-UNF- vs T-Hook
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-31-05 at 01:37 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

T-Hook has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 01:38 PM.

-UNF- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 01:50 PM.

You Bitches are Chic Made,
i'm Quick with my fist in the switchblade,
get brave, or get a clip in your ribcage,
that's what'll happen u act dumb,
silencers on the gat make it sound like a cap gun,
i'm from where they bump heat,
dudes that want beef,
can smack with the 2 remove all there front teeth,
it aint difficuilt,
the pistol will cripple u,
to see it clap,
push your head back,
like mystikal,
u gotta earn ur respect,
u gettin robbed get a job,
and earn u a check,
u heard that im nice,
i spit the most obsurd issue u heard in ur life,
hears a word of advice,
that u shud listen to,
if u get offended we probly dissin u,
ive been blessed with a flow, spittin ever since,
some say im conceded, nah im just convinced,
im not tryin to be a hater, i say what i think,
but i heard better punchlines at the prom waiting for drinks,
i spit flames, leave you burning in hell,
helpless in battle picture bow-wow smokin the L,
im on fire so you know were smoking blunts,
this aint chicken pox, no u can catch it more than once,

w.e fool your whack you got potential but you need to elevate One. upping

i drop the bomb like taliban
upping bitches

nah...thats jus basic read ma shit check the punches n the wordplay then go over yours :/ u see yours needs elevation and mine dont..but i didnt really try against you so meh....

This was feedback posted for -UNF-
 

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upp diggity,.......................................... .......

Voted For: -UNF-

yo this is an iight battle but nuthin great...obliviously -UNF- got it cuz he had some nice punches...he took it easlily...nice verse t-hook but i gotta give it to unf...BELIEVE-YA-ASS-IS-BASSIN' To Think You Next To Me Or EVEN-HALF-ADJACENT; Cuz The Only People Screamin "FUCK -UNF-!!" Is Successful REHAB-PATIENTS!!//<that right there is what sealed tha deal in this shit right herr mayne...no hate t-hook...holla back at shya boy

upping,........................................... ............

Voted For: -UNF-

to be honest....this is kinda a one side vote....no hate though..

T hook....u had some decent punches but u need elevation in your game son...u used some kiddie words like...chicken pox...spittin...and dissin....i just didnt quite feel u get there....but if ya elevate ya game son...you'll proolly be good

-unf-...good flow and structure...u kept with the flow and originality was d0pe...punches were very nice and also decent....vocab skills were great

v/ -UNF-


nice battle yo

Voted For: -UNF-

i aint gunna give a decent vote coz hook didnt give a decent verse ..its as simple as that.......
cancel this if you want mod's....but if you read the verse's you'll understand why!.....

Voted For: -UNF-

T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot.

Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse.
T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot.

Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse.

T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot.

Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse.
T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot.

Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse.
Rtf below or this vote will be removed in 3 days :thumbup:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206352

ooh...my fault..copied n pasted it 3 times...LOL...

rofl........................but anyway upping............................................ .................................................. ...

BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP IT UP lol sorry........................

Voted For: -UNF-

Ayo, Ya Twice Before.. Been TORN-AND-RAPED, So Mind YOUR-DAMN-FACE! Cuz -UNF- Be "Droppin Disciples" Like "Vice LORD-HAND-SHAKES"*!!//
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Lol good opener UNF but watch the structure dawg....

You'll Get'cha Brain & FACE-MAULED, Ass Fucked With BLADES-RAW, Grenades & CHAIN-SAWS! I'll Have You "Throwin In The Towel" Like "Proky BASE-BALL"!!!//
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Lmao.......yo man that was sum sick lines, the structure is summing you really need to work on..but the thing is you have the multies here so structure is not that imp

BELIEVE-YA-ASS-IS-BASSIN' To Think You Next To Me Or EVEN-HALF-ADJACENT; Cuz The Only People Screamin "FUCK -UNF-!!" Is Successful REHAB-PATIENTS!!//
^^^^^
Ok that was good good wordplay....good multies again


You Know Me I Left ABUSED-IN-TIGHT-SPITS, You Tellin WHO-TO-BATTLE-BITCH?!? Shit, Even When You Hiding "Copyin Punchlines" This Kat Fails To CHOOSE-THE-"RIGHT-CLIQUE"!//
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Best line right here, great wordplay, great multies, super flow, jus great


Now You FOUND-DEFEAT, I'll Out RHYME-A-THOUSAND-TEAMS For POUNDS-OF-GREEN While This Kid Is Hiding... Only Seen "Flossin" Cuz He Can't Keep My "LINES-OUT-HIS-TEETH"*!!//...
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Lol decent puch fuckd structure but decent punch...good verse

Yo man T-Hook, you are a newb and was expecting youre verse to be like that, the structure is messed, use multies and wordplay to hypen the verse and not talk about yourself concentrate on ure oponent, I give this one to UNF

Flow: UNF
Structure: None
Multies UNF
Wordplay: UNF
Punches: UNF