Suicidal Tendencies
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206097
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206638


I dont have audio capabilities anymore so since I'm new here I'll drop my old audios


I wrote this as if I was somebody who was feeling suicidal
no I'm not suicidal, it's just a topic my boy threw at me
and didn't think I could make a track out of

http://www.soundclick.com/demonicstorm

Or so you know beforehand, my stage name is Lioness

the song might not be cleared yet, I just uploaded it to this new SC
I forgot the password to my other one but it's cool
cause I got all my tracks on my dmusic page

so if it's not loading just give it a moment, Soundclick be tweeking like that

it's worth a listen


-edited to say-
p.s. I know the vocals are low, I did it like that on purpose
adding slight dramatics to the track


-Storm

damn, no love huh?

All good




-Storm

mite as well show sum love...

kinda a slow flow, should have the vocals turned a lil louder, an okay voice, original, im gettin more into it as it goes along... wait, r u a gurl? dunno y i didnt notice b4 but yea, for a femcee this is reaaaalll illness, but yea, nyce ending

Yea, I'm a female
hence the "SuperBitch" emblem in my sig


For the topic and that beat, that was the only flow that worked
when I drop my other tracks you'll see how I get down

appreciate the love
thought you was gonna be on some hate shit cause I was fucking with you in the beef thread





-Storm

Listenign through some better thna average home entertainment speakers.

The beat choice is dead on the money. fits perfect. The lyrics are dead on the bucks anth the emotion is perfect. The flow is on and I can tell you aint' one of these mofos that started rappin on the internet - instead you rapped wher rap begins. It's a hot-ass track yo and excells at what it's meant for. It's definitely some real talk and anyone who been there wil lbe able to connect with it REAL fast. My only gripe is that your vocals need some compression on em to level out the volume, then some EQing to lift em off of the beat, maybe turn down the reverb a little and make em pop up off the inst. Other than that yo, I liked it.

thanks @ Dooms


but I did the vocals like that on purpose
I wanted my voice to mesh with the beat

wanted to give it that "voice" inside of your head feel to it
like it wasn't me spitting it was just a voice you heard in your head when you heard the beat

appreciate the love




-Storm

yeah, I can feel that - sorta liek beans did on the beat on dynasty, but in this case, it felt to me like it melted too far into it sometimes, like I couldn't discern lyrics from beat. But maybe it's just me. Good work on the track. Uno.

I feel you

anyway it goes, still appreciate the feed





-Storm

No problem. Damn, why the hell you seem so familliar to me...

if you was ever on UF, you might know me

but outside of that I have no clue





-Storm

Nah I wasn't on UF that I can remember. Ah, maybe it's nothing. peace.

I love this beat, you need to boost your vocals and if you don't have a mic pre-amp then when you mix your tracks slide your vocal ontop of eachother

Your flow is nice, quality sucks but mines do to

Your emotion is nice,lyrics are nice too,
I definantly can relate to most of your shit,
Delivery is nice, and presence isn't good because of your quality

good track

yea i remember hearing this on uf..nice delivery great presence...emotion was great..lyrics hittin hard beat iz sick indeed..I remember this song way back tho from another site forgot which one tho..

I did the vocals like that on purpose (yet again) @ Trem



@ I Daughter, probably HHI or Audioholics before either site shut down

the only other site I've dropped my audios




thanks for the feed



-Storm

Good shit, flow wasn't fucked up and choppy, dropped ill.

GOOD SHIT, B.

Good to see some new mcs on here, especially a femcee.....

If you ask me, youre ability is better than most of the mcs on here......I like your style....

Your flow is on point, and your emotion shows that your comfortable with how you deliver it.....

Your only draw back is your quality, but that can be easily fixed.....

We NEED to collab, seriously......

WTaylor05
get at me on aim

wanna check my music, look in my sig........

I cant wait to see what they say when you drop that "Hard Shit (Grinding Freestyle)" or that freestyle you did over that Jay-Z beat.


My cuzzo got flow and to think these are her old joints, wish yall could hear her now. Whew!

I'ma drop "Hova Song Freestyle" after I drop "Victim Of The Ghetto Freestyle"
then I might drop Hard Shit, but I dont think to many people ready for a bitch like me spitting like that




-Storm

No many are not, but i will be glad to critique if you want......you still didnt answer my question if you wanted to collab on a track........

I dont have audio capabilities anymore

all I'm doing is dropping old tracks (deja-vu, didn't I say that already)


which is why I didn't answer, you said get at you if I was down
I'm not

not by choice, I probably would've got down with you on a track
just aint capable of doing it right now

and I doubt I'll do anything for the net now that I'm actually in a real studio

thanks for the offer though





-Storm

ight thats coo, but if you ever get time, let me know........