Daubs vs Kon.Tay.Juz
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit

Min check n drop.

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 08-30-05 at 10:27 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.


Closed - Expired / old battle win


Reopen requested by Daubs on 10/16

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-05 09:59 PM.

Kon.Tay.Juz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-05 10:00 PM.

Sorry for coming weakish, its 3 am here..keyed.


You wouldnt be Kon.Tay.Juz...if you were taken ill with chicken-pox..
And your punches are packed with pussy....like watchin a kitten box..
The DieNasty? thats so bad...infact i doubt i ever saw a gayer crew..
I even placed a notepad over bens eyes...Jus to give him paper view!! (pay per view)
Your american man,..you would still be fat, even by steadily eating..
And why do i need to hand you the loss..when your IPs already bleetin!!* (beaten)

*His IP begins with BA > sheep baaaa > bleeting, get it?

Dont get the wordplay/punches, pm me or dont vote.

Will RTF

Daubs Stays on my dick...Fuck textin'..this niggaz spittin "Key Sex"..
Ya names similar to your Bars.....after the 3rd letter, Ya Shits BS..
This Niggas Really E-thuggin..I mean..his brain must be off it's ringer..
Cuz Wen It Comes to Rv Beef..this Fag signs on with a magnum on his finger..
Stop Son...Your fuckin wack...........Daubs is a fuckin' losin' junky..
All he does is battle herbs...that's why i saw him in the Bush with them Monkeys..

Last line peep sig

lol, nice man.

good luck.

Now im goin fuckin bed.
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jea u too....easy famz....good ish.......................

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

checkin pollz .

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

daubs:
You wouldnt be Kon.Tay.Juz...if you were taken ill with chicken-pox..
And your punches are packed with pussy....like watchin a kitten box..
^^^^DECENT OPENER
The DieNasty? thats so bad...infact i doubt i ever saw a gayer crew..
I even placed a notepad over bens eyes...Jus to give him paper view!! (pay per view)
^^^DOPE...
Your american man,..you would still be fat, even by steadily eating..
And why do i need to hand you the loss..when your IPs already bleetin!!*
^^^^VERY WEAK CLOSER

kon.tay.juz:
Daubs Stays on my dick...Fuck textin'..this niggaz spittin "Key Sex"..
Ya names similar to your Bars.....after the 3rd letter, Ya Shits BS..
^^^^LMAOOO...HOTT OPENER/PERSONAL HIS BARS R REALLY BS
This Niggas Really E-thuggin..I mean..his brain must be off it's ringer..
Cuz Wen It Comes to Rv Beef..this Fag signs on with a magnum on his finger..
^^^DECENT
Stop Son...Your fuckin wack...........Daubs is a fuckin' losin' junky..
All he does is battle herbs...that's why i saw him in the Bush with them monkeys..
^^^PROBLY CHANGED HIS SIG...U KNOW HOW NIGGAZ DO DAT AFTA U DIS THEY SHIT


V/KON...HE ACTUALLY HAD A PERSONAL WHICH I THINK IS 1 OF DA MOST IMPORTANT CATAGORIES IN A BATTLE...AND DAUBS CAME CREATIVE BUT THEY WERE ALL GENERIC

1-0 me.,......uppin this ish

and the magnum on finger line basically means...daubss puts a magnum condom on his finger for protection.

get at me

nice drop....I'd say you took this fam..................

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

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Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Daubs
You wouldnt be Kon.Tay.Juz...if you were taken ill with chicken-pox..
And your punches are packed with pussy....like watchin a kitten box..
Set up isn't too creative, the punch is ok.
The DieNasty? thats so bad...infact i doubt i ever saw a gayer crew..
I even placed a notepad over bens eyes...Jus to give him paper view!!
Wordplay is blah, and the punch isn't that good.
Your american man,..you would still be fat, even by steadily eating..
And why do i need to hand you the loss..when your IPs already bleetin!!*
Wordplay is eh, punch concept isn't too creative, and set up is bad.

Overall, you had some good concepts, but your wording needs to be improved.

