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Drakel vs sabotage
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10-12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No D/R Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 08-26-05 at 05:38 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 03:44 PM.
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quick key, get this over with
sab already has it bad, even a fat chance is looking slim so im destroying his record, using his own name against him shove a steak to ya, it aint rare, but you're getting well done im not hittin up your cezar collab...but my hits will give you one hoofin' this dewd, you wont make it with no style, just va-moose so im tyin' the knot in this battle, so sab can be in the noose/news sab never turns on his game, he's stuck wondering how to pivot shit, he always sees 'ell..........like a hateful british this dude's down a deep hole......is story is one sad scoop the only time i've lost 21....was as a kid shooting hoops zebra....screw what they say, ya can't buck up to me, aint part of the herd text is bull, so mine's sweeping you quicker than computer nerds ________________________________________ *real record is 21-21 *british don't really pronounce 'h's *has a collab with cezar/seizure uhmm, rest should be easy, don't get anything, dont vote......gl |
Alright here you go. 12 Lines.
The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet" All of his drops get replies but let me tell you something Half the responses are Drakel pleading "Come on man. Upping" Check it..You're never respected in text..The reason's obvious and blatent Can't face you're outdated..Flow's like your avatar..Ancient(avy is a dinosaur) Infected by dyslexia..this bastard's faker than actors Wanted to knock him senseless..Wait..Already spelt his country's name backwards(it says he's from Adanac..that backwards is Canada) We give respect where its due..You get none..Heart of a statue cuz And like unaware vampire victims..RV is stumped..Drakel...uh?(Dracula) Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread straight keyed |
sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 05:14 PM.
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Alright here you go. 12 Lines.
The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet" All of his drops get replies but let me tell you something Half the responses are Drakel pleading "Come on man. Upping" Check it..You're never respected in text..The reason's obvious and blatent Can't face you're outdated..Flow's like your avatar..Ancient(avy is a dinosaur) Infected by dyslexia..this bastard's faker than actors Wanted to knock him senseless..Wait..Already spelt his country's name backwards(it says he's from Adanac..that backwards is Canada) We give respect where its due..You get none..Heart of a statue cuz And like unaware vampire victims..RV is stumped..Drakel...uh?(Dracula) Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread straight keyed |
lmlo......ahh well, good battle.....
i hope people understand the wordplay, for both verses skae |
hell yeah. wel at least you put it to at least 200 votes.
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Voted For: Drakel
The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet" ^^these kinda lines..defeat/da-feet are played..3/10 All of his drops get replies but let me tell you something Half the responses are Drakel pleading "Come on man. Upping" ^^^umm....decent i guess??...5/10 Check it..You're never respected in text..The reason's obvious and blatent Can't face you're outdated..Flow's like your avatar..Ancient(avy is a dinosaur) ^^basic rip on avatar...but still a personal i guess..5/10 Infected by dyslexia..this bastard's faker than actors Wanted to knock him senseless..Wait..Already spelt his country's name backwards(it says he's from Adanac..that backwards is Canada) ^^Weak becuz I think..... he wanted to spell it backwards..3/10 We give respect where its due..You get none..Heart of a statue cuz And like unaware vampire victims..RV is stumped..Drakel...uh?(Dracula) ^^drakel-uh?..drac-u-la...it has to match sllyable for sllyable..n u missed the 'U'..so this is forced wordplay....plus the 1st line the cuz shit was a forced rhyme....2/10 Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread ^^I like this bar.....6/10 Punches lacked.You had played shit...like the defeat/de-feet one.Then there was shit that was basic..like the avatar rip one.You gotta get creative with your shit more.And that backwards one..you just stated it...and I think that drakel meant to spell it like that.But the worst line was the drakel-uh/dracula one.It was a forced rhyme with the cuz/uh one and it was forced wordplay.Get your shit together dawg. sab already has it bad, even a fat chance is looking slim so im destroying his record, using his own name against him ^^wasn't feelin this one....4/10 shove a steak to ya, it aint rare, but you're getting well done im not hittin up your cezar collab...but my hits will give you one ^^good...7/10 hoofin' this dewd, you wont make it with no style, just va-moose so im tyin' the knot in this battle, so sab can be in the noose/news ^^noose/news?....these are similar sounding words..but with a wordplay like this..you need homophones..so this was forced....3/10 sab never turns on his game, he's stuck wondering how to pivot shit, he always sees 'ell..........like a hateful british ^^Good..creative and hard hittin...8/10 this dude's down a deep hole......is story is one sad scoop the only time i've lost 21....was as a kid shooting hoops ^^good personal wordplay...7/10 zebra....screw what they say, ya can't buck up to me, aint part of the herd text is bull, so mine's sweeping you quicker than computer nerds ^^NAh....3/10 OK..a good verse tho it still had it's faults.Some punches..well..str8 up..were weak.Like the nerd one.But the biggest problem was probably the noose/news one.You can't make wordplay like that using words that sound "similar'.It has to be str8 homophones.But I think you got this easy for the 21 line/british e'll..and the other personals. Vote-Drakel RTF |
This was feedback posted for sabotage
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This was feedback posted for Drakel
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This was feedback posted for Drakel
The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak
So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet" Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread Vs sab already has it bad, even a fat chance is looking slim so im destroying his record, using his own name against him hoofin' this dewd, you wont make it with no style, just va-moose so im tyin' the knot in this battle, so sab can be in the noose/news this dude's down a deep hole......is story is one sad scoop the only time i've lost 21....was as a kid shooting hoops |
word, upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin
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This was feedback posted for sabotage
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hate bastardz who just check pollz, go to 'ell you mutha effers
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STOP EXPLAINING PUNCHES.
