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fraud vs Vaskez
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6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Biting No bullshit Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 08-29-05 at 11:39 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
fraud has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-05 11:12 AM.
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Vaskez has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-05 11:15 AM.
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The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting* vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin' Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it blah... |
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Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack You gettin turned into a pin... ................................is the only time you successfully a-tack I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse N' it might seem like good in-tent... .............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house" Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin' Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon IF YA DON'T GET THE WORDPLAY, DON'T VOTE I don't know the quality of voting around here, so: fraudulent = fraud you lent (as in you lent out your lyrics but didn't earn/get interest from anyone) you should get it intent = in tent i.e. in a tent as opposed to in da house the rest should be obvious, ask if ya don't get |
Yo let's get some votes. Leave a link I'll vote on your battle if you vote honestly and fairly
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Voted For: Vaskez
The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter 2....not a punch...self glorifing Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline 4....played out concept...... u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting* vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em 3....horrible punch vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin' Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it 3.....omg....u serious? Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack You gettin turned into a pin... ................................is the only time you successfully a-tack 5...ok wordplay I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it 7.....good punch and a good set-up along with it My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse N' it might seem like good in-tent... .............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house" 6....good wordplay in punch..but set-up was gay Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin' Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon 5...ok well..this was really one-sided.Fraud.That 1st bar with the bread and butter...not a punch..that's self-glorifing.That trampoline line was a played concept.Plus it had filler with that pointless original part.And the rash/trowin rocks lines...weak. Vote-Vaskez Rtf below in 3 days or this vote will be removed :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206520 |
Peace, hope y'all getting the forté line (it's forté not fort ;) ) up
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Voted For: Vaskez
Vaskez, nice verse...good wordplay and punchlines were aiight. fraud, u need alot of work on ur flow dude...i cant catch it at all. v/vaskez RtF...if possible...battles are in my sig~~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
links have been voted on. uppin
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Voted For: Vaskez
The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter Wordplay was alright here actually, not a good punch though Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline Stretched and I didn't like it u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting* vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em Not bad, bit of a played concept though vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin' Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it Not bad, best line of your verse Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack You gettin turned into a pin... ................................is the only time you successfully a-tack Yeah I liked this, nice wordplay, you should take the ...'s out though, cos they make it seem stretched I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it Not bad, decent homonym My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse N' it might seem like good in-tent... .............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house" Pretty nice, original concept and worded well, same about the ...'s though Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin' Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon Decent again, good closer Vaskez got this pretty easily, was better in every category and had nice concepts and punches. v/ Vaskez Fraud, could you drop a vote in my battle please: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206973 |
up biatches!.....
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up man votes keep getting DQ'd - vote properly !!!
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ead.php?t=20697
Fraud, vote on the battle, thanks. |
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vote bitches...
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This was feedback posted for Vaskez
This was an alright battle but my boi Vask killed it
plan and simple,... Punches, wordplay flow all killed it. Fraud come alright flowed well at times but could use a little improvement but it was a decent verse. Stay up both 1~ |
Voted For: Vaskez
Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack You gettin turned into a pin... ................................is the only time you successfully a-tack 5...ok concept to use for a punch, but you cud've worded it a lot better. I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it 5...decent bit of wordplay, but the punch was merely average. My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse N' it might seem like good in-tent... .............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house" 6...LMAO!! i liked how you flipped this shit and it made me laugh a little. Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin' Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon 5...meh, just an average punch here. OVERALL: 21/40 The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter 3...meh, where's the punch, just statements here about ureself. Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline 4...an actual punch just about, but still wack. u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting* vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em 4...again, a punch but you need to word shit better for a better affect. vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin' Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it 4...ok concept, not worded the best though and cud've been a whole lot bette. OVERALL: 15/40 V/ - Vaskez ....he had a far more consistent verse with harder hitting punches, although only one was really any good, the rest were just average and shit. |
Voted For: Vaskez
Vaskez Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack You gettin turned into a pin... ................................is the only time you successfully a-tack ^^^DECENT OPENER I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it ^^O.K My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse N' it might seem like good in-tent... .............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house" ^^HA HA GOOD 1 Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin' Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon ^^DECENT CLOSURE VASKEZ- yo verse wuz decent. U had some personals n punches in dere dat wuz pretty good. U had a few strtched lines which i didnt like. U also need ta work on ya structure n datz about all. Good Average Verse 8/10 FRAUD The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter ^^WACK Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline ^^^MEH u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting* vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em ^^^MEH vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin' Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it ^^O.K Fraud- yo verse wuz weak man. Da opener wuz wack as hell. I mean bread n butter, come on u can do betta den dat. U had very little punches, most of yo shit talked about guns n clappin n killin, n im pretty sure u've done none of the above or even tote a gun. In batttlin u supposed ta diss ya opponent the only decent line wuz your closure. Yo have much room for improvement. You must elevate more n work on your personals n punches. Structure wuz str8 doe. pretty below average verse 6/10 Weak battle but in the end ima have ta go wit Vaskez for mo punches n personals and comin harder V/Vaskez cud u plz rtf on mah battle w/ an honest vote http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207401 ^^it wud be appreciated nahmean |
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Voted For: fraud
eh.....damn wtf is up wit yall strechin tha shyt outa yall lines nyway battle was ish butfraud came harder......punches werent all that good ut they were beter tan vaskezs v/fraud Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: fraud
Vaskez Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack You gettin turned into a pin... ................................is the only time you successfully a-tack ^Good wordplay, good diss nice opener 5/10^ I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it ^Good vocab, weak punch 3/10^ My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse N' it might seem like good in-tent... .............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house" ^Lol....nice punch nice wordplay 6/10^ Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin' Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon ^ok closer, kinda weak but good enought 4/10^ Overall:Ur verse contained nice wordplay that caught my eye, ur verse was filled with good creativity...ur punches were in the middle...none too hard hitting nor soft hitting.Ur Personals were there along with ur vocab im feeling ur verse 6/10 Fraud The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter ^Weak punch, lame wordplay...not feelin it 0/10^ Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline ^ehh, ok wordplay...bad flow and structure....4/10^ u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting* vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em ^ehh, not feelin this...honestly weak punch 2/10^ vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin' Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it ^Good closer, good wordplay probally best line 6/10^ Overall:Ur verse was not really that good, u lacked hard hitting punches....ur personals just werent there for me man, ur vocab was low...had only a couple strong vocabulary words...i felt ur wordplay was easy and played.....not fealin that....no hate man, ur verse 4/10^ v/vaskez rtf on 1 of these links, since i kindly analyzed ur whole battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206261 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206909 Vote switched: http://community.rapverse.com/showp...&postcount=1607 |
YO, i meant to vote for fraud...ill get that changed up
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This was feedback posted for Vaskez
Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin... ................................is the only time you successfully a-tack iight opener and nice punch and wordlay^ I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it it was iight but wasnt feelin too much but still nice My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse N' it might seem like good in-tent... .............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house" iight punch nothin special^ Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin' Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon i like tha wordplay,nice closer...good job^ The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter ^this wasnt a great opener and a bad attempt,not good Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline ^iight punch but u stretched tha line too much and u shouldnt have went from craters to trampolinez,wut waz tha thing about for crater?...iight but nuthin special u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting* vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em ^ horrible attempt at a punch,linez were too stretched vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin' Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it ^bad closer not that great of a punch Fraud-work on structure and punches and personals...also multiez and metafors...jus elevate and you'll git better...work at it vaskez-it was iight but u should jus elevate a little...u dont need topo much work nice job both of u... jus work on it and git better...i cant vote yet so im jus breakin it down into feeback...holla at shya boy |
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