Mike Lowery vs Jack the Ripper
 

16-30 lines max (Jack, we'll figure out how much it is. But within' that range yo)
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Verses due by Monday, yo

DON'T FUCKING VOTE ON THIS BATTLE UNLESS YOUR NAME IS ON THE LIST BITCH!!!!!
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Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 08-29-05 at 07:24 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

It's SPuL! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 06:09 PM.

jack I will fuckin' kill you yo. check the fuck in!!!!!!!!!! and I'm goin' 16... mathc me.....

Jack The Ripper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-05 06:50 PM.

some part of me felt like declining this battle, just to piss you off, you know, like what you did to me last year, :thumbup:

lmao you idiot. Todays' monday tho yo. You got your 16? I got mine..........

I can 16 good lines in 20 minutes, but for you, i'll take 40, :)

you drop yet?.......................................

August 29th 2005, Rosemere, st.vincent, 569

Dear SPuL

I regret to inform that I smash you & got your boys haltin’
Cuz how is Spul gonna face me, when his whole city is Bolton?
We all hate you, get disowned, abandoned, left as a bum
And RV can’t help but desert you… it’s where you came from
Trying to impress kids by calling me out, what’d you think…
But i’ll cancel his show since Spul always has the weakest links
Wack fuck, even his coach kicked him off the roster, shit
Cuz…
Spul couldn’t play the center of attention, and he’s got some ugly pics!
Weak when ya post up, i’ll crack ya ankles, I got sick skills with no cure
Cuz on the court, Iraq up the points while your just part of their culture
Get fucking owned, Jack The Ripper.. infamous for killing hoes
Have ya corpse with a popped trunk, & I aint referring to your nose
LOL @ msn, “Soc was dissing me in LL, Jack what do I do!?”
The kid really can’t take a joke, unless it’s from a site or two
I can’t stress it enough, your not good, a loser, you suck with the pen
Who the fuck gets their account unbanned so they can cheat on it again?
The kid wants to make a splash, so i’ll throw his ass off a bridge
Cuz Spul israeli wack… and I aint talking ‘bout his heritage

Yours truly, Jack The Ripper

Dear SPuL

I regret to inform that I smash you & got your boys haltin’
Cuz how is Spul gonna face me, when his whole city is Bolton?
We all hate you, get disowned, abandoned, left as a bum
And RV can’t help but desert you… it’s where you came from
Trying to impress kids by calling me out, what’d you think…
But i’ll cancel his show since Spul always has the weakest links
Wack fuck, even his coach kicked him off the roster, shit
Cuz…
Spul couldn’t play the center of attention, and he’s got some ugly pics!
Weak when ya post up, i’ll crack ya ankles, I got sick skills with no cure
Cuz on the court, Iraq up the points while your just part of their culture
Get fucking owned, Jack The Ripper.. infamous for killing hoes
Have ya corpse with a popped trunk, & I aint referring to your nose
LOL @ msn, “Soc was dissing me in LL, Jack what do I do!?”
The kid really can’t take a joke, unless it’s from a site or two
I can’t stress it enough, your not good, a loser, you suck with the pen
Who the fuck gets their account unbanned so they can cheat on it again?
Kid always beggs me to drop feed on his songs, but the truth...
I think his audios are the perfect things... not to listen too
The kid wants to make a splash, so i’ll throw his ass off a bridge
Cuz Spul israeli wack… and I aint talking ‘bout his heritage

Yours truly, Jack The Ripper

This was feedback posted for Mike Lowery
 

props to both of you
checking polls
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Voted For: Mike Lowery

