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NiggaPlease vs batman
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 ko 4-1 ko Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-02-05 at 12:08 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Batman has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 12:18 AM.
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yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please
you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood this might be added to your record but its still another loss man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt please nigga u cant measure up to me son i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun* explanations:*larry the cable guy is comedian who always says git-r-dun |
NiggaPlease has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 12:28 AM.
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On this site hes a herb he calls him self bat man But behind his computer screen hes really a fat man My lyrical flowz will bust ya head nuff said This nigga couldnt winna battle even if he bit the frontlines thread They talkin bout this cat sayin he whack well its true Cuz even ciarra got bigga goodies than you In this thread he will be known for the l This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell Its too late, past the time to elevate He needa new name Time for his comp to regenerate All his power his skill is undefined Whats up wit that name? what goes on in ur mind |
keep in mind that i do topicals...........uppin for votes
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uppin 4 votes in herr bitches...holla back at shya boy...peace
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Voted For: NiggaPlease
this has got to be one of the weakest battles i have ever seen both had fucked up structures, weak assed punches, but niggaplease was betta "In this thread he will be known for the l This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell" thats the line that saved your ass this vote goes 2 niggaplease Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for NiggaPlease
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This was feedback posted for Batman
props ur getting better hit me up on aim...........
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Voted For: Batman
On this site hes a herb he calls him self bat man But behind his computer screen hes really a fat man wack My lyrical flowz will bust ya head nuff said This nigga couldnt winna battle even if he bit the frontlines thread wtf They talkin bout this cat sayin he whack well its true Cuz even ciarra got bigga goodies than you woteva bullshit In this thread he will be known for the l This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell known for the l???? Its too late, past the time to elevate He needa new name Time for his comp to regenerate alright All his power his skill is undefined Whats up wit that name? what goes on in ur mind fuckin shit yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees aight all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood nah this might be added to your record but its still another loss man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss its aight i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt lol please nigga u cant measure up to me son i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun* aight...you seemed to put more efort in betta shit vote-batman Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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checkin wots up and down..........................
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yo wtf happend to the votes dawg???...thats bullshit
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This was feedback posted for NiggaPlease
Batman
yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees No all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood No this might be added to your record but its still another loss man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss Wack i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt No please nigga u cant measure up to me son i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun* Wack!! Elevate on punches persoanls wordplay an flow. Use multis an metaphors too. Your whole verse was self glory. Boring to read NiggaPlease On this site hes a herb he calls him self bat man But behind his computer screen hes really a fat man ok My lyrical flowz will bust ya head nuff said This nigga couldnt winna battle even if he bit the frontlines thread okay They talkin bout this cat sayin he whack well its true Cuz even ciarra got bigga goodies than you HAHAHa ok In this thread he will be known for the l This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell played Its too late, past the time to elevate He needa new name Time for his comp to regenerate Good All his power his skill is undefined Whats up wit that name? what goes on in ur mind No This was an okay verse. Ive seen better from you. Punches were okay. You had one that was played out but thats cool. You could use more multis. I liked the structure an flow.... Keep it up.. BreakDown Punches- NiggaPlease Personals- NiggaPlease Flow-NiggaPlease Strucutre- Tie Complexity- Tie Creativity- NiggaPlease v/ NiggaPlease for the reasons above. I am in his crew so this is only feedback... |
lol thanks good looks.....still uppin for HONEST VOTES.......WITH correct amount of feed
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yo unf is ur crew leader..........and it wasnt explained welll........still uppin fa votes
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Voted For: NiggaPlease
punches are more solid than your opponents. Rhymes have more versatilty and tech in them. Personls arent too strong but do come apprarent in spots. could of been more solid with metaphors and such thru it. But over all you dropped more solid than your opponent. |
thanks man appreciate it :thumbup: uppin to the top!
