harder but anyway vote-torch |
Voted For: Torch.
Hmm.. New Edition - your verse sucked. for real. you tried to make a personal but you have to be more creative than that. use some wordplay or something to make some punches. overall your verse was a 2/10 Torch - opener the first line was better than the 2nd i think. the dead bars line was alright. not the best. but your closer was much better. your flow was on point. much better than New Edition. |
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Voted For: Torch.
New's Nice, Naw I Was Lying G, Using Reverse Psychiatry Surprisingly I Came To Battle, But His Verse Was Tired See 4...good flow but weak punch 6 Lines Is Nothing, Look Yo I'll Even Give You A Red Star You Heard Of Dead Bolts?, Well New's Shit Is Dead Bars 5....weak n kinda basic I Fed Scars To His Whack Verse, So His Lungs Collapse First Make Like A Car And Retire, You Don't Belong On Rap Verse 6..that car/retire shit is played tho Rapforums.com is here?shit u missed site boy get back there, like change ur sexuality,its over bitch like ur RF flames(fame) were 3..ok first..the set-up was stupuid and flame/fame is not wordplay..it has to be homophones to be wordplay..plus it didn't rhyme battles none but u r ground like bubblegum, we spit u off, make some finishing moves like kung-fu before kick u off. 2...not a punch....and u rhyming the same words think you torching us, I give my property to bet u wont do it, like bet wrong horse,only time u won was when horse ride on u kid. 5...ur best bar New edition...you need some work.That 1st bar..too many problems.First..flame/fame..for it to be wordplay..it needs to be homophones.Not just similar sounding.So that was forced.And the bar didn't rhyme(there,were).The 2nd bar..not much of a punch..more like self glorifing..and u rhymed the same word.3rd bar was actually a punch...but it was weak. No hate....honest opinion Vote-Torch Rtf below in 3 days or this vote will be removed :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206789 |
Voted For: Torch.
New Edition Rapforums.com is here?shit u missed site boy get back there, like change ur sexuality,its over bitch like ur RF flames(fame) were ^Forced rhyme didnt diss him neither 0/10^ battles none but u r ground like bubblegum, we spit u off, make some finishing moves like kung-fu before kick u off. ^was iight but still didnt hit hard 4/10^ think you torching us, I give my property to bet u wont do it, like bet wrong horse,only time u won was when horse ride on u kid. ^no.....bad closer 0/10^ OVERALL:ur verse was nothing, u had no punches not even self glor. u were just ramboling on about nothing....next battle up on ur personals and punches...and come alot harder :thumbup: TORCH New's Nice, Naw I Was Lying G, Using Reverse Psychiatry Surprisingly I Came To Battle, But His Verse Was Tired See ^I like the flow and multis and vocab iight diss 6/10^ 6 Lines Is Nothing, Look Yo I'll Even Give You A Red Star You Heard Of Dead Bolts?, Well New's Shit Is Dead Bars ^lmao he's owned nice flow nice diss 8/10^ I Fed Scars To His Whack Verse, So His Lungs Collapse First Make Like A Car And Retire, You Don't Belong On Rap Verse ^OWNED like crazy, nice closer and u finished him 9/10^ OVERALL:extreme verse for only 6 lines if u went any longer woulda gave dude a heart attack, but fa real homie ur verse was fresh ta deff. and thats why u deserve this win v/torch rtf my battles is in front lines, cant fit all in sig so rtf wit honest votes since i took the time to peep urs g/j :thumbup: |
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Voted For: Torch.
new --------- Rapforums.com is here?shit u missed site boy get back there, like change ur sexuality,its over bitch like ur RF flames(fame) were battles none but u r ground like bubblegum, we spit u off, make some finishing moves like kung-fu before kick u off. think you torching us, I give my property to bet u wont do it, like bet wrong horse,only time u won was when horse ride on u kid. ---- suprissing...but lines sortta didnt hit as hard as the other verse...it was good though ---- Torch ---- New's Nice, Naw I Was Lying G, Using Reverse Psychiatry Surprisingly I Came To Battle, But His Verse Was Tired See 6 Lines Is Nothing, Look Yo I'll Even Give You A Red Star You Heard Of Dead Bolts?, Well New's Shit Is Dead Bars I Fed Scars To His Whack Verse, So His Lungs Collapse First Make Like A Car And Retire, You Don't Belong On Rap Verse ------- quik hard..and easy it was onpoint and ur punchlines gave me a good feeling..and u r vocab wasnt bad as well..nice work you got my vote v/ Torch can i get a RTF.....cheers its in my sig |
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