I regret to inform that I smash you & got your boys haltin’
Cuz how is Spul gonna face me, when his whole city is Bolton?
SEE THE WORDPLAT BUT IT ONLY CONNECTED SLIGHTLY
We all hate you, get disowned, abandoned, left as a bum
And RV can’t help but desert you… it’s where you came from
GOOD PUNCH HERE
Trying to impress kids by calling me out, what’d you think…
But i’ll cancel his show since Spul always has the weakest links
NAH JTR THOSE ARE PLAYED
Wack fuck, even his coach kicked him off the roster, shit
Cuz…
Spul couldn’t play the center of attention, and he’s got some ugly pics!
DECENT NOT WORDED AS YOU USUALLY WOULD
Weak when ya post up, i’ll crack ya ankles, I got sick skills with no cure
Cuz on the court, Iraq up the points while your just part of their culture
I HOPE HE IS FROM THERE CUZ I SENSE A THEME IN YOUR VERSE
Get fucking owned, Jack The Ripper.. infamous for killing hoes
Have ya corpse with a popped trunk, & I aint referring to your nose
DECENT HIT HERE
LOL @ msn, “Soc was dissing me in LL, Jack what do I do!?”
The kid really can’t take a joke, unless it’s from a site or two
BEST LINE SO FAR
I can’t stress it enough, your not good, a loser, you suck with the pen
Who the fuck gets their account unbanned so they can cheat on it again?
NO CHANGE THAT, BEST LINE HERE
Kid always beggs me to drop feed on his songs, but the truth...
I think his audios are the perfect things... not to listen too
MEH, DECENT NO REAL HIT
The kid wants to make a splash, so i’ll throw his ass off a bridge
Cuz Spul israeli wack… and I aint talking ‘bout his heritage
IF HE IS ISRAELI THAN NICE HIT HERE
BUT U USED THIS THEME A FEW TIMES IN YA VERSE, NICE VERSE, NOT AS MUCH WORDPLAY AS IVE COME TO EXPECT FROM U, STILL DOPER THAN MOST





I'ma re-kill Jack the Ripper, hope it don't go causin' riots
Man, you gon be losin', weight, but I ain't say you gonna dieyet
GOOD OPENER. ONLY WORKS CUZ PIC
You're a drunk, and you're stupid, and you try to be a G
The only 4.0 you got in school.....
.................................................. ... was your B.A.C!!
THIS IS DECENT, NOT SURE HOW TRUE IT IS THOUGH
Your spits are like the end of movies, cuz the drama's gone
I'ma leave you fast-en premature, like early ramadans!!
GOOD BAR HERE, NICELY PUT
Your tourney spits sucked, don't wanna be a beef starter
But no wonder you look like Luke....
............................................. it's plain to see you got no farther!!
NICE HIT! LIKE THE PLAY ON HIS ALIAS
Pay attention to this beatin', even though it's poor for health
Don't let your mind go wanderin', it's to small to be out by itself
HAHA! FUNNIEST LINE YET
Jus look at yourself, man, fo reel, you're such a joke
I got a handle on my life... Yours?
.................................................. . It must have broke!!
LIKE THIS TOO, NICE SENSE OF HUMOUR
damn, homie, you want more? aiight.... c'mon....

Your pic proves light's faster then sound, man, cuz you're weak
Cuz you looked really bright... untill you started to speak
NICE,ONCE AGAIN, THIS ONLY WORKS CUZ OF THE PIC
You think you're full of talent, man, but no one's loathin' it
Yea, you started out wit nothin, and...
.............................................. you still got most of it!!!
DECENT LINE HERE
You can think all you want, but this won't be a merry story
Now what? Got lost in thought? Must have been new territory
HAHA GOOD ONE HERE TOO,
My lines are so ill, ain't no way you robbin' them
Leave you Spurrin' wit a 5-0 on your chest like Robinson
DECENT, DIDNT REALLY HIT TOO HARD
THE HUMOUR WAS DEF IN YOUR VERSE, JTR'S PICTURE REALLY HELPED THE EFFECTIVENESS OF SOME OF UR HITS
CLOSER WAS KINDA WEAK THOUGH
JTR'S WORDPLAY MOSTLY DEPNDED ON SPULS HERITAGE
THE VERSE WAS NICELY COMPOSED
FROM A NEUTRAL STANDPOINT THIS IS A CLOSE CALL
BUT I DONT WANT TO WASTE U GUYS TIME BY CALLING A TIE
SO SOMEBOSYS GONNA BE UPSET..........JUST REMEMBER I GIVE HONEST VOTES SO...........
LITERALLY BY A HAIR I WAS DIGGING SPULS HUMOUR MORE THAN JTR'S WORDPLAY
V/ SPUL

word, more honest votes...