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Voted For: NiggaPlease
VOTE:NiggaPlease!!! OKAY, BREAKIN THIS DOWN...BATMANS VERSES ARE EXTREMELY CHILDISH...NO KINDA HATE BRO, HE JUST RHYMES SENTENCES...BUT I WILL SAY HIS OPENER WAS OKAY...BUT HE KINDA LOST ME AROUND THE END OF THE SECOND BAR...CHEESY LINES NO REAL GUT-PUNCHING PUNCH LINES...AND NIGGA PLEASE, TO ME I DONT THINK IT WAS YOUR BEST BUT HIS STRUCTURE WAS BETTER AND HAD PUNCHES THAT "MADE SENSE"...NO REAL HARD PUNCHES BUT ENOUGH FOR THE WIN...THEY BOTH HAD A FEW PERSONALS, ABOUT EVEN IN THAT DEPARTMENT...NEITHER VERSE WAS "KILLER SHIT" BUT NIGGA PLEASE HAD ENOUGH FOR THE WIN... |
^thanks man appreciate the vote.....uppin for more votes ya'll
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Voted For: NiggaPlease
NiggaPlease On this site hes a herb he calls him self bat man But behind his computer screen hes really a fat man ^made me chuckle, not creative, still funny though 7/10 My lyrical flowz will bust ya head nuff said This nigga couldnt winna battle even if he bit the frontlines thread ^first line self-glorifying, second was good one 6/10 They talkin bout this cat sayin he whack well its true Cuz even ciarra got bigga goodies than you ^haha, laughed at the last line 7/10 In this thread he will be known for the l This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell ^coo punch, solid stuff 8/10 Its too late, past the time to elevate He needa new name Time for his comp to regenerate ^again aight shit 6/10 All his power his skill is undefined Whats up wit that name? what goes on in ur mind ^coo closer 5/10 Total: 39/60 = 65%, work on more creative and hardhitting punches, more complexity in your verse Batman yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees ^uhm no at second line, first one was decent 6/10 all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood ^ uhm where is the punch? nowhere! 0/10 this might be added to your record but its still another loss man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss ^aight shit right here, decent punch 6/10 i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt ^coo punch with personal touch 7/10 please nigga u cant measure up to me son i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun* ^coo wordplay, decent stuff 5/10 Total: 24/50 = 48%, get more punches in your stuff, better wordplay, more creative things and overall way more punches! |
Voted For: NiggaPlease
IP: yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees ^^^decent enuff, wit nameplay n shit all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood ^^wack, u jus dissed urself with that line! i mean theres no punch whatsoever! this might be added to your record but its still another loss man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss ^^^First line didnt make much sense and the second line is played and wack. i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt ^^^c'mon man, there are no punches here whatsoever, its all self glory! please nigga u cant measure up to me son i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun* ^^iunno bout this, didnt really get it to be honest. no hate at all, but when ur battling try to use nameplay and actually try to diss ur opponent, there shuld be a punchline in every bar. IP: On this site hes a herb he calls him self bat man But behind his computer screen hes really a fat man ^^^ok, not the best but theres a diss there lol My lyrical flowz will bust ya head nuff said This nigga couldnt winna battle even if he bit the frontlines thread ^^^yeah i liked this one. again theres a decent punch They talkin bout this cat sayin he whack well its true Cuz even ciarra got bigga goodies than you ^^lol dissin him and ciara! humour is always good in a battle. In this thread he will be known for the l This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell ^^hell lines r played so u havta come extra original to pull them off, nice try tho. Its too late, past the time to elevate He needa new name Time for his comp to regenerate ^^^meh All his power his skill is undefined Whats up wit that name? what goes on in ur mind ^^dont really like this closer cuz theres not really a punch ya no.. Niggaplease wins because he actually has punches in his verse, some good, some not so good, but he definitely takes the win here, no hate! :D v/niggaplease |
Voted For: NiggaPlease
man i aint gunna vote coz both you came weak. but big up nigga please for his battle with fraud, 10 -40 lines.thats gangster.....hope you drop better than this...... good luck to both y'all |
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