What is up with you dudes in The Establishment thinking shit is cool. Word your punches so no explanations are needed. |
Voted For: sabotage
Drakel Verse sab already has it bad, even a fat chance is looking slim so im destroying his record, using his own name against him ^ setup was good...but punch lacked IMO shove a steak to ya, it aint rare, but you're getting well done im not hittin up your cezar collab...but my hits will give you one ^ Basic rhyme...self glorified...not feelin it really hoofin' this dewd, you wont make it with no style, just va-moose so im tyin' the knot in this battle, so sab can be in the noose/news ^ lol @ vamoose...ok rhyme as well...ok bar sab never turns on his game, he's stuck wondering how to pivot shit, he always sees 'ell..........like a hateful british ^ rhyme was a bit meh...sees 'ell lol e say hell to fam lol this dude's down a deep hole......is story is one sad scoop the only time i've lost 21....was as a kid shooting hoops ^ bar off point started but setup went off zebra....screw what they say, ya can't buck up to me, aint part of the herd text is bull, so mine's sweeping you quicker than computer nerds] ^ closer again is off point... Overall Not a decent verse it was to me an under average written...lotta self-g bars went off point in places...rhyme in one bar was weak rest was average/bsaic...coulda done better IMO Sabotage aka Implicit verse The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet" YUK...bar woulda been good 6 years ago lol All of his drops get replies but let me tell you something Half the responses are Drakel pleading "Come on man. Upping" ^ no diss...at all...weak bar Check it..You're never respected in text..The reason's obvious and blatent Can't face you're outdated..Flow's like your avatar..Ancient(avy is a dinosaur) ^ lol good personal liked this one Infected by dyslexia..this bastard's faker than actors Wanted to knock him senseless..Wait..Already spelt his country's name backwards(it says he's from Adanac..that backwards is Canada) ^ lol again aight personal We give respect where its due..You get none..Heart of a statue cuz And like unaware vampire victims..RV is stumped..Drakel...uh?(Dracula) ^ ok...dracula flip...hmm aight diss Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread ^ lol nice closer Q shit gettin played but lol @ this Overall Better verse more bars were better...some aight personals too...jus put explinations at the bottom not in the verse next time though coz ish fucks the verse layout... Vote Sabotage aka Implicit |
o damn i forgot about this battle. up this to the toppest of the top.
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upping this. come on its been open for months.....
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stop being a whiny bitch over something as insignificant as that....wow. |
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Voted For: sabotage
not that great of a battle though i know it's keystyled. both flows were choppy, and there was a lack of multies, and metpahors. best line from drakel was this dude's down a deep hole......is story is one sad scoop the only time i've lost 21....was as a kid shooting hoops and best line was Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread it's a tough one to decide because both had about the same weakness but i give this one to implicit b/c he had more personals (btw British people do pronounce h's)...no hate...peace |
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wow i wish i didn't just read that................
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Voted For: sabotage
Hmm overall i enjoyed Implicits drop more...but the two highlight lines for both were We give respect where its due..You get none..Heart of a statue cuz And like unaware vampire victims..RV is stumped..Drakel...uh?(Dracula) I liked those lines sab already has it bad, even a fat chance is looking slim so im destroying his record, using his own name against him I liked those lines from u drakel but overall the punches and personals came better from implicit.....and his actually made me grin....so overall Implicit gets my vote on this V/Implicit |
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havn't i owned you about 3 or 4 times? yes, i believe i have |
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