SPuL, lol, I shoulda put your pic on top of my verse, the one with the pierce jersey, ane been like "Cuz I'll pierce your back, and I aint talkin' about your jersey" Then all the basketball lines I used woulda been personals too, boooo @ me only realising that now, :(, but most peeps seen your gif of you balling and shit so.... :).

Word @ you winning bitch.

nah, it's gonna be closer yo....... this was nice battle dude. props yo... :shoot:

I never said word you would win, I said meant word @ you winning in the polls 1-0 right now. Duh.

Voted For: Jack The Ripper

I regret to inform that I smash you & got your boys haltin’
Cuz how is Spul gonna face me, when his whole city is Bolton?
We all hate you, get disowned, abandoned, left as a bum
And RV can’t help but desert you… it’s where you came from
Get fucking owned, Jack The Ripper.. infamous for killing hoes
Have ya corpse with a popped trunk, & I aint referring to your nose
I can’t stress it enough, your not good, a loser, you suck with the pen
Who the fuck gets their account unbanned so they can cheat on it again?
The kid wants to make a splash, so i’ll throw his ass off a bridge
Cuz Spul israeli wack… and I aint talking ‘bout his heritage

That take a joke line was something I thought of a loooooooooong time ago Mr. Funkalisticplayed. :o

vs.

Your tourney spits sucked, don't wanna be a beef starter
But no wonder you look like Luke....
............................................. it's plain to see you got no farther!!
Pay attention to this beatin', even though it's poor for health
Don't let your mind go wanderin', it's to small to be out by itself
You think you're full of talent, man, but no one's loathin' it
Yea, you started out wit nothin, and...
.............................................. you still got most of it!!!
My lines are so ill, ain't no way you robbin' them
Leave you Spurrin' wit a 5-0 on your chest like Robinson

v/ JTR

SPuL I still find a lot of your shit kinda corny nah mean? You came close, but no cigar homie.

1-1........................word........ more honest votes.

word....... thanks to both for votin'.................. close battle it's gonna be yo. :shoot:

Voted For: Mike Lowery

lmao @

We all hate you, get disowned, abandoned, left as a bum
And RV can’t help but desert you… it’s where you came from

Weak when ya post up, i’ll crack ya ankles, I got sick skills with no cure
Cuz on the court, Iraq up the points while your just part of their culture

The kid wants to make a splash, so i’ll throw his ass off a bridge
Cuz Spul israeli wack… and I aint talking ‘bout his heritage

lmao, u racist fuck, lol. that wuz yo best parts i think, but u used tha same shit too much, how can he b frum both iraq AND isreal? lmao, isreali's arent even arab, theyre jewish (i think) lmao
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Your tourney spits sucked, don't wanna be a beef starter
But no wonder you look like Luke....
............................................. it's plain to see you got no farther!!

I got a handle on my life... Yours?
.................................................. . It must have broke!!

My lines are so ill, ain't no way you robbin' them
Leave you Spurrin' wit a 5-0 on your chest like Robinson

lol, im guessin hiz numba on hiz jersey iz 50. aight closer. sum of yo punches wuz kinda "corny" like they wuz stupid, but i thought that made it funny, lmao

no hate JTR... actually, yes, eat a penis and fucking die!!!!

lol, naw, j/p

*snipe walks out of thread* :cool: werd

This was feedback posted for Jack The Ripper
 

that was a wack fucking battle...spul killed him, but seriously why was this so important. jacks was shitty!...one decent line. but i have even read that line about spul three months ago when i checked this site last...common kids

Stfu, any site JPoll, i'll fucking ripping your bitch ass.

Apart from JPoll being a straight up wack faggot, good stuff, upping.

damn uppin' this........................ c'mon peeps.........

