Carlos vs THE NAME
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-05 at 02:42 PM

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Carlos has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 02:14 PM.

THE NAME has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 02:19 PM.

Ill Have "Lyrical Shells" In Your Stomach, That Will Leave You ~Shakin~
Sitting In Your Intestines, As If They Were Some Brownies ~Bakin~

Youre Lame mayne, if you ever had it, you forgot youre game,
I blame ure mama cos this guys an idiot.....HE DONT EVEN HAVE A NAME,*

I seen "pussies" but this for this "cat" to beat me, he needs to concentrate,
Cos at the least this nigga "N"eed "A" "Mufuckin" year to "Elevate

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1st line - explainable homes
2nd line - his name is "Name",
3rd Line - the letters in "" are a play as his name, get it?

New nigga in rv, ur shit is wack as fuck, that make no sense G,
but that’s natural cause how many times I hear Carlos is crazy,
U can pray me mercy when I knock u like cocco nuts in survivors,
niggas say God help them, but I saw 666 number in ur pocket bible,
I jew u like u grind bull shit in ur verses ,I put u in mockamaster,
only gd thing with u is that coffee is gd cause ur product of Puerto rico…

expl.
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ighlight=Carlos
How many times I hear Carlos Is Crazy

Im a product of the ghettos in Puerto Rico,

or caryy a pocket Bible,

Voted For: Carlos

i give it to CARLOS ...
ur structure was pretty good. and ur verses were also the same...
but NAME ur verses need to give itself a little flow..or u wont win the battle... ..better luck next time NAME..

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This was feedback posted for Carlos
 

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This was feedback posted for Carlos
 

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Voted For: Carlos

Carlos had a good structure and he rhymed more than
Name and also came much more harder and had betta
punches than Name also

carlo's forth and last verse was quite good it self
"N"eed "A" "Mufuckin" year to "Elevate
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dat was creative

Name just rhyme more cuz yo shit didnt make kno sense

vote Carlos

Voted For: Carlos

THE NAME-A Pretty weak drop....punches weren't connectin, the only positive thing was your structure you need to elevate definitely

Carlos-Opener was kinda weak, structure was off but you made a play on his name and thats more than i can say for him so my vote is

V/Carlos

gd battle homie...u deserved this win...............so more votes for get this closed

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Voted For: Carlos

ayo.....dis kids a clown man
Ill Have "Lyrical Shells" In Your Stomach, That Will Leave You ~Shakin~
Sitting In Your Intestines, As If They Were Some Brownies ~Bakin~

Weak concept, weak punch

Youre Lame mayne, if you ever had it, you forgot youre game,
I blame ure mama cos this guys an idiot.....HE DONT EVEN HAVE A NAME,*

Concept and personal where there, but the wording wasn't, aight punch

I seen "pussies" but this for this "cat" to beat me, he needs to concentrate,
Cos at the least this nigga "N"eed "A" "Mufuckin" year to "Elevate

Not bad, good creativity but didn't hit all that hard


New nigga in rv, ur shit is wack as fuck, that make no sense G,
but that’s natural cause how many times I hear Carlos is crazy,

Personal was there, but the wording wasn't good

U can pray me mercy when I knock u like cocco nuts in survivors,
niggas say God help them, but I saw 666 number in ur pocket bible,

Weak concept, weak punch

I jew u like u grind bull shit in ur verses ,I put u in mockamaster,
only gd thing with u is that coffee is gd cause ur product of Puerto rico…

Nah, didn't like this really

Both weak verses, you both have potential, you just need to practise I guess. But Carlos got this cos he was more creative and hit harder.

v/ Carlos

Both drop a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973

uppin this for last votes.........................gd battle

This was feedback posted for THE NAME
 

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uppppppppppppppppin for my boi The Name................

Voted For: Carlos

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Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: Carlos

New nigga in rv, ur shit is wack as fuck, that make no sense G,
but that’s natural cause how many times I hear Carlos is crazy,
^whack
U can pray me mercy when I knock u like cocco nuts in survivors,
niggas say God help them, but I saw 666 number in ur pocket bible
^whack,
I jew u like u grind bull shit in ur verses ,I put u in mockamaster,
only gd thing with u is that coffee is gd cause ur product of Puerto rico
^wtf?

Ill Have "Lyrical Shells" In Your Stomach, That Will Leave You ~Shakin~
Sitting In Your Intestines, As If They Were Some Brownies ~Bakin~
^decent
Youre Lame mayne, if you ever had it, you forgot youre game,
I blame ure mama cos this guys an idiot.....HE DONT EVEN HAVE A NAME,*
^ok..
I seen "pussies" but this for this "cat" to beat me, he needs to concentrate,
Cos at the least this nigga "N"eed "A" "Mufuckin" year to "Elevate
^no

Vote-Carlos for actually having something decent.