Kon.Tay.Juz

Daubs Stays on my dick...Fuck textin'..this niggaz spittin "Key Sex"..
Ya names similar to your Bars.....after the 3rd letter, Ya Shits BS..
Ok concept. Set up is bad though.
This Niggas Really E-thuggin..I mean..his brain must be off it's ringer..
Cuz Wen It Comes to Rv Beef..this Fag signs on with a magnum on his finger..
Lol, nice punchline.
Stop Son...Your fuckin wack...........Daubs is a fuckin' losin' junky..
All he does is battle herbs...that's why i saw him in the Bush with them Monkeys..
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Overall, work on your set ups.

My vote goes Kon for a good punch. Daubs had more, but quality > quantity. No hate Daubs. I still love you. :love:

v- Kon

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Voted For: Daubs

You wouldnt be Kon.Tay.Juz...if you were taken ill with chicken-pox..
And your punches are packed with pussy....like watchin a kitten box..
...lol..nice... 6.5/10
The DieNasty? thats so bad...infact i doubt i ever saw a gayer crew..
I even placed a notepad over bens eyes...Jus to give him paper view!! (pay per view)
...lol...funny shit... 6.5/10
Your american man,..you would still be fat, even by steadily eating..
And why do i need to hand you the loss..when your IPs already bleetin!!* (beaten)
ok nice closer 6.0/10..

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Daubs Stays on my dick...Fuck textin'..this niggaz spittin "Key Sex"..
Ya names similar to your Bars.....after the 3rd letter, Ya Shits BS..
aight nice.... 5.0/10
This Niggas Really E-thuggin..I mean..his brain must be off it's ringer..
Cuz Wen It Comes to Rv Beef..this Fag signs on with a magnum on his finger..
aight.... 4.5/10
Stop Son...Your fuckin wack...........Daubs is a fuckin' losin' junky..
All he does is battle herbs...that's why i saw him in the Bush with them Monkeys..
...lol...funny...good closer.. 7.5/10

17/30-kontayjuz
19/30-daubs

close battle here but i think daubs still came harder w/ his punches were more hard hittin...but the only thing is that there were no personals, no wordplays or any attempts at them...kon did have him by having that opener..so kinda of a tie battle...but im still gon go off the odds and go for daubs....for the punches that were hittin harder....
v/daubs....

no hate though it was a tough battle and very close...
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RTV..HONESTLY IN MY SIG BEFORE 9/11/05...OR VOTE GETS DQued....

9/11 how ironic................................lol

safe.

worddddd........................uppppin this battle..........

will rtf later, up...................................

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This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

checking the polls in this........................

uppin this battle....i will return da fav..............

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shit takes ages man.................

uppin this ma fuckin battle.
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you slow twats are gay...
...voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

This was feedback posted for Kon.Tay.Juz
 

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uppin this again...............

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This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

Daubs Stays on my dick...Fuck textin'..this niggaz spittin "Key Sex"..
Ya names similar to your Bars.....after the 3rd letter, Ya Shits BS..

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You wouldnt be Kon.Tay.Juz...if you were taken ill with chicken-pox..
And your punches are packed with pussy....like watchin a kitten box

lol...tied, i can't pick niether.

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how come nobody is voting on this fuckin shit.......

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

ok both were kinda played btu kon had a little bit of creativity i like ur opener with the nameplay bs line pretty good lol like the magunum line lmao last bar not sure if he changed his sig? or if its a fake personal?
ok daubs this is the worst ive ever seen from u what happened?
first bar that line is played against him
2nd bar pretty good crew line was bad all filler though
3rd bar u have wordplay but not a good personal really lol
overal ok battle please rtf on one of these
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uppin this battle famz.................................

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Daubs
You use a normal style of punches, really basic style. I didn't even see much personals in there. the flow was cool but really you need to hit harder wit personls man, get at em harder, twist words more. some of your lines were alright but just not feelin em like you tried hard or anything, you should try harder man.

Kon
yours aint much better I used to read your shit and be like damn but you kinda seem weaker now lol, but I still think you got this, not much personals used in your verse either but I still feel you used his name more instead of being self glorified so much, and you even twisted words in a complex way. overall I think you got it Kon

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