Voted For: Jack The Ripper

I regret to inform that I smash you & got your boys haltin’
Cuz how is Spul gonna face me, when his whole city is Bolton?
Weak when ya post up, i’ll crack ya ankles, I got sick skills with no cure
Cuz on the court, Iraq up the points while your just part of their culture
LOL @ msn, “Soc was dissing me in LL, Jack what do I do!?”
The kid really can’t take a joke, unless it’s from a site or two
The kid wants to make a splash, so i’ll throw his ass off a bridge
Cuz Spul israeli wack… and I aint talking ‘bout his heritage

vs.

I'ma re-kill Jack the Ripper, hope it don't go causin' riots
Man, you gon be losin', weight, but I ain't say you gonna dieyet
Your tourney spits sucked, don't wanna be a beef starter
But no wonder you look like Luke....
............................................. it's plain to see you got no farther!!
My lines are so ill, ain't no way you robbin' them
Leave you Spurrin' wit a 5-0 on your chest like Robinson

this was a real good battle...... i liked Jacks wordplay and wording better to begin with so his punches were more effective..... altho the whole "joke lines" on him are kinda played, i think JTRs flip on it was the best one i have seen Period. even tho i doubt that Spul is israeli, it was decent wordplay...... and i didnt see much filler without wordplay and a well connectin punch

Spul also had a some good concepts but i dont like ur wording.... the punches never really hit that hard for me except ur opener and closer.... those were the bars i felt u had worded the best altho they really werent ur best overall bars.... altho u didnt have much filler, i felt that JTR outdid u by alil bit on most bars..... each one of his hit just alil harder and the joke line, along with the "cheat again" line pretty much took it for me in the end

goodluck to the both of ya

V/JTR

SPuL I still find a lot of your shit kinda corny nah mean? You came close, but no cigar homie.

^^^ thats kinda how i feel sumtimes.... no hate, but some of ur stuff seems kind of corny to me at times

This was feedback posted for Jack The Ripper
 

Checcckinnn pollls.....for the E-style famz....damn close battle....

lol it's coo Fux..................... uppin' thanks to 4 who voted............... lol upppppppppppppppppppppp

I love chicken man, mmm, chicken chicken chicken, it tastes like chicken, what could taste better then that, other then chicken of course. Cuz only chicken could taste better then chicken. I love how chicken tastes like chicken. You can fry chicken, and dip it in sauces and honey, it's so good. I love chicken and............................................... ......................

This was feedback posted for Mike Lowery
 

spul is wannabe black..so fuck him.....

and Jack...."Shut the fuck up!!!"

This was feedback posted for Jack The Ripper
 

loooooooooooooookin around..............................

come to see what i posted eh???FUCK YOU!!! :cussing:

stfu NK you herb................................. upppin'..........

This was feedback posted for Jack The Ripper
 

iiiight um... SPuL nice drop.. alot nicer then i've seen u drop in prior experiences.. alot of ur punches sound similar tho.. not the same lines.. but the same type set ups.. and there really predictable.. your flow was good i liked the personals on his pic and shit.. umm structure was nice not a biggy tho.. u could have had more personals tho.. Jack.. your verse was good.. i actually liked all ur personals on his Race.. its kinda played.. but u definately gave it a different twist.. umm your punches seemed to hit alot harder then SPuL's.. and your personals were on point just a LITTLE bit more.. some of my favorite lines were Jack's opener nice personal on his city.. havent seen that used against SPuL before.. and i also liked SPuL's handle on life line..i hated SPuL's closer it kinda left me thinking his verse was wack.. but after reading over i realized.. that just his closer was what was really lacking.. jersey lines are played and 5-0 lines are awfully played... SOO no hate to SPuL i just feel jack took it.. with harder punches and personals.. also i just typed up this whole vote.. and realized im not on the fucking list.. so i'll just leave this as feedback

^^ Lmfao @ Typing That As A Whole Vote And Not Realising He Wasn't On The List

lmao sucks for him.......... and you. :D lmao....... anyways, damn @ these foos not votin'. I asked 9th, Rebel, and L.I. today, and all didn't do it. you shoudln't say you down to be on council if you ain't gon fuckin' vote. nah mean? ~_~

Voted For: Jack The Ripper

I regret to inform that I smash you & got your boys haltin’
Cuz how is Spul gonna face me, when his whole city is Bolton?
We all hate you, get disowned, abandoned, left as a bum
And RV can’t help but desert you… it’s where you came from
LOL @ msn, “Soc was dissing me in LL, Jack what do I do!?”
The kid really can’t take a joke, unless it’s from a site or two
The kid wants to make a splash, so i’ll throw his ass off a bridge
Cuz Spul israeli wack… and I aint talking ‘bout his heritage

v.

I'ma re-kill Jack the Ripper, hope it don't go causin' riots
Man, you gon be losin', weight, but I ain't say you gonna dieyet
Your tourney spits sucked, don't wanna be a beef starter
But no wonder you look like Luke....
............................................. it's plain to see you got no farther!!
My lines are so ill, ain't no way you robbin' them
Leave you Spurrin' wit a 5-0 on your chest like Robinson
You think you're full of talent, man, but no one's loathin' it
Yea, you started out wit nothin, and...
.............................................. you still got most of it!!!

tied quotables. but im not gay so i wont call it a tie.

who was more consistent with witty lines? JTR.

close battle but really JTR came more consistent with less played concepts. most of each verses were fresh but SPuL your handle/broke line and looked bright till you spoke line were really played.

good battle but JTR took it due to consistancy

Voted For: Jack The Ripper

Jus look at yourself, man, fo reel, you're such a joke
I got a handle on my life... Yours?
.................................................. . It must have broke!!
Your pic proves light's faster then sound, man, cuz you're weak
Cuz you looked really bright... untill you started to speak
You think you're full of talent, man, but no one's loathin' it
Yea, you started out wit nothin, and...
.............................................. you still got most of it!!!

vs.

Weak when ya post up, i’ll crack ya ankles, I got sick skills with no cure
Cuz on the court, Iraq up the points while your just part of their culture
LOL @ msn, “Soc was dissing me in LL, Jack what do I do!?”
The kid really can’t take a joke, unless it’s from a site or two
Kid always beggs me to drop feed on his songs, but the truth...
I think his audios are the perfect things... not to listen too
The kid wants to make a splash, so i’ll throw his ass off a bridge
Cuz Spul israeli wack… and I aint talking ‘bout his heritage

Well JTR had better structure in his verse, but SPuL had the vocab like whoa! I mean for real, dude used "premature" and "ramadan" both in the same line! Got damn this was close yo!

(Good battle kids, I'd say RTF but I don't got shit to RTF on.)

Voted For: Jack The Ripper

I regret to inform that I smash you & got your boys haltin’
Cuz how is Spul gonna face me, when his whole city is Bolton?
We all hate you, get disowned, abandoned, left as a bum
And RV can’t help but desert you… it’s where you came from
Weak when ya post up, i’ll crack ya ankles, I got sick skills with no cure
Cuz on the court, Iraq up the points while your just part of their culture
Get fucking owned, Jack The Ripper.. infamous for killing hoes
Have ya corpse with a popped trunk, & I aint referring to your nose
Kid always beggs me to drop feed on his songs, but the truth...
I think his audios are the perfect things... not to listen too
The kid wants to make a splash, so i’ll throw his ass off a bridge
Cuz Spul israeli wack… and I aint talking ‘bout his heritage

vs

I'ma re-kill Jack the Ripper, hope it don't go causin' riots
Man, you gon be losin', weight, but I ain't say you gonna dieyet
You're a drunk, and you're stupid, and you try to be a G
The only 4.0 you got in school.....
.................................................. ... was your B.A.C!!
Your pic proves light's faster then sound, man, cuz you're weak
Cuz you looked really bright... untill you started to speak
You think you're full of talent, man, but no one's loathin' it
Yea, you started out wit nothin, and...
.............................................. you still got most of it!!!

uhhm, roughly what i saw/the lines that i laughed at.......i think jack came more consistent with punches, didn't like a few of spuls, they seemed blahh or played, although jack had a few of those too, like the weakest link line :thumbdown:

anyways, i enjoyed this, good battle ya hear, keep up to both

v/jack the ripper